[No system, no cool writing, no harem]
After a natural disaster, the old order was destroyed and a new order was re-established. The world returned to the twelve supreme companies. They were called Branches, and above them, there was a person called Gan... In order to save mankind, Branch relied on technology that was difficult for ordinary people to understand to save mankind from natural disasters. Those technologies were called "cores" and formed various "teeth" with hundreds of "fruits" under them. They drove each other to promote the development of the city.
However, everything is a lie, all the insiders are sinners, and all the answers will be hidden, because it is related to the hope of [DATA EXPUNGED]...
Reader comments
Companies, gangs, employees, bounties, twilight sweeps, brain worlds, mutants, etc., It can be seen that the author really wants to show the world he constructed.
However, the elements are too diverse, and the author is a newcomer, with insufficient narrative skills and too little experience to master it. As a result, a lot has been said before, but it is very messy. The events encountered are too compact, causing the reader to not sort out the previous situation, and a new thing comes.
If you cut it off, it will become messy.
Therefore, few people can insist on watching, and most of them will choose to cut it off and not continue watching.
Just like a snowball in summer, it gets smaller and smaller.
This is one of the reasons why no one watches it.
It is recommended that you don't go on with the rest of the article, but revise the previous article and write out the background and worldview through narration.
My peers give me five stars. I hope my writing will get better and better and my background will get deeper and deeper. (ゝω´★)
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Companies, gangs, employees, bounties, twilight sweeps, brain worlds, mutants, etc., It can be seen that the author really wants to show the world he constructed. However, the elements are too diverse, and the author is a newcomer, with insufficient narrative skills and too little experience to master it. As a result, a lot has been said before, but it is very messy. The events encountered are too compact, causing the reader to not sort out the previous situation, and a new thing comes. If you cut it off, it will become messy. Therefore, few people can insist on watching, and most of them will choose to cut it off and not continue watching. Just like a snowball in summer, it gets smaller and smaller. This is one of the reasons why no one watches it. It is recommended that you don't go on with the rest of the article, but revise the previous article and write out the background and worldview through narration. My peers give me five stars. I hope my writing will get better and better and my background will get deeper and deeper. (ゝω´★)
It feels good. Give it a five-star rating and support it.