Mingchao: I Am the Armored Warrior

The author's writing style is not bad. I will give my support first and then share my personal opinions and suggestions. The reason why the protagonist is familiar to the wanderers has not yet been written. I always feel that the character is familiar with the character too quickly. I personally recommend spending more time on the trusting relationship between the character and the protagonist. From a normal friend relationship to a reliable companion for the first time, it takes some opportunities or a long period of accumulation. The protagonist is a taciturn character, but I personally think that when surrounded by a few lively people, the personality should change slowly and express some of my own opinions from time to time. This does not mean using a plot that is known in advance to pretend to be a spoiler, but using a person. People understand that making some judgments can highlight the protagonist's sense of existence. The protagonist handles the attitude of the character very well and does not blindly listen to the opinions of the past life on the Internet. It is very comfortable to watch and the writing is very calm. It feels that it will be very interesting to portray a combination of resourcefulness and combat power. However, the author just sticks to the original settings. I just suggest that there is no content in the follow-up plot of Ming Chao. It will be a test for the author to control the plot and insert small events in the middle. However, it will be much more interesting to write some original events in this way. Finally, I want to complain. After completing the Yinlin mission, I found that the drifters in the game trust others too easily. It's so silly. The plot only shows the general character. I hope the author can write it in detail, so that players can see what they don't know, which can retain readers to a large extent. From time to time, some detailed knowledge and plots will be mentioned. After all, everyone must have skipped the branch lines. There are also a group of people who watch the plot when coming to Second Creation. Come on, give me five stars first. I hope the author will not be too talkative [love] [love] [love]

It's not bad. I suggest you update more. There is a high probability that 100,000 words will be included in the recommendation list. I have predicted many of them. I wish the author will update to 100,000 words as soon as possible. Keep up the good work.

OK, the protagonist also exudes personality charm. She can't help but open up the harem. Every female character can't walk after seeing her.

Come on, come on, there are only two books that Mingchao can read at the moment, one is about you, and the other is about a parallel world.

Author, how can I live without your... Novel~ ah ah ah

Hiss, I suddenly remembered that the protagonist came with the Five Elements Armor and the Emperor's Armor. The Five Elements Armor can be modified and given to someone else.

Tell the truth. Have those who say that this is a battle of retrieval and do not need to fight to the death have really never thought about the characteristics of this boss? If this characteristic of his fades away, no one will be able to defeat him in a few months or years. And this boss has always been hidden. It came out on the same day in both months. What else can you do if you defeat this boss and keep hiding it?

Good so far Come on, author

It's good to read, I like to read it, I love to read it, please update it soon, author, if you don't update it, I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body.

Personally I think it's pretty good

Come on! The subject matter is very novel, and if you wish, you could change some of the dialogues. After all, just a little bit of the game is enough, so there's no need to read the novel again [Chigua] I can't deny that the plot of the game has given people an unforgettable image, but I still hope that the novel will be better [Sending Hearts]

It looks pretty good so far

Very interesting, come on author

Except for Xingying, why do other female characters fall in love with the protagonist inexplicably [what]

It's okay, it's considered good now.

Among the existing Tomato Crying Tide novels, it's pretty good. I recommend reading it without thinking. If you really want to analyze it in detail, there are still many shortcomings. For example, the protagonist has some actions and dramas in the plot (about 32 chapters). The rest is okay. I can read it. I hope I can stick to it until the end.

Okay, still very good It's just that there are too many descriptions of the characters' expressions. I could use less description. Suddenly it feels really weird.

The needle doesn't poke, I like it

As for the author, come out quickly. Why aren't the books updated? What are you doing?

You can still read it, but I will read it later. If you can still read it, I will make changes.

The most interesting thing about this book is the comment section, [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's very comfortable to read. Thank you to the author.

Well enough. Although the writing is average. But the idea is okay.

Come on, come on, come on

Come on, come on, come on, author!

Not enough to see! !

Feeling good now

It's okay. You can watch it.

Weird weird weird weird

Come on, come on, come on