After My Ascension Failed, I Became a Demon King in Another World.

It's an interesting subject matter, but the obvious flaw is that the narrative line is a bit confusing, and there is a lack of iconic sentences or symbols for scene or perspective changes. My mind was still on the previous scene, and then I changed the perspective without getting an obvious reminder. It was very uncomfortable. I hope it can be improved [Chigua]

This quality can get 9.7 Points, but it's a pity that there is no traffic.

Finally I can read a good invincible article haha

I have a person named the author. This person is good at writing, especially Kavin.

It's well written, but the ending is rushed. When will I start a new book? I like this rhythm. Remember to mention it when you start a new book, and there's not too much conflict between the best and the best. This is what I like the most.

It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it? Come on, author.

I quite like it, but if I keep writing x hair x eyes, it's a bit too much

Please update, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..

I believe I will definitely become a long-time fan. It's very good-looking.

The protagonist is still not ruthless enough, and the characters in it give me a feeling of being calculating but unclear. What should be abstract is not abstract, but what should not be abstract is abstract, and I can't understand it [laughs] But the author is a newcomer. Overall, the plot is very smooth. It would be better if the protagonist could be more decisive in killing.

Very nice! ! [Love][KISS][KISS]The author will update quickly[KISS][KISS][KISS]

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good. . Hate the system and that host. .

I can't see enough. I hope Liana will be offline soon. Her dead system is really annoying [crying] [crying]

It's a very good book, why has no one read it [crying] [crying], author, keep going and perseverance is victory.

The heroine is very strong. She starts aggressively and kills everyone if they don't agree [laughing]. I like their friendship very much. Everyone in the Dragon Crusade team has their own personality. Elise wins with ease! Who wants to have Nana who dotes on her! You really have to hug the right thigh [shy][shy][shy]

Very beautiful, worth seeing

Will there be new books published? After reading it, it's a bit unreadable. I particularly liked the part about cultivating immortals. I felt that the heroine was well taken care of and everyone was a very gentle person. It just felt like the prince and Liana were a little hasty when they went offline. They couldn't be killed before. I feel a little disappointed, the story is over! [Almost crying]

Okay, okay, the rhythm is just right, but Te Miao's updates are too slow. Two updates a day is not unacceptable to me [crying]

The writing is very rich. I really like Nana and Liz.

I'm looking for enjoyable articles, and I've read more than 20 chapters so far, and I'm still very satisfied. It's so frustrating, I want to feel good!

The heroine is very powerful, very powerful

I really like this kind of thing. I will give the author a big chicken drumstick.

Very nice. There just weren't many people watching.

Oh oh oh oh oh, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good!!! This is how the invincible novel should be! Even if there is a boss that cannot be killed, it is still super strong

It's very interesting. It's the subject matter I most want to see. It shouldn't be viewed by so many people!

It's okay. The plot of this book is bland and it's not a very exciting novel. But for me, there are a few characters that really stood out to me. However, I still wish the author's writing will get better and better.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. I stayed up all night to finish it (›´ω`‹ )

It's so good, I haven't seen a finished article in a long time [crying] I read it all in one breath [admiration]

It's super beautiful. I like this type. It kills you from beginning to end.

It's quite interesting. Come on, write more good works [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]