HP Dressed as Harry and Cooking Delicious Food in the Wizarding World

It's quite interesting, but the analysis and explanations in the middle are a bit too much. Anyone who has read it or has a little understanding of it actually knows everything that needs to be known. There is no need to explain so much, as it will seem very procrastinating. I hope the author can reduce the explanation and add more plot, which may be better in my personal opinion

No big deal, your lack of title really makes it difficult for me. I like to dance, but because of your target title, I can only watch it all the way. I suddenly found it so difficult. I really wonder why I can't dance. But I'm worried that after I dance, you don't mention it because you don't have to, and I don't know where you went. I'm worried that I missed a very exciting part.

The writing is very good, but there are too many explanations and interpretations. Generally, those who have read the complete works of Harry Potter will know most of them, so there is no need to write in such detail. You can write more about the characters and plots! Come on! There are really too many interpretations, and they are all jumping while reading. The writing is not particularly good, and I slowly started to lose the desire to read further. I hope the author writes more plots instead of explaining everything.

The plot is very interesting and there is nothing surprising about it. The characters' designs are consistent with the original works. Even if you haven't read the Harry Potter series of novels, you can clearly understand what it is about✧＼\ ٩( '㉨' )و /／✧

I feel like the author likes to explain clearly why he writes the way he does, which makes it interesting to watch. It feels like you are not reading fan fiction but a pirated teaching aid, and you can find a small amount of storyline among many knowledge points. In fact, this is the first fanfic I have seen about Harry entering Hufflepuff, and it boldly proposed the intention and speculation of pairing up Hermione and Neville. At first glance, the setting seems very interesting, but upon closer inspection, it turns out that it is more of a mixture of people's private settings for the Harry Potter series. What Snape's question is Lily's confession and guilt, and what Snape is Malfoy's godfather. The whole thing is particularly bland and soft. Narcissa even started talking to her son as soon as she saw our protagonist. And judging from the author's description, it is estimated that it will be a long novel. There will be some subtleties in the situation of a plain long novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

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It would be better if Dumbledore could die directly. This kind of white wizard would be gone.

Insert an eye and wait until you become an old fan [laughing]

It's okay, but the author doesn't know much about this movie. The three-headed dog is named Luwei, not Doudou, and the Animagus is not Agemanis.

So in which chapter does Deha start to be ambiguous?

It looks great, but can you mark the introduction with cp? I agree with this couple, but others may not know.

It's very good-looking, except that the interaction between the two of them, Harry and Draco, seems a bit lacking, but everything else is very good-looking. There is almost no description of how they got together, it's like they got together out of nowhere.

It's a pity that there is no chapter name

Explanation in two chapters out of three [smile]

It's well written, but it would be better if there were less explanations [Thoughts]

Great book, it would be nice if the explanation could be a little less detailed [shy]

Yes, it's the very specific explanations. I personally don't like them very much. They're all jumpy. The ending is a bit fast. Why didn't the new boy Tom write more interactions? I want to see it~~

I have to admit that I really like this novel. Although I haven't read it for a long time now, I will definitely finish it.

It's just a bit too short. Can there be a sequel?

It's so beautiful. I like it. I didn't jump in one picture.

Is it Deha or Harder?

It looks great, but the nonsense is that it has a little too much water! But as it happens, I just like reading nonsense! ! (I don't know why, I feel that the more basic the better in fanfiction. As long as the plot is OK and there is too much nonsense, I can still watch it. This may be because I am a chatterbox, and to be honest, this should be considered my second follow-up. The main reason is that I haven't watched it for too long. I have almost forgotten the previous plot. I have some impressions, but not much, so um, I decided to start from the beginning. Look, there are quite a lot of them, and before I knew it, I had reached 100! But I really like fanfics that contain nonsense, especially strong ones! I saw about 300 or 400 Harry Potter fanfics last time, and I finished reading them! I really like nonsense, especially the strong ones, so keep up the good work! May I ask, is this considered the end? No longer updated? Also, isn't the big black one a bit too powerful? And there is really a lot of water, but I like it, I really like this kind of water. Others may think it is a bit wordy, but I just like it. Just explain it clearly. I feel very good. If you say it is something I know, I can just skip the chapter. Of course, it should be shorter and more concise, for sure. It is better than water. After all, most people like it, but I feel that as long as you can explain clearly what you want to express, it doesn't matter whether it is water or not. People with good abilities can be concise, so be concise. If not, then use water. But in the eyes of some people, water seems to be wrong. Well, I feel that they are a little extreme. This is the same. Humanities, I don't understand why there are so many insults. I personally think it's fine as long as it looks good, no matter what the setting is. I don't understand them. I feel that maybe it's because I haven't read the original work and I can't sympathize with them. But I feel that whether the characters in the original work are good or bad is a matter of personal preferences and opinions. They have It's a bit too extreme, and I feel that as long as the article is good-looking, it will be fine. If I don't understand them, maybe I am an outlier. I feel that I have been an outlier since I was a child. My ideas are contrary to those of the people around me. I rarely resonate with them and I am speechless. In the end, the article written in big letters is very good. I personally feel very good!

Have you changed the Animagus?

The author, cheers, cheers, cheers

It's great, but when will CP make progress?

Well, the ending is not bad... But some of the expositions are too long.

It's quite good, but there are too many introductions. For those who have watched Harry Potter, many of the settings are already known, so it feels like there are too many introductions, but overall it still has flaws. It's a great read.

The plot is so exciting

Looks good, come on

It looks good, and the gold finger is quite big.