If You Don't Want to Unify the Ninja World, Why Are You Crying About the Ninja Village System?

It looks good, but there are still few articles on this group portrait theme, and the theme is also novel. . However, I think we can describe the national conditions of the empire more and shock the natives a little more to make it more enjoyable. The only shortcoming is that the updates are not frequent enough. Recently, I have been reading about 2 chapters a day with about 4,000 words. I suggest adding another chapter to 6,000 words [Learned] It is a pity that the work was ruined by the author's too many words and too many plots. The subject matter was originally novel and the creativity was very good. . It is strongly not recommended for newbies to join the trap, as it will make them more and more angry.

This is a book about a mature world of thought, trying to change the thoughts of another world, and then understanding each other, just like a country bumpkin. Overall, it is not bad. I hope that the author's next work will not restrict his thoughts within a circle!

It satisfies my fantasy of a unified ninja world. The author is still capable. He uses group portraits to lay the foundation for the story. The introduction is just not enough. Can you write the plot of Naruto saving Jiraiya quickly? I also want to see how Sasuke would react when he traveled to the empire and saw Itachi? Jie Jie Jie I was so excited to watch the latest chapter of the Chuunin Exam. One thing I mentioned is that Ningji can actually use corpse veins to condense the Susanoo Titan? This idea is too big. There is also a Ten-Tails server. I am dumbfounded! ! You'll understand if I read it for a long time! !

I really like this kind of sibling traveling through Naruto. The protagonist is from the unified ninja world. At the beginning, he has to travel through parallel worlds, and one part is the harem... Stop commenting. Are you looking for scolding? They already said that points were deducted because of the harem. [Smile] I haven't even read this book yet but I keep commenting. The author said that it is not a harem, and being with three women is not a harem, haha ​​[Smile]

Hurry up! Hurry up! I want to see Naruto and the others go to the empire to meet their parents in another world! I also want to see the spectacular scene of a million-armored ninja heavy army making their cross-border debut! There are too many, you write too slowly! [Please update]

Hello, this author. This book looks very familiar to me. Just like what I wrote [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Please send me the subsequent chapters quickly. I suspect that what you wrote is the same as mine [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Update Mader quickly. As long as the logic remains unchanged and some sadness and rescue scenes are added, Tomato will become a god just around the corner.

A purely brainless cool story about Naruto, a cool story about Naruto Empire accompanied by the Red Revolution and modern thoughts.

It's beautiful, rhythmic and stylish. The plot content can be said to be relatively novel compared to other fanfics. The contrast between the two parallel worlds is quite interesting. There aren't enough updates and it's too short. It's not enough to read. I finished it in just a few seconds. Speedy updates! ! ! !

I have always wanted to read a Naruto One Piece novel of all worlds, thank you to the author. It's a bit of a forced intelligence. More and more

The author listened, the novel is also good, five-star praise There is a flush toilet at the beginning of Naruto: There is no need to make Chiyo drink toilet water and wipe herself with the toilet [vomit]

It is a pity that this work is not long. After all, according to the setting of this empire, it is really impossible to extend it too much. After all, the step is too big, and the empire has too many territories and it is difficult to write. It is not good, and the rain and dew are all affected. Although there are some logical loopholes in the work, the score does not seem to be very high. But I am still very willing to accept such a work. Hope to see the author's next better book. There is only one reason for giving five stars, because of the last 6 words in Chapter 122. I originally wanted to talk about this technique when I first started watching it, but I had already finished watching the work. I didn't say anything at the time. As a result, I actually saw this technique in Chapter 122, which is the technique of reincarnation. I have read many Naruto fanfics, including but not limited to those where the protagonist is Obito, the protagonist is Pain, or the protagonist is Uchiha. These protagonists all face a problem, that is, they don't bother to use dirt to reincarnate. But there are people who want to be resurrected. But in their eyes, they only have reincarnation. Not to mention the art of reincarnation, which probably only requires a complete body to cut the soul back into the body by infusing chakra. They don't even know the art of dragon life reincarnation. It feels quite like a cloud, but it is unlikely that it is a cloud.

One word is "Jue", which is better than "Hei Jue" and "Agarwood" to save my mother [laughing and crying] This book is a pleasure to read from the beginning. Don't look at it later, be careful not to understand Kakashi's dialogue between the two worlds. The dialogue is too confusing. Can't you add an imperial prefix to the imperial ninja? Is there a part 1? I love Uchiha Senju [laughing evilly]

It's a very good book. Behind the scenes of the group portrait, the protagonist is the strongest background. It focuses on the confrontation between people from the protagonist's empire and characters from the original world in all aspects (including ideas, technology, and strength). The original world (around 150 chapters) has been completed if line if Madara Infinite Tsukuyomi succeeds (completed) if line, the Battle of Konoha's 2nd Year Ending Valley, Madara's victory (completed)

Very good. The content here... What can I say? Anyway, it suits my taste.

I can't give it five stars for personal reasons, but I can't bear to give it three stars. Although we know that the Ninja World No. 64 Is just a Ninja World that mostly resembles the original work, so some people's personalities and thoughts are different from what the original work revealed, Kakashi's eyes really went up when he met Sakumo Teikoku. I originally wanted to complain about Kakashi in the front, but luckily I had the patience to see the back. I like Daito very much, and so does Obito. 🥹😭😭 Everyone is having a great time in the new world! Regardless of the reason for self-recommendation, this book really warms people's hearts and makes the spots on their bodies fade. Itachi and Gutui can take a look at it as appropriate. Supplement: The Chinese pronunciation of the names of people in the parallel world is the same, but the Japanese must be wrong. Itach is a weasel (weasel), it cannot be you with a long sound of "you". I don't need to tell you how Sasuke pronounces it. Zuosuke should pronounce it hidari tasu. Akito is akihito.

Very creative. I hope the author can continue his efforts and develop into other multidimensional universes in the future. For example, Pirates, Death, or Dragon Ball. It would also be nice to add some other fandoms for comparison.

You can write about the black hole of the abyss. Once you start, you can't stop. When everyone starts to cross over, they will merge. Everyone understands that another world also has itself. What is existence and what is nothing. Write about the abyss. Otsutsuki is not the end. There are stronger anime worlds, such as cultivating immortals...

This is the second good Naruto article I have read. However, the updates are a bit slow. I hope the author will work hard to update and not stop updating.

It's a bit messy, but it's also very novel. Please update it vigorously! Five-star praise! ! !

It's an incredible Naruto fanfic, it's so beautiful. Author update soon!

It's very fun. It's the first time I hope the protagonist only lives in legends. I really like watching the time-travel adventures of the same person [laughs]

Well written, the subject matter is fresh. Although it is a fan timeline. Even if you don't have a protagonist, you won't collapse. I feel good Because I also plan to write a book similar to Under One Person.

It's not bad, but the pace is a bit slow. The main reason is that your configuration is too high. You should level up in the main world, and then go to other parallel worlds to upgrade your configuration to open up your imagination.

The subject matter is novel. It feels pretty good. But too much nonsense

Let's take a look at the five-star review first. It's the first time I've seen this kind of story after the protagonist has succeeded. Basically, if you want to see this kind of plot, you can only see it in the extra chapters of those novels. Very exciting.

I was drawn in by the introduction. Currently reading Chapter 7. The author's writing is very good. The plot is also very good. Like!

The different perspective of the fan made it refreshing for me. The writing is also good, but I can't figure out why the score is so low for such a beautiful story.

Not bad, very good. I finished reading it in just a while. The author is great. Can you add one more chapter every day? The ball is gone

The subject matter is very novel and not too toxic.