From Nie Xiaoqian to Ma Xiaoling, from Ada Wang to Wanda

It's not bad, but it's too fast. You can write slowly and carefully. The emotional scenes should be unfolded slowly. Don't wrap it up without thinking, otherwise it will fall apart soon [Thoughts]

My favorite is Stitched World Brawl, and the invincible system flow. There must be a lot of comments about the acceptance of girls. It is too fast and there is no emotional drama. You can slow it down and add more descriptions of daily life and more interactions. Write more interactions that can be written. Summary: At present, it seems that this is the best time travel template. If I could choose, I would wear your book!

After watching it for a while, I feel that there is no problem, but I suggest that the protagonist can find more actors, which may be able to trigger more events and find opportunities in more worlds. You can also get into the anime world. Later, you can set it up and enter the dungeon world alone.

It's a lot more fun, and she's decisive in doing things. It's like a harem in the early stage, but it's a bit mediocre in the later stage. The new woman gradually lacks plot and becomes a number. But this is nothing. It's just that in the middle and late stages, there are occasional minor poisonings, occasionally watery moments, and too many psychological dramas, so I can't give you full marks.

I have read Chapter 16 so far, and I can't help but give a good review. It's really great for me. The author has avoided all the poisonous points, and slightly changed the settings of some characters that will be used that involve principle issues. There is no problem of suppressing first and then developing, and the chaotic hodgepodge of worlds does not need to be picky to consider some logical issues and problems that are not in line with the original character settings. Well, what about Fahai's treatment? I've read a lot of fanfics about Fahai. Unless he was brought up as a younger brother during Fahai's three-view period, it would be a little better as an adult, as if he were a different person. Otherwise, Fahai's stubborn temperament would be difficult to deal with. It's too simple like this.

It's okay, it's okay, but there are too many skills. I haven't seen them yet. It's uncomfortable.

Can the author leave a movie name every time a character appears, otherwise I won't know which movie it is?

Are the golden scales just a thing in the pond? They turn into dragons when encountering wind and clouds;

There is no big problem, if you like harem you can watch it. Already finished reading, speed update

What is Jianghu? Jianghu is a place where there are people! What is short is years, what is long is true love

If you say five stars, it's five stars.

Yes, it's pretty!

Invincible. Pretty good novel

I hope I can keep writing. Is it possible to do animation or something like time travel in the future?

It's well written, but these titles have been cut off by you. Aren't you afraid of being beaten to death by those who cut them off? [Laughing]

After reading it for so long, I finally remembered that I didn't have a good rating [face covering]. Here's a five-star review, come on! [Learned]

This harem needs more work. A harem is worth three thousand beauties.

Finished Spreading Flowers, I hope the next book will have the character played by Wan Qiwen as the heroine

Not 100% satisfied

If you don't buy second-hand, keep chasing it.

It's really a big fight. Let's fly.

Tutu tu bath center

Very nice harem story

Good, good, good

Not bad, it's fun all the way to the end

It's super beautiful, but it's a pity it's almost finished.

This book is all about collecting girls, collecting girls, and collecting girls

I can't give you more than five stars [laughing]

All I can see are good books, come on

It's pretty good. I admit that I'm envious.