Quick Travel: Can This Shura Field Be Repaired Again?

I finished reading it in one night. Well, how should I put it? I was suddenly attracted by the pop-up window of Tomato. Because I also like the second-person otome theme very much, and there are very few substitute characters, so I clicked in immediately! When I first watched it, I wasn't really touched. I always felt it was too flat, but the more you watch it, the more you can appreciate the charm of the plot. It's so good... The writing is really delicate and the sense of immersion is really strong, giving readers a lot of room for imagination. It feels like the author is really thinking about how readers think and act! This is really amazing! The author is very attentive, congratulations! Moreover, there are some very deep thoughts in the article, which make people think of each other... Each character has his own unique personality, and his expressions are well captured, and people can understand what he is like at this time... In short, it is super awesome. The male protagonists all have a real sense of being, and they made me fascinated with just one small move, and my heart skipped a beat! ! Top 1 sense of immersion! ! Shura Field is also very delicious hahaha! Each branch line has a different ending, a different choice for each reader, and what the author wants to express. The protagonist is the reader, and the ending is decided by the reader. I really want to cry, I really love the author who respects the readers so much! Confess the author. Meta is also very nb! ! Really awesome. It can't be expressed in words, in short it is a very immersive experience. In short, this book is really recommended for all readers who like otome and want to experience the plot immersively. You will not be able to stop reading it! A seriously underestimated book. The traffic should not be like this! ! ! Finally, I hope the author will be happy every day in his current life! Write more exciting works, thank you for bringing such good works to readers! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The score is low because there are few raters, and it is very beautiful. The writing is beautiful, the atmosphere is unique, and the setting is novel. The sense of immersion is very, very strong, much better than other B-games I have played that cost five digits of money (an outrageous statement). It is rare for the second person to be purely substitutive, and he is also having a state banquet. There is no such thing as a sister's baby, a heroine's baby, or yn's face is very reassuring. The default name appears rarely, except to give the person in the book a title. Is this something I can see for free? The author, or "narrator," is undoubtedly God. There is no physical description, only a first-person perspective description. From beginning to end, the focus is on "you" in front of the screen. Colorful clouds are always the easiest to disperse. After waking up from the dream, I still feel a little disappointed. Thank you to the author for creating this book, and I look forward to turning the pages next time.

My writing is super good, but maybe my cultural level is not as high as the author's. I don't know what I am commenting on, but the world view of the book is quite grand, and the first story is quite brain-burning. I really like the brother, and then there is a dialogue between the brother and the reader directly, which I find super shocking. I hope the author can stick to it, it will definitely become popular!

Both the writing style and the novelty of the article deserve five stars. Every character in the book has truly become a flesh-and-blood person through the author's pen. Every time you enter the next world, you will feel a strong reluctance. If possible, I really want the story to never end. When readers turn the page to the next chapter of the new world, they will be alone in the old world waiting for you until they die and until the world dies. A very touching book. It is great to read this book in this life. Perhaps the hardest thing to forget is Wen Changxi. Although I have not finished my life, I probably know that I will remember him until the end of my life. He is like a knife cutting into my body, but it is good to leave a scar for me to remember him. Finally, I would like to thank the author for writing this book. I will read it until the end.

I am deeply loved because of who I am. Such a preface does not match the afterword, and there is also a causal relationship. If I wish I could be beaten to death by the Chinese teacher, this is my impression after reading this book. I felt that I didn't understand love, and some people's offensive comments about Otome made me hit rock bottom, and it took me a while to climb out on my own. Maybe I really understood, maybe I was angry, I said that of course I deserved to be loved, but I was even more afraid to love. It's so magical. When I read this book, I never thought of those Ling Chi who once treated me. This book gave me a really strong feeling of being loved. I often want to shout: I don't understand love! I'm in need of love! Even though the latter sentence is often used as a curse, unfortunately no one listens, but now it has been caught. It doesn't matter if you don't understand love. I don't love you because of any of your qualities. There will be no shortage of love, because you are always deeply loved, and you will know it just by seeing them. Other books or games often have plots where you use love to transform and redeem characters. Sometimes I feel weak when reading this. I don't have the very tragic experience in the story, but when it comes to love, I am probably more ignorant than them. I looked at myself: In fact, you don't know how to love others at all. I accept the fact, whatever. But this book embraces the fact that it has done what no living person can do. Love is seen. I have seen this sentence before, but unfortunately I couldn't find any relevant books, so I gave up. I was pleasantly surprised to see it in this book. I wanted to cry, it was used so well in this book. This time, it was not that I became some set character to experience love, but that I was also seen, and I was loved for who I am. This love can be said to be a gift from the person in the book who breaks the boundaries, or it can be said to be a gift from the author to Otome and to the readers. You divided the comfort into many parts and placed them in every corner of the book. Using the confessions of people in the book as a carrier, you made the calm heart jump for joy, made the depressed heart peaceful, and made us loved. I'm glad that I read this book because of the recommendation in the comment section, and I'm very grateful that you wrote such a loving book. Since the forms of love are diverse, I would like to say that when I read this book, I was so moved that I wanted to say I love you. Thank you Ah, the following paragraph was originally meant to be inserted into the comments, but I forgot it when I was re-editing. A friend teased me: Oh, I am writing my review of the Otome novel you read again. You should learn more and become a great writer in the future. I said: If I could really write like this, my ancestors' graves would be filled with smoke. It's not just because I don't have your writing style, but also because I don't have as deep a view on love as you do. I'm very happy, I got a glimpse of some aspects of love from this book, and even if I didn't, I'm happy because I really feel that I am loved.

I thought that when the author typed the last character and presented this chapter to many readers, he also became one of the readers. Thinking about it this way, the author is also playing "you" when he reads his words. It feels like a person who knows the future pretends to know nothing and lives on the page of the story where his finger is resting, continuing the known plot, either triumphing or judging the trajectory of "you". Saying this seems to belittle the creator of the world, but don't be angry, maybe I like the drama of high-ranking people falling from the altar and arrogant people trapped in a cocoon. At least until now, I still like "your" story. That's enough, isn't it?

Hehehe, I have finished reading the first chapter. The author's writing style is what attracts me to continue reading. It is really well written. Maybe it's because I don't read novels with my brain in mind most of the time. I feel a little confused while reading. The novel setting feels very fresh. Wen Changxi (it feels a bit weird to call him brother 😬 so I'll call him by his first name) was quite annoying to me in the early stage. He was too smart or too sharp, and he was always observing and thinking. I honestly thought, wasn't he tired? (I'm kidding). I felt very uncomfortable, and it was really annoying to be seen through, but it didn't matter the further I looked at it. His inner monologue was so well written, and he had a calm sense of madness (not really, I don't know how to put it). I quite liked him. I'm just a little curious about Zhou, there's quite a big personality gap, so I don't really understand it. It's quite fun for Wen Huang to go back to various points in time and experience different things. Actually, I don't even know what I'm talking about. I just feel very emotional but don't know how to express it. When I saw the ending of the first chapter, Wen Changxi's extra chapter, I felt a bit regretful. It's everyday sentimentality, haha. Finally, the author's writing is super nice😚. How did I find this article? . .

This book touched me very much. The review of "It's Very Good" is too fake for me. It should be said that it is unforgettable for me. It's not that this book is not good-looking, but I don't want to comment on whether it is good or not. There is no criterion for judging the quality of a book, because everyone has different needs for books. Therefore, if you like substitution, time travel, etc., I will undoubtedly recommend this book with full stars. Even if I find that this book has shortcomings in the future, it doesn't matter. At least now, after reading it, I firmly give it full stars (*╹▽╹*) I like every story in this book. The setting of the story is novel, the plot is no longer a routine, the author's writing is good, each character is three-dimensional, "my" thoughts are dominated by me, and the people in the story also have their own ideas. I believe that they are still active outside the story, but I have only read this far. I cannot accurately describe the charm of this book. Only those who read it can understand it, so try to read it! As a reader, I often read stories as a third party, and the emotions of the characters can also be reflected with empathy, but there is always a barrier between them. It is true that there are authors who create characters that are lifelike, but we readers always know it. Whether you believe it or not, you don't believe it. In your heart, you also understand that reality is just a text, which exists objectively. I have read a lot of second-person books, and most of them are told from the perspective of the protagonist of the story. This one's substitution perspective is special for the reader, and it really stood out to me. I was immersed in it, and as I continued reading, the story about "me" unfolded. The distance between us and the readers is infinitely shortened. We are reading books and we are also experiencing the stories in them. This feeling is like the only son in "Omniscient" opening the first chapter of "Inactivation Method". The author, the reader, and the protagonist are all indispensable. In fact, everything in the book is indispensable, but it has been prioritized. The novel is inherently fantasy, so I also have fantasies about the novel.

It's a very nice book, with a great sense of immersion. I'm currently reading the second world. The author's writing is very touching and the writing is super good. It feels very cultural. The first world is also very interesting. It feels like a closed loop and has a lot of imagination. It's very nice to read.

Well, there is a lot to say, so let me take my time. I just casually clicked in to read the introduction. I thought it was quite interesting, so I came to read it. I didn't expect it to be so pleasantly surprised. It feels like accidentally seeing a very good-looking cake on the street. I didn't have much expectations for its taste, but it was an unexpected surprise. 1: It's very immersive. I like this sense of immersion. This is in the second person, and I personally don't care. 2: I just watched the first world, and I can't wait to write a review. I will follow up on it. I like my brother Wen Changxi. I have to say that you succeeded, the author, and you succeeded in making him come alive. At least in my mind he survived. A brother who is flesh and blood and very perceptive. I want to praise the author. Corresponding to the front and back, the grass gray snake line and pit positions are all filled. 3: The writing is very good. This is the first time I have paid for Tomato. Author, you succeeded. The writing style gives me the feeling that it is real and relevant, not too gorgeous, low-key and connotative. 4: So far, I have no dissatisfaction, everything is good. Please read my follow-up review next.

After reading the first story, I couldn't get out of it at all. I really like my brother. The plot and writing are very good. I really like it. The substitution and optional plots are also very novel. I will keep reading! Thank you to the author for such a great work! O(´･ᆺ･`)o

After reading the whole article, I really like this book. I have always searched for it. The whole book actually exceeded my expectations. The writing, logic, conception, ideas, and character creation are all very good. There are many plot settings in the story that made my eyes shine, and I also experienced a good sense of immersion and subjectivity as a reader. I really like Zaheer and Dazhou Yuechuan. When I found that there are only three worlds in the whole book, I was really reluctant to finish it. I'm very grateful to the author for creating this story, and I'm really looking forward to the second one!

I have finished reading it. Compared with five stars, maybe four and a half stars would be more in line with my opinion. However, it is obvious that the author has put great care into the whole article, so it is reasonable to give it five stars! Let me talk about the biggest feeling, the withdrawal reaction is very serious... Whether it is Wen Changxi, Zahir or Ying Guanqi (yes, I love him more than Zhou Yuechuan, who has already experienced the protagonist once (wait...)), I almost shed tears when I saw the end, and I felt sour... The meta (is that what it's called) that pops up from time to time also gives me goosebumps. Setting one, setting two, and so on reminds me of a certain ancient Yuan Zao editor who I like very much... Is this the feeling of brain wave synchronization... In short, I am very happy and delicious. Although there are indeed flaws compared to some other articles I have read (for example, the ending where destiny is mine at the end feels like it could have been handled better), but because the core is so powerful, the whole story reads very smoothly. In order to read the next chapter, I even stayed up two nights (don't learn this, good boy) and finished it in three or four days (it's just because I read it quickly that the withdrawal reaction was severe)! There is anything else I want to say. There were so many things I wanted to say when I was watching it that I can't even remember any of them now (scratch). I will definitely find some free time to play through it two times, three times, and n times. It will feel more tasteful to go back and read many details. I will leave crazy comments on the passages that I feel when I re-read it... Oops, I remembered something. Every time the puppy male protagonist goes offline, I feel shocked and painful: Don't do this to the puppy, hey—! It looks good... It looks good... Can I write half a million words a day for the rest of my life (worm fantasy squirms and squirms). All in all, now I'm going to read the author's other articles, you know, eh, eh, eh… Tonic is bullying the puppy again! ! !

The setting is very novel, the sense of immersion is okay, and the writing is good. The further you go, the more you can see that the writing is improving. The second-person writing style is delicate and the logic is smooth. Some of the characters are very interesting and full of characters. I like this book so much. The "you" expressed in the language has almost no appearance description or prominent character. This book repeatedly emphasizes that what the male protagonists like is you as a reader off the screen! When you ask "Why do you like me?" Most authors will give the beautiful qualities of "you" in the work, such as strength and sincerity... But Zahir, one of the protagonists in the second volume of this novel, said, "Describing the beautiful qualities of you is like making demands on you."

Holy shit. After reading the first story, I really like Chu Zhuyun. . After reading it, I found that it had a bit of an open ending... It was really well written, but there was a hint of sadness between the lines that made me want to cry. It was wonderful meeting you all, I love it. No matter who I'm with, it's delicious🥰. Everyone is my wing﹥<, but the teacher's portrait of me has a very good personality. This is simply me∧∧, so delicious. I finished reading the first story, but I didn't expect the ending to be unexpected. . How the fuck is this open…. . (The writing is awesome, I'm just going crazy, don't worry)

Are you interested in publishing a physical book after finishing it? I love it so much that I can't touch or feel it through the screen. I really want to touch the words that contain Zahir. I will spread out this book and take it with me. I will cherish it. I am reluctant to touch it for fear of damaging the paper, but I read the story again and again until the pages are mottled. After reading this story over and over again, I can't wait to meet Zahir every time I read it. Don't be afraid, we will meet again after a short separation. My words sometimes fail to express my true feelings and can cause misunderstandings. In short, I am very grateful for reading this story. Thank you for allowing me to meet you and for being lucky enough to read your words.

When I read the second story, I was on vacation after a busy day. I stayed up late last night and read the first story. When I woke up, it was already one o'clock in the afternoon. It was cloudy outside the window, and it might be raining. In the increasingly dark sky, I lay on the bed, and I was the only one in the quiet room. In the text, the ice crystals of the Northland spiers brought me the familiar cold but fresh breath of winter snow, and the southern rainforests and campfires brought me the fragrance of moisture and earth. I seemed to have entered this world... The author's writing style is like a stream of consciousness in some places, which is a bit convoluted. Following the author is also a surge of self-imagination. It is a very interesting experience. For the first time in reading, I realized that "I" am the reader of the characters and even plants in the book. I even had the urge to write something by myself, but the product of my previous impulse was often just a few fragments, which could not be fully written. I used the excuse that I was too busy in reality or had no inspiration. The broken storyline in my mind always seemed like an unfinished dream. I hope that I can express it as heartily as the author in the future.

I only finished reading the first story. It hurts so much. My brother was left alone there. I felt like when I was a kid watching the scene where the heroine ended up in the museum in the finale of Step by Step. I wanted to stay there, but I couldn't. 🥹🥹🥹

I just finished reading the second story. It was recommended to me by xhs. The person who recommended it said that he liked the first world the best. So when I read it, I had great expectations for the first world. I was also a little worried that the later ones would not be as good as the previous ones. But it was not at all. Compared to the first world, the second world attracted me more. Maybe it was due to the length. In the first world, only the character of the brother was more complete and three-dimensional. In the second world, everyone was complete, especially the light and the clone. They were very loving and the world view was also very interesting. It was really cool to find out in the end that everything in the second world is a closed loop. But it was a bit of a pity that he didn't choose him in the end. It was a pity that he didn't even say goodbye properly. Let's take a break and continue to taste the last world.

Is this God? It's so well written, how could it be so awesome? . The feeling of immersion is very strong but my heart still hurts. I have only finished watching the first world so far. The narrative technique of this world is very special. Although some places feel blank, is it not a blank space? I just feel very sorry for your feelings towards me. But as mentioned in the article, my feelings about this are only temporary and may dissipate soon. If I like it, let it happen. If I don't like it, let it be destroyed. Everything is in my hands. I like this world very much, thank you for bringing me thoughts. It makes my stomach hurt. . . Author, why do you write so well? I am convinced. . It actually made me a little afraid to watch the second world and the third world, but I was really curious about the next plot... Author, how can you repay the tears you owe me [crying] [crying]

Just as a novel, the story is not boring, the pace is comfortable, the text is fresh and not cumbersome, the male protagonists have novel characters and real emotions, it is already top quality. What is even more novel is that as a memory, reading it is like awakening oneself in another world, not like a new thing, but like a memory that has been experienced before but forgotten. The sense of substitution is amazing. The experience of opening it for the first time is absolutely amazing and precious. This book is worth reading by everyone. In the end, I didn't dare to read it anymore. The panic of reading one chapter and missing another chapter made me reluctant to read it😿

It's very good. It's very imaginative. It's not a short story, but I can't understand it. It's so confusing. I feel like a lot of things are not explained clearly. Maybe it's because I read it too quickly and I didn't describe much of the emotional scenes. If you're here for the guide, you don't need to read it. If you don't have the patience for now, you can catch up later. It's still very good.

Become the God of Otome! And originally I thought it was just a light cookie, but I didn't expect that there are still many interesting settings and thoughts in it (I am stupid and sometimes don't understand it very well), the foreshadowing is very deep, and the author's writing style is also very good and very fascinating. And metameta we love you! The male protagonist is also very cute, the world just revolves around us🥰 I've caught up with it all, and I feel a bit lost. I typed a lot of words and then deleted them, and it's hard to express what I want to say (of course, it's also because my expressive skills are terrible). Anyway, very nice! Looking forward to meeting next time!

I really like the big writing style and imaginative ideas, and I can't help but indulge in the words. The tangled psychology of wanting to participate in the vote but not wanting to tie the knot qvq When they cry, they really poke me in the xp. Most of the first volume was spent in amnesia and flashbacks. By the time I figured out what was going on, it was already at the end [crying] [crying] [crying] But it's foggy At present, all the options are almost the line I want to walk, except whether or not to shoot the lead arrow. But when I saw that the God of Love said that it will not cancel out, but will only love the pain of your love, I felt that this was not the line I wanted, and I started to feel lucky that I didn't shoot the lead arrow. But I don't understand why I embraced God in the end when I knew that God of Love seemed to be using me to create a triangle. Instead of punching Him? ——I haven't finished reading this world yet, and I feel that the God of Love is not clear about it now. What about the four-corner relationship? ? ——After reading this volume, I now understand why the God of Love wants to hook up but doesn't take any actual action. Looking forward to more stories, will there be vampires [I learned it]

It's interesting but not attractive enough to continue reading (only for myself). It's just that this novel is not suitable for me. At present, it feels fluttery, empty, and light. It has a bit of literary or philosophical flavor. The writing and logic can be seen to be online.

The whole book is literary and artistic, the author's language expressions are very philosophical, and the plot runs through it. However, if you don't like this style, you will probably hate it because you don't have the patience to appreciate the meaning of the words. Most people read novels just for fun. In this fast-paced environment, it is rare to have a novel that can make you think. It's not that the writing is so good, why is the popularity so low? More people will read it, please hurry up.

I don't know what to say, it's so beautiful that I'm at a loss for words... The writing style is very, very beautiful, and the character creation is also very good. It only has a few sentences or even a description, but the atmosphere that the author wants to express was completely conveyed to me🥰🥰🥰 Meta's extras left a deep impression on me. I can only say that the author's writing skills are profound... Very, very, very, very, very, very good article, boss, I will follow you...

I really liked it after reading it. It's a pity that it's so short. I like Ying Guanqi the most. The writing is very charming and the article is very immersive. This type is really rare. The author's writing is also good. There is no meal replacement at all. I really like it. I really want to read the follow-up [crying]

Looks good, looks good, looks good. Like! ! ! ! Favorite! ! ! A theme setting that I have never seen before. Meta is so cool...! While I was debating whether to stock up on articles or catch up on updates, I couldn't help but finish reading it and couldn't bear to leave it. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh where is the next chapter. Goddess, come on, I will always follow you.

I have finished reading the first world, and I have become the god of Otome. The writing is exquisite. Thank you to the author for writing such an interesting world. It is really amazing. [Blowing Kiss] The meta elements are just right. The dialogue between the characters and "I" really shocked me. I feel your passionate love, Wen Changxi. I hope this good book can be read by more people, Super Carved Goddess, I love you! [Blowing kiss]