[Doujin Hokage] [Daily] [Not the third generation, not the Dragon King] [Huang Mao makes up for regrets] [Brother Bao Ying] [Changes to the original plot]
Tsunade: Ever since I was little, my heart has only been for my brother...
Kushina: I don't like that yellow-haired master at all!
Uchiha Madara: So, Hasi's hot mom has been looking at me...
Hei Jue: I just want to save my mother, why did you hit me＼(`Δ')／
Reader comments
It's quite interesting to become a sage and intervene in something that is regrettable (is there no Uchiha cultivating immortality?) (I hope there are multiple female protagonists, the protagonist is more attractive in the age of ninjas) (I personally think it is okay, the people who died in the 23rd ninja war will become ordinary people, almost the same as under one person, and then the ninjas who have achieved great results will practice immortality) Come on, the author is optimistic about you
It's well written. It's not like ordinary fan fiction. It writes about my own understanding of Naruto, and it also allowed me to see Naruto from another angle. It's more to my liking, and I'm not very good at writing book reviews. I'm sorry for that [laughs awkwardly]
My first Naruto fanfic, hahaha😁
At present, it seems to be okay, with some personal work mixed in, but overall it seems to be quite harmonious, and the narrative progress is moderate.
It looks okay, but I personally feel that the "motor" could be reduced. The shortcomings are too few [laughing]
I am a delicious and lazy Kirby, and I would like to call your novel the most daily novel.
Good looking, I am a real person, not a "real person" :(
So far so good
This novel is very nice
Not bad, cheers for the author
It's okay, but the plot seems to have stayed the same after changing it [face covering]
Not bad, keep writing
If the author dares to have more female leads, I will eat you.
What is the most important thing in life?
It's the heat [laughing evilly]
It's quite interesting to become a sage and intervene in something that is regrettable (is there no Uchiha cultivating immortality?) (I hope there are multiple female protagonists, the protagonist is more attractive in the age of ninjas) (I personally think it is okay, the people who died in the 23rd ninja war will become ordinary people, almost the same as under one person, and then the ninjas who have achieved great results will practice immortality) Come on, the author is optimistic about you
It's well written. It's not like ordinary fan fiction. It writes about my own understanding of Naruto, and it also allowed me to see Naruto from another angle. It's more to my liking, and I'm not very good at writing book reviews. I'm sorry for that [laughs awkwardly]
My first Naruto fanfic, hahaha😁
At present, it seems to be okay, with some personal work mixed in, but overall it seems to be quite harmonious, and the narrative progress is moderate.
It looks okay, but I personally feel that the "motor" could be reduced. The shortcomings are too few [laughing]
I am a delicious and lazy Kirby, and I would like to call your novel the most daily novel.
Good looking, I am a real person, not a "real person" :(
So far so good
This novel is very nice
Not bad, cheers for the author
It's okay, but the plot seems to have stayed the same after changing it [face covering]
Not bad, keep writing
If the author dares to have more female leads, I will eat you. What is the most important thing in life? It's the heat [laughing evilly]