In the 21st century, I am a factory worker with a guaranteed salary of 3,000 yuan a day. With my continuous efforts, I was just promoted to supervisor when I accidentally went out to buy groceries and was hit by a car. I traveled across time to a land of immortal cultivation. Here, as long as a woman is capable, she can have multiple husbands. And I I traveled directly to a newly abandoned orphan and was picked up by a couple going to the market. From then on, my life began. I liked my neighbor twin brothers, my arrogant master, my cold senior brother, and my naughty uncle. This is how my journey to becoming an immortal began.
Reader comments
. . . . Is it possible to write in the first person? The author is probably a newbie, so I would like to give you five stars for encouragement. The disadvantage is that I can't bring out the emotions, like reading a vernacular text. Come on
The story is okay, but the description is like a composition, and the pronouns are a bit weird, but the rest is fine.
It's also okay that the author is writing a novel for the first time. The jump is a bit big. The ending is good. The heroine and the male protagonist are together. Good luck, DaDa. I look forward to your new book.
I hope there will be more new books, come on, come on, come on, come on
Very nice haha [like][like][like][like][like]
It's okay, but the punctuation and first-person perspective are hard to read.
. . . . Is it possible to write in the first person? The author is probably a newbie, so I would like to give you five stars for encouragement. The disadvantage is that I can't bring out the emotions, like reading a vernacular text. Come on
The story is okay, but the description is like a composition, and the pronouns are a bit weird, but the rest is fine.
It's also okay that the author is writing a novel for the first time. The jump is a bit big. The ending is good. The heroine and the male protagonist are together. Good luck, DaDa. I look forward to your new book.
I hope there will be more new books, come on, come on, come on, come on
Very nice haha [like][like][like][like][like]
It's okay, but the punctuation and first-person perspective are hard to read.
It seems like writing an essay, come on