Elden Ring: Lullaby of the Land of Shadow

After reading it for two days, aside from the game Elden's Ring, this fan fiction is already much better than most game fan fiction. This fanfic is traditional, there is no system, no sign-in, no game points, etc. The novel mainly uses the development of the storyline to promote the fate of the characters. The protagonist can experience various famous scenes and major events in the game across time and space in the Junction and Shadow Lands! The author has writing skills! I hope the author will stick to it and finish it. It will be considered a rare high-quality novel by Tomato!

Come, the author, read with me my solemn oath: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding. This is true every day and every night [Love] [Love]

Although I saw it from the author I follow, I am still a long-time fan! But objectively speaking, the author has made great progress, and the story is stronger than the previous book. The improvement is so obvious! "Elden's Ring" is a very popular game recently! This is a game fanfic. Although I have never played Souls games, Souls games are notoriously difficult, and the game plots are also fragmented! The author can very well connect the fragmented events together, and add secondary creation and excavation. This is a hundred times better than the flow of writing that advances the mission according to the main line of the game! After all, I have read the author's first novel. The author has writing skills and ambition. Come on!

Basically, I started reading this book not long after it was released until now. The whole book is very novel and unique. It does not follow the main line of the game to promote the plot (this is not to say that following the main line of the game is not good). This is something I have never seen in other Old Touhuan fanfics, so overall I think it is very novel and the writing is also very easy to understand. People like me who basically don't understand the background story of the game in detail can easily read it, but I saw some people also said that the main line of the book is very novel and easy to understand. Kaoru is a sissy (this is not to say that I should step on those people, it is just my objective evaluation of the protagonist). The protagonist came to a strange borderland alone to find his sister. His courage is commendable, and when he first came to the border, he looked like me when I first played the old ring. He was very cautious in everything he did, let alone the protagonist who only has one life. I think these behaviors of the protagonist are relatively normal reactions, and if the writing is strong from the beginning, I think it will be boring. All in all, I like this fanfic very much and hope the author can keep writing it [Love] [Love] The more I read, the more I become obsessed with it. Other fanfics basically have the ultimate goal of becoming a king. This book has the goal of becoming a god. It is very rare. I have already started to imagine who will be more charming, Phoenix or Mikaela. After playing the dlc, I feel that Mikaela is too innocent. In the end, can the author try to save Mikaela and let him voluntarily give up the god status? Or force him to charm him so that he will not make detours? Anyway, come on, author! ! [Like][Like]

I am, Michaela's blade😡😡😡Draw your sword [hold][hold][hold]

As a game fanfic, the storyline is not completely developed according to the process, which is much better than assembly line storytelling! Come on, author (๑Ő௰Ő๑)

It's okay, White Mask's writing isn't good enough, isn't it that sexy?

It's okay to write, a 400-hour player of the Ring of Law, the king of the borderland is coming

Emotionally entangled, I feel sorry for the protagonist

Combat and wisdom coexist, expert