People all over the world were pulled into the foggy world, and the world began to survive in the fog. Lu Yuan had two survivor subsystems. Others were seeking survival, while he was playing the business game easily.
Reader comments
It's okay, I feel it's pretty good for a new author.
At first, I felt that the protagonist was too weak and relied solely on pets and thugs. Later I discovered that there were too many dangers outside, maybe because I had read too many mindless cool articles. This was indeed the safest way, and it also improved my strength without going out. Moreover, in this kind of game, personal strength is of no use. Even if someone attacks me, you have to attack the house first while I am hiding in it.
But it still doesn't feel good enough. You can write more about the plight of others or other alliances, but I can't think of more, so just write it yourself. Come on!
It's okay, I feel it's pretty good for a new author. At first, I felt that the protagonist was too weak and relied solely on pets and thugs. Later I discovered that there were too many dangers outside, maybe because I had read too many mindless cool articles. This was indeed the safest way, and it also improved my strength without going out. Moreover, in this kind of game, personal strength is of no use. Even if someone attacks me, you have to attack the house first while I am hiding in it. But it still doesn't feel good enough. You can write more about the plight of others or other alliances, but I can't think of more, so just write it yourself. Come on!
Not bad, pretty good in the mist category.