Two Mouths on the Left and Right, I Am the Demon-Eating Immortal.

The author is also a ruthless person, and each chapter can be stuck at just 2,000 words.

It's okay, but the protagonist feels that he needs to take the salvation route, and when will he be restored to his original appearance?

Very good, similar to dark literature but without destroying the three views. All people, techniques and even the entire world are not so bright, but the glory of human nature has always been spread. Each character has his or her own life and position, which is more like a real world than a false stage that exists around the protagonist.

There are no third-grade elementary school paragraphs such as "because... So... After all... But". The narration and description of mental activities are reasonable, and the writing level is acceptable. The protagonist's growth period is well written, but after the foundation is established, there are too many group portraits, resulting in a loose rhythm and a different writing style from the previous period. The plot is a bit long, drawn out, and abandoned. I like the conciseness of the text, the eloquence of words with a certain depth, the plot ideas are mind-expanding and the climax is continuous, and the characters on the scene have clear signs and are extremely violent, cruel, and extremely sinister. Overall, it's almost interesting.

Not bad. It looks good so far. But I think the division of realms should be written out, which will improve the perception. And the plot is actually a bit rushed. But overall it's pretty good.

The new book is still in line with my taste, keep up the good work!

The plot was okay, but there was something a little bit about a group of men having an affair all the time.

Overall, this novel has great potential and is very good. There are many fantastic ideas in it. The important thing is that there are many fantastic ideas and the imagination is very rich, which is very interesting. Recommended to take a look.

The book is good, but it's a pity that I couldn't hold it back when I let myself go in the later period. The system's combat power completely collapsed, and the various training systems were interspersed together and it was very messy. But before the ascension, it is undoubtedly a very good book.

You are the bright star in the sky, shining with charming brilliance; you are the agile fish in the water, making ripples; you are the blooming flower in the flowers, attracting my attention. Quietly, my heart is filled with you! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I have read about the first thirty chapters, and the setting story is quite interesting. Maybe my mentality is too dark [face covering] [face covering]. At first, I thought the Second Young Master Han (I forgot their names) and Luo Jinzhong were bad.

3700/7842, Give it 8.5 Points. The writing is still very good, the killing is decisive, and there is no cliché or vulgar plot. It's just that the protagonist's personality is occasionally a bit disconnected. Also, I really can't stand the setting of Wolf Yuanbao. The boss family is stupid and naive, but every time he can turn bad luck into good luck. I particularly like the male protagonist. He appears in almost every chapter. I really can't stand it anymore.

I hope both Zuo Bao and Lang Bao are fine. They really complement each other. Don't use swords! ! ! ! Did the latest disciple care about him because of the calamity? There is a way that Zuo Bao cares more about him than Lang Bao [crying][crying][crying] Personally, I still like Langbao [cry][cry][cry] It's beautiful, good luck to the author! ! ! !

It's pretty good, and it's pretty cool to watch, so just write it down like this. Wolf Yuanbao is quite annoying. One star deducted. If this is a gay story, then you think I didn't say it.

The setting is good and a bit interesting. Although it is a casual cultivator, it has a certain bottom line. The master of the protagonist is really good. It is rare to be so good. Goldfinger feels like opening a blind box. [Praise]

I feel that the content is great. It has at least a cerebral protagonist. It is considered a good book in Tomato. However, I feel that the number of words is too small. There are only two chapters per day, which is not enough to read.

The world view of this book is huge, and the plot is very interesting. Of course, it is also very brain-burning. You must read it patiently. I highly recommend it. Moreover, the pitfalls in the front will be filled in at the end [Adoration] [Adoration]. Of course, if you want to read a book with a female protagonist, don't come here. (This book is excellent and highly recommended)

One eye, one eye, one eye, like, like, like, like! I want to become a nonsense mirror and keep you company! Whether it's nonsense or a clear statement of truth! I want to never be separated from Ichimoku! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The writing is very good. Generally speaking, it is interspersed with some Internet memes. It seems humorous and interesting. The story line is also very good. I just hope to improve the protagonist.

You can control monsters who kill people, but how can you control people who kill people? [Almost crying]

When will my eyes and ears recover? [Eating melon]

In the early stage, it was just a boring and refreshing article for entertainment, but later on, I caught up with it and it was a very good-looking article about cultivating immortals. (The author works hard, but three updates a day is not enough. It's not enough at all.)

"Born to the greatest ideal of mankind, died to the dirtiest desire of mankind"

So far, there is nothing toxic about it, and I personally think it is very satisfying.

I feel that the protagonist's ability is quite novel, not bad, and looks good.

The pig's foot kills decisively, there is no heroine, and the IQ is online. The pig's foot is a leftist and a loose immortal. It swallows monsters with its left hand and spits out treasures with its right hand. It's very beautiful.

It has a bit of a classical fairy tale feel but also a traditional immortal cultivation feel. It feels like it integrates several schools. So far, the readers are pretty good.

A great novel, it will be perfect if you polish it more

It's quite good-looking, and the subject matter is not the cliché of cultivating immortals.

It can be good, but why is the rating so low?