Quick Transmigration: Here's the Pen, You Write It

I finished reading it in one night. Well, how should I put it? I was suddenly attracted by the pop-up window of Tomato. Because I also like the second-person otome theme very much, and there are very few substitute characters, so I clicked in immediately! When I first watched it, I wasn't really touched. I always felt it was too flat, but the more you watch it, the more you can appreciate the charm of the plot. It's so good... The writing is really delicate and the sense of immersion is really strong, giving readers a lot of room for imagination. It feels like the author is really thinking about how readers think and act! This is really amazing! The author is very attentive, congratulations! Moreover, there are some very deep thoughts in the article, which make people think of each other... Each character has his own unique personality, and his expressions are well captured, and people can understand what he is like at this time... In short, it is super awesome. The male protagonists all have a real sense of being, and they made me fascinated with just one small move, and my heart skipped a beat!! Top 1 sense of immersion!! Shura Field is also very delicious hahaha! Each branch line has a different ending, a different choice for each reader, and what the author wants to express. The protagonist is the reader, and the ending is decided by the reader. I really want to cry, I really love the author who respects the readers so much! Confess the author. Meta is also very nb!! Really awesome. It can't be expressed in words, in short it is a very immersive experience. In short, this book is really recommended for all readers who like otome and want to experience the plot immersively. You will not be able to stop reading it! A seriously underestimated book. The traffic should not be like this!!! Finally, I hope the author will be happy every day in his current life! Write more exciting works, thank you for bringing such good works to readers! 😘😘

The score is low because there are few raters, and it is very beautiful. The writing is beautiful, the atmosphere is unique, and the setting is novel. The sense of immersion is very, very strong, much better than other B-games I have played that cost five digits of money (an outrageous statement). It is rare for the second person to be purely substitutive, and he is also having a state banquet. There is no such thing as a sister's baby, a heroine's baby, or yn's face is very reassuring. The default name appears rarely, except to give the person in the book a title. Is this something I can see for free? The author, or "narrator," is undoubtedly God. There is no physical description, only a first-person perspective description. From beginning to end, the focus is on "you" in front of the screen. Colorful clouds are always the easiest to disperse. After waking up from the dream, I still feel a little disappointed. Thank you to the author for creating this book, and I look forward to turning the pages next time.

My writing is super good, but maybe my cultural level is not as high as the author's. I don't know what I am commenting on, but the world view of the book is quite grand, and the first story is quite brain-burning. I really like the brother, and then there is a dialogue between the brother and the reader directly, which I find super shocking. I hope the author can stick to it, it will definitely become popular!

Both the writing style and the novelty of the article deserve five stars. Every character in the book has truly become a flesh-and-blood person through the author's pen. Every time you enter the next world, you will feel a strong reluctance. If possible, I really want the story to never end. When readers turn the page to the next chapter of the new world, they will be alone in the old world waiting for you until they die and until the world dies. A very touching book. It is great to read this book in this life. Perhaps the hardest thing to forget is Wen Changxi. Although I have not finished my life, I probably know that I will remember him until the end of my life. He is like a knife cutting into my body, but it is good to leave a scar for me to remember him. Finally, I would like to thank the author for writing this book. I will read it until the end.

I am deeply loved because of who I am. Such a preface does not match the afterword, and there is also a causal relationship. If I wish I could be beaten to death by the Chinese teacher, this is my impression after reading this book. I felt that I didn't understand love, and some people's offensive comments about Otome made me hit rock bottom, and it took me a while to climb out on my own. Maybe I really understood, maybe I was angry, I said that of course I deserved to be loved, but I was even more afraid to love. It's so magical. When I read this book, I never thought of those Ling Chi who once treated me. This book gave me a really strong feeling of being loved. I often want to shout: I don't understand love! I'm in need of love! Even though the latter sentence is often used as a curse, unfortunately no one listens, but now it has been caught. It doesn't matter if you don't understand love. I don't love you because of any of your qualities. There will be no shortage of love, because you are always deeply loved, and you will know it just by seeing them. Other books or games often have plots where you use love to transform and redeem characters. Sometimes I feel weak when reading this. I don't have the very tragic experience in the story, but when it comes to love, I am probably more ignorant than them. I looked at myself: In fact, you don't know how to love others at all. I accept the fact, whatever. But this book embraces the fact that it has done what no living person can do. Love is seen. I have seen this sentence before, but unfortunately I couldn't find any relevant books, so I gave up. I was pleasantly surprised to see it in this book. I wanted to cry, it was used so well in this book. This time, it was not that I became some set character to experience love, but that I was also seen, and I was loved for who I am. This love can be said to be a gift from the person in the book who breaks the boundaries, or it can be said to be a gift from the author to Otome and to the readers. You divided the comfort into many parts and placed them in every corner of the book. Using the confessions of people in the book as a carrier, you made the calm heart jump for joy, made the depressed heart peaceful, and made us loved. I'm glad that I read this book because of the recommendation in the comment section, and I'm very grateful that you wrote such a loving book. Since the forms of love are diverse, I would like to say that when I read this book, I was so moved that I wanted to say I love you. Thank you Ah, the following paragraph was originally meant to be inserted into the comments, but I forgot it when I was re-editing. A friend teased me: Oh, I am writing my review of the Otome novel you read again. You should learn more and become a great writer in the future. I said: If I could really write like this, my ancestors' graves would be filled with smoke. It's not just because I don't have your writing style, but also because I don't have as deep a view on love as you do. I'm very happy, I got a glimpse of some aspects of love from this book, and even if I didn't, I'm happy because I really feel that I am loved.

I thought that when the author typed the last character and presented this chapter to many readers, he also became one of the readers. Thinking about it this way, the author is also playing "you" when he reads his words. It feels like a person who knows the future pretends to know nothing and lives on the page of the story where his finger is resting, continuing the known plot, either triumphing or judging the trajectory of "you". Saying this seems to belittle the creator of the world, but don't be angry, maybe I like the drama of high-ranking people falling from the altar and arrogant people trapped in a cocoon. At least until now, I still like "your" story. That's enough, isn't it?

Hehehe, I have finished reading the first chapter. The author's writing style is what attracts me to continue reading. It is really well written. Maybe it's because I don't read novels with my brain in mind most of the time. I feel a little confused while reading. The novel setting feels very fresh. Wen Changxi (it feels a bit weird to call him brother 😬 so I'll call him by his first name) was quite annoying to me in the early stage. He was too smart or too sharp, and he was always observing and thinking. I honestly thought, wasn't he tired? (I'm kidding). I felt very uncomfortable, and it was really annoying to be seen through, but it didn't matter the further I looked at it. His inner monologue was so well written, and he had a calm sense of madness (not really, I don't know how to put it). I quite liked him. I'm just a little curious about Zhou, there's quite a big personality gap, so I don't really understand it. It's quite fun for Wen Huang to go back to various points in time and experience different things. Actually, I don't even know what I'm talking about. I just feel very emotional but don't know how to express it. When I saw the ending of the first chapter, Wen Changxi's extra chapter, I felt a bit regretful. It's everyday sentimentality, haha. Finally, the author's writing is super nice😚. How did I find this article? . .

The setting is very novel, the sense of immersion is okay, and the writing is good. The further you go, the more you can see that the writing is improving. The second-person writing style is delicate and the logic is smooth. Some of the characters are very interesting and full of characters. I like this book so much. The "you" expressed in the language has almost no appearance description or prominent character. This book repeatedly emphasizes that what the male protagonists like is you as a reader off the screen! When you ask "Why do you like me?" Most authors will give the beautiful qualities of "you" in the work, such as strength and sincerity... But Zahir, one of the protagonists in the second volume of this novel, said, "Describing the beautiful qualities of you is like making demands on you."

This book touched me very much. The review of "It's Very Good" is too fake for me. It should be said that it is unforgettable for me. It's not that this book is not good-looking, but I don't want to comment on whether it is good or not. There is no criterion for judging the quality of a book, because everyone has different needs for books. Therefore, if you like substitution, time travel, etc., I will undoubtedly recommend this book with full stars. Even if I find that this book has shortcomings in the future, it doesn't matter. At least now, after reading it, I firmly give it full stars (*╹▽╹*) I like every story in this book. The setting of the story is novel, the plot is no longer a routine, the author's writing is good, each character is three-dimensional, "my" thoughts are dominated by me, and the people in the story also have their own ideas. I believe that they are still active outside the story, but I have only read this far. I cannot accurately describe the charm of this book. Only those who read it can understand it, so try to read it! As a reader, I often read stories as a third party, and the emotions of the characters can also be reflected with empathy, but there is always a barrier between them. It is true that there are authors who create characters that are lifelike, but we readers always know it. Whether you believe it or not, you don't believe it. In your heart, you also understand that reality is just a text, which exists objectively. I have read a lot of second-person books, and most of them are told from the perspective of the protagonist of the story. This one's substitution perspective is special for the reader, and it really stood out to me. I was immersed in it, and as I continued reading, the story about "me" unfolded. The distance between us and the readers is infinitely shortened. We are reading books and we are also experiencing the stories in them. This feeling is like the only son in "Omniscient" opening the first chapter of "Inactivation Method". The author, the reader, and the protagonist are all indispensable. In fact, everything in the book is indispensable, but it has been prioritized. The novel is inherently fantasy, so I also have fantasies about the novel.

It's a very nice book, with a great sense of immersion. I'm currently reading the second world. The author's writing is very touching and the writing is super good. It feels very cultural. The first world is also very interesting. It feels like a closed loop and has a lot of imagination. It's very nice to read.