Honkai: Star Rail: I Develop the Star Rail Mobile Game at the Company

It looks good, but pay attention to the number of players, viewers, etc., Try to set it as high as possible, tens of billions, hundreds of billions, everything is considered small, this is the entire universe.

This is a very good novel, but the only flaw is that the author is a steamroller that suppresses the development of the protagonist. For example, is it reasonable for only a few million people in the universe to play the game? I strongly recommend the author to add 100 million. I suspect that those who leave negative reviews are because the author is a steamroller. The writing by the dick author is pretty good, but the author has no view of the universe at all. He has to write about the number of people in the game on Earth, and there aren't many protagonists in the later stage, so why can't he add more? Will you die if you add a little? For example, the author said that the popularity spread throughout the game area, and then it only increased by a few hundred thousand, right? Not to mention that this is the universe, even if you leave aside those who have never been out of the stars, there is still an immortal boat. Are there tens of billions of people in an immortal boat eaten by you? And you can see the fairy boat in the subtitles. What does this mean? This shows that the author of this dick did not have a protagonist role in the later period, but he still had to suppress it. I felt very uncomfortable watching this author, so I gave it two stars.

I really like this book and gave it a five-star review.

Uaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! ! ! ! I really like it! Many of the novels about game production or movie viewing videos that I found did not include Beng Tiewan. Instead, they included harem novels with poor writing skills and brainless YY female characters, or they just briefly mentioned that the focus was entirely on Genshin Impact. My wife looks at me ฅ(*°ω°*ฅ)*. I hope my wife can keep writing, and I'll make an update by the way.

It's very beautiful, similar to the Memory Star God, recording history, but I have a question, why didn't the Memory Star God give him a blessing?

The content is good, and things in the plot are quite restored. However, for some players who have done the plot, it is equivalent to going through the plot all over again. It may be a bit boring, and the male protagonist has too few roles. It can even be said that it has no effect other than making the game. Overall, it is good.

Good to watch, recommended. There is no heroine and no ambiguous characters. It mainly works in the later stages, and there will be cooperation. It is more logical, and the characters are not very OOC. The plot description is also relatively detailed, and there is no single stroke. When the game was developed, the Trail Blazers were almost at Pinoconi. At present, the progress of the Trail Blazers is the same as that of the Trail Blazers. It is similar to live broadcast in the form of playing games. After the game plot exposes some things, the characters will find a way instead of doing nothing. Recommended To add, there was a slight problem with the logic at the beginning, but later it was found that the problem was corrected. In the previous plot, the number of people playing the game was only a few hundred thousand, but many characters knew it, which was a bit illogical. However, the author later found that many people said that this problem was corrected, and there were no subsequent problems.

Although it is a behind-the-scenes stream, it is not true that there is nothing outside the game. Now the novel is followed by a replay of the game plot. It does not feel like it is a novel at all. At least there is a branch line other than the replay of the game so that the novel does not feel like a repeater. For example, after watching the plot, a Star Citizen goes outside the current network to show off that they have a game with Star God xxx in reality, attracting them to act as a new audience, and letting them post comments and ask questions, or insert a protagonist who is on vacation in Pinoconi, see the sword in the sky of Huangquan, sigh about the command's combat power, and then immediately return to the game plot; you can also look at the Black Tower Rare Objects, so that the protagonist or "iron" after reading this paragraph You can even use the rare object that tells a joke, and even allow the protagonist to obtain a practical rare object (which can be obtained by the system); you can also install the in-game activity mini-game offline for the protagonist to play in a group or with other Star Citizens, and add a screen to match people in the game with real objects in a long-distance offline pure hand speed competition (such as an origami bird materialized through black technology). You can only use a short paragraph to describe it, just to have a transition. I think now that there is Ompharos, the protagonist can let the people in Collapse of the Earth 3 play this game through dreams or other people (such as the Remembrancer), so that they can take a good look at what Walter has done outside and how he is doing. The new story can also let the "Rakshasa" show his face in front of her, and casually recall the paradise of the past, and they It doesn't matter if you can't connect to the Internet and can't speak. Anyway, you can play games wherever there is a system, or you can just watch the anchor play. In this way, you can cut here when you want to transition. You don't need to know too much about the plot of Honkai Impact here, just look at the settings at the beginning of the second part of Honkai Impact (such as Kiana playing on the moon, Bronya playing on the phone at work, and Mei Barabala playing on the phone). Of course it's just a suggestion,

8.5 Points, the question type is novel, and it is interesting in the early stage. Later, the plot becomes similar to traveling to other parallel worlds to play games. Then traveling to the world of Star Dome Railway is not much different from traveling to other worlds. There is no other special self-created plot in Star Dome. I just follow the Star Dome plot, and I don't have much expectations in the later stage.

First of all, author I like you... (I wrote the following words from a personal perspective and tone, please don't criticize me if you don't like it) The following text: The writing is delicate, the characters are well described, the plot is coherent, and the readers' suggestions are listened to very much (not that authors who follow their own ideas are not good). This is very worthy of recognition. Every small detail is very heartwarming (such as Ying Xing's meeting with his master). The daily cheerful rhythm also makes some of our players' dreams come true (borrowing a comment from a book friend: "This is the meaning of fan fiction. If you just follow the plot blindly, you might as well go through it again yourself") I felt deeply, and I smiled knowingly while reading the book; however, the plot pace is too fast, and the progress of the game and the world in the article are too fast. I am curious about how the author solves this problem (it can't be delayed [laughing]). Another problem is the protagonist. At present, it is a wage earner, which is quite good without too much elaboration. I hope the author will continue to do this in the future, but you can also consider persecuting the protagonist (if it does not affect the progress). It looks good, I love watching it, please update more If you see me unhappy, please scold me and I will ignore you [laughing evilly]