Spirit Cage: Entering the Game with One's Own Body

It can be seen that the author is a senior spiritualist. He has at least watched a lot of relevant explanation videos and reasoning predictions, and has thought about it a lot. The character's design and personality are very consistent, and there are very few non-OOC fan works. The plot arrangement and style development are consistent with the original work. To be honest, if it were not an original character, I would almost think this is an official derivative novel. [Love] The author's writing is so good that it makes me feel anxious. My Ling Cong fan has only written 6,000 words at the beginning. This book is so close to the original work that it seems like two people share the same set of cardiovascular and cerebrovascular systems. The details and professional terms are also in line with common sense in biological science. The author is so good that I almost have no courage to continue writing the novel. If I still have the willpower, I will follow suit. [Top post]

It is a very high-quality spiritual cage fanfic, but it may be that there are too many plots and settings at the beginning, which makes no one read it. In fact, the subsequent plot is still very exciting, but there are too few descriptions of emotional drama in the book. In the early stage, the protagonist and Yuekui have a completely ordinary relationship as colleagues. There is too little foreshadowing in the front, and it feels that the protagonist and Yuokui have basically no interaction. In the middle period, after the protagonist dies once, it feels very abrupt that Yuekui confesses to the protagonist. It was only after the confession that the protagonist died again that I felt that the protagonist and Yue Kui had more interactions, and they barely looked like a normal couple. And through the author's description of the protagonist, I can feel that the author is definitely an emotional novice. In the early stage, the protagonist was written like a straight man with no desires. In the middle period, after Yue Kui's confession, in Yue Kui After Kui overturned and was injured in the lighthouse, the protagonist didn't care and instead laughed at Yue Kui. The protagonist was straight in the first and middle periods, and he became normal in the later period. Although the first and middle periods were dull, the later period was still very sweet. I think it is actually necessary to write more warm and daily stories between the protagonist and Yue Kui, and add more interactions between the protagonist and Yue Kui. This book would be perfect.

If you want to write about the spirit cage in your next book, you can start writing it before the catastrophe. The protagonist is a king-level pole-devouring beast that woke up early in the catastrophe. Although it is a king-level, it is not affected by the Mana Ecology like the avatar level. It can also receive information from the Mana Ecology. The Mana Ecology wants the protagonist to return to the ecology, but the protagonist knows the truth about the ecology (being a dog for Gaowei) and has long been disgusted with the ecology. , I have been wandering on the edge of ecology and human civilization since I woke up (a map that can expand the spiritual cage), until I met the 14-year-old Bai Yuehuai (14 or 16 to win the Thain Award?). From the two key lines, they became entangled. One person and one beast began to cooperate to fight against the ecology. They have gone through a long time together. Bai Yuehuai tooth!

The only book that supplements the plot😘😘😘 The world is very grand and can even cover the original plot. I think the author did not spend too much pen and ink to reproduce the original plot of the spirit cage, which is good👍

It's my first time to review a book. I haven't read The Spirit Cage and I was a little confused at first but then I couldn't stop. How can I put it this way? I think the ceiling of the Tomato Spirit Cage fandom is high. The plot and writing are okay. Maybe it's because I like Invincible Literature that it makes me feel better about this book [Adoration]

The author writes very well, but I would like to ask if this book has a single heroine, Bai Yuekui?

A different spiritual cage

It can be seen that the author went through the first part to fill in the details very carefully, but I was confused [face covering]

Not bad, very pretty

It's very interesting, but no one has read it, probably because of the reasons at the beginning, but it got better later on, and the author even made jokes [laughing]

The setting is well completed, but I prefer to watch grand battles at the starry sky level. I hope the author will work hard until then [laughing]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Nice. The plot design is interesting.

Good, good, good, good

Why do I look more and more like a hamster?

The writing is beautiful, the author should work hard.

Although a lot of AI was used before, everything was changed after feedback. There's nothing wrong with the writing, it's very good.

It's good that the plot is very compact, the pitfalls have been filled in, and a larger map has been expanded.

The best spirit cage fanfic I've seen on Tomato so far