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Please update "Talent stolen at the beginning, go to the second world for revenge" [cry] [cry] [cry], such a good book with such a good world view, why don't I update it? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying], this book is also very good

I started chasing Sesame Rice's new book from Fanzhu, and I didn't have an account at that time. It's a very new subject, and it's worth pursuing. I just hope that Sesame Rice won't be a eunuch again. For example, the previous Maomao Cult had stolen talents. Come on sesame seeds!

It's 99% rare. I have a hunch that if the author doesn't get sick, this book will definitely be a 9.5. It is a rare slow-burning novel. It does not establish the world view too quickly but chooses to build it through the narration of characters one by one. I like it. One more thing, I'll squeeze five packs of spicy strips! [Shy]

God of Eunuchs, each book has good results and attractive content, and each book is cut off after the protagonist develops.

Overall review: A good novel. Truth is its advantage and disadvantage. I haven't watched much of it, so I'll just talk about my personal impressions from the early stage (← specially marked). In my eyes, being close to life is definitely the core of the early stage. Whether it is the young man's thinking about his future life (college entrance examination), his performance in interpersonal interactions (including close friends and Bai Yueguang (?)), Or the young man's reaction when faced with the sudden qualification to communicate with the outside world, there is only - truth. It is quite in line with the image of a boy in an ivory tower. (PS: I specifically point out that the young man is still in the ivory tower and has not yet been exposed to the trials of society. How do you think a young man who has not yet matured will react to the unknown?) Because of the truth, I can feel why the protagonist hesitates and why he is afraid, because it would be the same hesitation and fear for me. However, it is precisely because of the ease of introduction that the audience of this book has become smaller. Not everyone likes to watch the growth of teenagers, because growth is painful. When reading a book, bringing yourself in at this time means reliving the pain of your own growth. This is not something everyone can bear, especially in this period of pursuing fast-paced and refreshing online writing. Pss: There is a debate about the college entrance examination in the comment area of this book. If you like it, you can watch it.

I love eating, I am a greedy cat🤤, the author will fill me up with big updates, ah😦, you won't give it? Please, hurry up~ I can't bear it anymore. It's going to be soon~~Ah………it's already transformed into the shape of the author, meow~

I really like this kind of daily life, the ability settings are also very novel, and the growth-oriented protagonist is also well written. I hope that the background of Mei Yumian can be written. Also, I want to watch the plot of the fox demon line and the alien continent [Blow Kiss]

The magical girl who suddenly appeared on my bed Lu Yao Sesame Seeds Looking at the name, I thought it was a light-hearted novel with a strong two-dimensional style, but it is not. The plot is not that routine, nor is it that refreshing. But for me, it's still a preferred evaluation overall. The character creation seems to be criticized by many people, but it's okay, it seems a bit slow, but it fits the atmosphere of the whole novel and it's not too dramatic. It just doesn't have much charm left. Four to four and a half stars, not even five stars. To me, it's a good novel, but it doesn't appeal to me that much.

It seems okay so far. Although the male protagonist is still a bit draggy and uncomfortable, he is also more realistic. Come on [Like]

The subject matter is good, and the protagonist is a growth type. It was relatively weak in the early stage because the protagonist was too ordinary before. This is normal. It takes time to change the mentality, and the protagonist does not want to be treated as an outlier, because he is from the bottom, and his information is not as wide as those above. He is not sure what will happen after he is exposed. This protagonist is much better than the people in other novels who go crazy after having superpowers, and it seems that the protagonist's mentality has also grown to a certain extent. When it is time to fight, fight. And author, have you forgotten our succubus teacher? ! ! Add some drama!

Very good, the author has his own writing style. (It just feels a bit Jiangnan-ish sometimes) I have my own routines and ideas. (This is rare in Tomato. Anyway, I watch most of them to death.) Please update it well! After reading around the comments, many people didn't like the protagonist, saying he was too cowardly. This is actually quite normal. After all, most people read online novels and enjoy the pictures. To put it bluntly, they read for fun. Therefore, in many books, you start the invincible game first, and then create characters after the results are good. And there are fewer and fewer good slow-burn novels, because people don't like to look in the mirror, let alone get angry for the protagonist who encounters difficulties. Hmm... Since when did everyone stop liking realistic three-dimensional characters? Isn't it true that novels move from life to art step by step? Come on, author! (I don't know if the author will see it or if he will be scolded?)

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I have to say, this plot is very interesting to me. An ordinary human teenager accidentally discovered that his bed could connect to another strange and magnificent magical world, and then opened the door to a new world: he met many capable people and strangers, slowly learned to use magic, and together with his companions formed a team full of infinite vitality in this world where everyone is in danger... Looking forward to the author's updates, please don't give up! ! ! (Sincere)

I see that everyone is very anxious, eager for the protagonist's personality to change, and do not want to see a cowardly protagonist without a plan. See things from God's perspective. At present, the protagonist's weapon (see the fox demon chapter) is still a peach wood sword, which requires class, night, and midnight meditation every day, as well as training. The author has controlled time very well. The protagonist has been pushed away all the time. It can be said that the protagonist has no time to think at all. This is also the fate of most ordinary people. This is also the ability that many novels require photographic memory. Any learning takes time. Do you think there is automatic magic but not automatic memory magic? It is obvious that this is a very ordinary story with a very long process. ━━━The above content is what I read and wrote before but didn't post it. I didn't expect that there is still a draft. You can feel free to comment. ━━━Although I don't know why the update was discontinued, but based on the content of the previous books, this one is indeed not that good. It feels like the author is probably recuperating because he is always sick. . I hope the author will change the platform as promised before. (/A＼)

It turns out to be sesame! ! ! From Qingren to Huo Ming and then to Huo Shou It really attracted me from beginning to end. I just clicked on this book casually on the homepage, and suddenly it felt a little familiar. I asked why I read it right away. It turned out to be an old acquaintance, Sesame [Adore][Adore][Adore]

Just judging based on my personal senses, the subject matter and creativity are good. This "gold finger" and world view background are very unique. It is the type of novel that I like and can read. But in terms of plot and characters, it seems that the author wants to create a reflection of an "ordinary person/high school student" under Chinese education who comes into contact with a new extraordinary world. I also read some comments that said the same thing, which made me feel... Is my thinking model already so different from that of "ordinary people"? This is what a traditional, common, ordinary boy should be like? It seems that my experience is too shallow, I have interacted with too few people, and my family environment is too good? ... It's true, among my high school classmates a few years ago, there were very few who were like the protagonist... It made me feel like I was blindly portraying stereotypes. I really had the illusion of life that "it's better if you fuck me". Perhaps it should be said that the author's writing power is excellent and can mobilize the readers' hearts. Oke Oke is just here to express my desire to complain about "it turns out that I thought differently from ordinary people". Leaving aside the protagonist, it can actually be rated as five stars. It is limited to personal reading preferences. The comment is over and there will be no more comments.

It's quite interesting to see the protagonist grow up from an ordinary high school student, and the protagonist is not as brainless as other male protagonists in cool novels. There is also the heroine. Although the title is about the white-haired girl, I still hope it is that classmate because the current relationship is a bit ambiguous [Like][Like][Like]

The feeling of youth rushes over my face, and my writing style is invincible. It pisses me off, where is my magical girl [crying][crying][crying] Such a good teleportation setting, but I basically didn't mention a word in the back. It's all for nothing. It's just a headline.

Goldfinger's imagination is pretty good, but the plot is a bit awkward. At present, the protagonist's behavior and mentality are younger, which is consistent with his real age, but sometimes his blood pressure is high. Not as good as above, more than below, okay.

I can only say that this book is very well written, but there is also one point. There is too much dialogue in the comments, but the plot is necessary and advances the plot. But the overall feeling is that it is dragging, and it doesn't feel necessary, but it is not too necessary. It just writes a lot, but overall it is very good. I personally feel that this book is very well written. Whether it is based on imagination or brought in by myself, I can feel that the author of this book is interested in him and is writing seriously [like] [blowing kiss], and there is also a sentence that is not enough to read [pinch]

This is a rare and pure book about the recovery of spiritual energy. Whether it is the setting of the protagonist Goldfinger (that is, the special identity of the protagonist as a teleportation anchor) or the atmosphere of the general environment, it gives people a very fresh texture and is very real. This is mainly reflected in the reactions and thoughts of the people around them. They are very realistic. There is no young blood comic, the kind of passionate passion and dreams, but more of a bold attempt to explore slowly. As the protagonist is the node connecting the two worlds, and as a "Demon Conqueror" who grew up from an ordinary high school student, the changes in Huo Lian's state of mind are also eye-catching, making people truly feel the confusion of an ordinary high school student when faced with sudden changes. Although there is nothing wrong with it, but with the company and encouragement of companions, they can face their own abilities and responsibilities, accept and try to change the world, and protect the people around them. This is the true passion of young people, and it is a kind of pure heart and will that remains pure after experiencing the suppression of reality. So in my opinion, this portrayal of the protagonist is the highlight of the book. The second is the design of the world view. This way of combining multiple worlds is the ecstasy of infinite flow lovers like me. Especially the spiritual revival and the magical world itself are my favorites. The combination and influence of the two atmospheres create a very special temperament. On one side, there are the weird heroes and demons slowly awakening in the modern city in history, and on the other side, the swords and magic that believe in the gods come into the world again and again. The collision of the two gives me a great sense of expectation.

It's good to watch, but the shaping of the protagonist is a bit slow, which will dissuade many people who want to watch it for fun. It is recommended to speed up the transformation of the protagonist's thoughts. The story and writing are very good, but the biggest problem is the creation of the protagonist. There is a strong sense of fragmentation, the character is not well established, and there is no sense of crisis when it comes to changes in life. Out of curiosity, he embarks on the extraordinary path but later does not want to be exposed to extraordinary events. He just wants to live an ordinary life. Even if the world changes and his family is in danger, he can still live with peace of mind.

It won't be cut again. But this bleak data can be understood even if it is cut down. A person who earns 4,000 daily updates and works perfectly will only get one meal per day. I have read several of the author's books and I feel that the concept is very thoughtful and the characters are well-developed. It is indeed a good online novel. It's just a pity that a good story doesn't have a good ending. It's a pity about the push mechanism. If there is another book, please give the author some free gifts.

After seeing Chapter 47, I can only say that if I keep updating at this level, I will be invincible! I love this style and writing so much [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] (It looks great, I love reading it, please update more)

I hope that the subsequent plot can see the growth and transformation of the male protagonist, and I am looking forward to the subsequent plot of the world opposite the portal. Personally, I prefer the female character Master Succubus. At first, I thought she was the female protagonist because the name of the book is related to it. Hurry up and advance the plot. Hurry up and serve it up. It's already 200 chapters!

It's very good. It has the shadow of the early Dragon Clan, but it has its own style. I started reading online novels in elementary school. I still remember the first book I read was Chen Dong. I secretly read it with a small flashlight in the middle of the night. The happiest time every day is reading novels. Later, when I was in the first year of high school, I saw Dragon Clan for the first time. Wow, that feeling. It was a Japanese-style light novel with multiple male protagonists. It really shocked my young heart. Later, I read Seraph and Kyushu, but I couldn't find the pleasure I had when I read Dragon Clan. Until now, I read this novel. It has a similar style to Dragon Clan, but the writing style is different. It is not as powerful as Dragon Clan, but it is closer to reality, and it is not blind... (I can't write it anymore, the client asked me to take pictures) Anyway, come on

The transparent male protagonist has a low self-esteem, which makes people look forward to his transformation. The author's writing is very good, and the plain plot also has a different flavor. I recommend that people who have never read it give it a try. The first few chapters may be a bit discouraging, but if you stick with it, you will see the excitement.

It's a very good fantasy novel. I was originally attracted by the white hair in the title (hehehe), but now I really like the performance of the protagonist. He is very much like an ordinary child who grew up in an ordinary family environment. He wants stability and habitually listens to his mother. It's a bit shabby, but very real.

I hope that the male protagonist will grow up faster. So far, it's pretty good-looking. There are no particularly bad points. The language and writing are very comfortable. I hope that the author of the subsequent stories can write as wonderfully.

It's very good. The protagonist of the whole book is progressing and will be confused and impulsive. I think it is quite real. Don't worry about some reviews saying it's too slow and the protagonist is not decisive, I think it looks pretty good.