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Everyone, please remember to help him promote it. It's very good-looking.

Hmm... I have read about thirty chapters so far. How should I put it? Leaving aside Kiana, this book gives me the feeling that it is... Very traditional, a very traditional urban dragon king type. Maybe it is because it is still in the early stages. There should be some explosive points in the future. Hmm... What can I expect in the future? But I have to say that this kind of subject matter is indeed scarce, huh

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day, a certain day, a certain month, a man was lying weakly on the bed, his face could not hide the paleness. There was a slight smile on his lips. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of his eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."

It's a very good book. Let's see how the plot develops later. If it's still good, I'll give it another five stars.

If the brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the sister so casually? It seems that the sister is being sentimental. That's right. My brother is weak and needs a lot of rest. It's my fault that my sister is urging her brother like this. It hurts her brother's body and makes my sister feel bad. It's a pity that whether my brother is injured or not has nothing to do with my sister. Please update it soon, brother

How to say it? It all depends on the position you take If you put yourself in the role of the male protagonist, you will feel very happy But if you put yourself on the sidelines, you will think that your cabbage has been eaten by a pig. Although they look the same, have the same abilities, and have the same name, they are not Kiana after all. In my heart, Kiana will always be with Mei, I understand. This is just a personal opinion (Of course, there are some areas that need improvement. For example, the author wrote Kiana in the title, but I have never seen Kiana take action in person a few times. As far as I am concerned, I read this novel to see Kiana, not the male protagonist) Of course, I still hope you will watch rationally From a certain perspective, it does ruin Kiana a little bit. Even if the protagonist travels through time and becomes Kiana, the key is that he later reveals his original body and destroys Kiana's body. This is a little bit unacceptable, because in my mind, only Kiana and Mei are the right match. From a physical point of view, what does your content have to do with Honkai Impact? Apart from the fact that the protagonist is Kiana, the only function may be to attract people through these three words.

The author's writing is very good, but he's a little perverted. I guess I'm not perverted, but I like perverted novels. This is what I like.

A very nice book, a rare urban collapse novel, and it also has a love element. But I feel it's a little weird. The protagonist first traveled through time and became a person in this world named Ye Chen. Then she dressed as Kiana, and then Kiana came back, met her before time travel, and then married herself without losing her wealth. I think this sounds a bit weird, but the whole book is still good, and the update frequency is OK. The only question is whether the protagonist will also travel through time and become Kiana. After all, people in that world have already traveled through it once, but I always feel not, that is, will other people from the Honkai Universe come, Siegfried, Theresa, Raiden Mei? After all, it's not enough to just have a man in a wedding, the woman also needs someone, someone

Awesome, very beautiful

She used to be me, she has my knowledge and experience, she can remember all my experiences, all my joys, all my sorrows, she can understand everything I think, my views, my beliefs, and my ideas. No one can mix into our world, we accompany each other, I know that she is my fantasy creation, but I am still happy, she knows that this is a beautiful dream between the Creator and the creation, and she still refuses to wake up. We will not be changed by other people's attitudes, and we will not be bound by boring worldly rules. This feeling is more than anything else. She and I only have each other.

I can only say that this author is a talented person. As long as you can accept this setting, you will never be able to let go of the corner of your mouth. I can only say that the author is really outrageous and can't hold the corners of his mouth down [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile]

It's very interesting. There are too few updates and it's not enough to watch. I just hope that later I won't find a bunch of excuses to suppress the combat power, and I won't be too toxic. It's good to read at the beginning, but it's hard to describe what's behind. It's too hard to suppress the fighting force. It's a real shame. So many people are saying that the author is too hard to suppress the fighting force, but the author just pretends that he doesn't see it.

If the spiritual power is revived, like after you travel back in time, wouldn't it be nice to wait a few months until there is an awakened person, and then recreate a body for yourself? You have so much power but you just don't want to create a body for yourself. Since you haven't come back, you must still be on the Tree of Imaginary Numbers, so you can still use the power of Honkai Impact to create a new core for yourself. I think you can go to sleep in the imaginary number space in the future. You won't rub a core yourself, put it into a body and put it in the created body. Then you put the body of Kiana Kaslana in the imaginary number space, and then get the consciousness back when it is really used? Maybe you can write like this in your next book,,,,

It's pretty good-looking, and it would be even better if it were purely for everyday use in the city! It's not bad with the addition of spiritual energy recovery. The descriptions in some places are very realistic, which is good!

It would be nice if the author wrote less about the plot of Dragon King, otherwise the ratings and comment section would suffer. I still like this kind of subject matter, but Naihe just wrote some Dragon King plots. I beg you, author, your subject matter is really novel. Stop writing plots about the Dragon King and write more funny and joyful stories. This will make it easier to attract readers.

It's really good. The reason why the book review is low now is that many people didn't understand the introduction at the beginning. In fact, I never get tired of reading this content. There is no knife, it is very beautiful! When will the male and female protagonists "let go of the last string"?

It's pretty good. I've read OK. After all, there aren't many good books nowadays. The main thing is to have fewer storylines about the Dragon King. If there are more chapters, it's better to solve them in several chapters. After all, it's too much to pretend to be powerful. After all, it's too much to pretend that you have the power. It's all over after all. It doesn't have any supernatural phenomena. It feels a bit special without some supernatural phenomena. I don't know if the characters from the world of collapse will appear in the later stage. After all, it's hard to let go of friendship after a few years. You can always add more. As for whether you want to join the national team or not, I think it's fine. Just don't be a virgin and a nanny, and don't have too many plots about the Dragon King. After all, books with this kind of plot are very boring now. I used to think it was very enjoyable, but now I feel like a clown. I don't want these plots. If there are, I just don't want too many or else it will easily ruin the book. Now the plot is very comfortable for me to read. I will keep up the good work.

Honkai fan fiction does not contain many Honkai elements. Although it contains some Honkai settings and the names of some characters in Honkai Impact, it does not prevent it from being a good fan fiction. The plot is compact, without losing the feeling, and is thought-provoking. The daily part is perfect, and the daily life plot is very sweet. It is highly recommended (the above is only my personal opinion)

Change of marriage, self-marriage, the writing is excellent, and the description of women's clothing, women's bodies and female degeneration is well described. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is silky smooth, very reasonable, and there is no bloody plot. The appearance frequency of each villain is also very reasonable, the interaction with the family is also good, and the pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot is arranged just right. A book worth collecting.

The content is good, but it always feels like flowers are stuck on...

If it hasn't been updated yet, the author won't send it, right? Alas, burn incense, burn incense.

@Gilded cat /Where are you guys, Dad, what's wrong? It's not updated yet?

I always forgot to leave a review before, but now that the author has traveled through time, I realized that I haven't clicked on it yet, so in order to commemorate the author, I give it five stars♪

It's a very interesting novel. It's nice to read. It would be nice if the writing was better.

Help, I have Honkai Syndrome, everything looks like a knife. I really want to see Kiana turn into pieces of glass and shatter in front of Ye Chen, and say: Ye Chen, I... Don't want to die [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

If it weren't for the good subject matter, I'd really like to give you one star, full of 🈵 feeling like the Urban Dragon King

Everything else is good, but the plot is cliche, and this is a world with extraordinary powers. After these 60 chapters, there will be nothing interesting to read. If the final chapter is cut like that, why can't you protect your parents and teach them how to practice? A good final chapter is written like that.

It's pretty good-looking, but Qibao's was cut into a dog, right? How have they been cut for the children?

It's okay, it feels a bit like an urban protagonist being looked down upon by a supporting character and then being slapped in the face pretending to be bad.

Here, not only is the author a talented person, but all the readers are veterans who have just been discharged from the hospital. It is so much fun! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]