[Two male leads] [Quick Transmigration] [Romance]
The System is an avid reader. It discovers a hidden-gem author whose smooth prose is practically god-tier! But the plots... leave a lot to be desired...
After finishing the tenth book, it flies into a rage!
“Sure, you always have an excuse! Explain this one: the male lead falls in love with a cafeteria lady after turning sixteen. She’s fifty-five!”
Li Ming is a freelancer whose ten novels have all flopped. Then a System shows up at his door, threatening to send him a box cutter?
Li Ming raises his chin smugly. “He doesn’t just date the cafeteria lady. He dates any woman, and he likes all the men too!”
The System can’t take it anymore! It throws Li Ming straight into one of his novels. “Fine! I can’t argue with you! Then you can be the male lead. You’re not getting out until you fix the entire plot!”
Later, Li Ming says, “Boohoo... System, did you mess with the plot? Why are all the people I meet perverts...”
A fiercely outspoken introverted author as the bottom x a System reader forced into becoming a maniac as the top
1: After Becoming the Pitiful One at School, I Worked My Way into Being a Top Student
2: A Useless Body from the Start, I Fled in Terror from a Maniac
3: Roommate, I Really Don’t Have a Cross-Dressing Fetish
4: The Disabled Fake Young Master Was Abducted by a Maniac Again
5: After a Maniac Took the Pretty Little Ghost Home, He Was Kissed Into a Daze
6: He Mocked Me for Slacking Off, but I Laughed at Him for Being Only at the Foundation Establishment Stage
7: I Helped Him Take the Throne, but the Eldest Prince Wants to Imprison Me
8: The Pitiful One in the Apocalypse Turns Out to Be the Real Big Shot
9: The Rich Lady in the Online Game Is a Guy, and Now He’s Mine
10: After a Cruel Broken Engagement, My Shizun Took Me Home and Forced Me into a Relationship
Short story: Love Should Grow Wild and Free
It's still okay, but the description of Li Ming's appearance in the early stage seems to be a bit disconnected from the full text, as if the style of painting has suddenly changed. There are some aspects that really surprised me, because I didn't expect that there would be an author who dared to write it, and I couldn't believe it. I didn't expect that I would finish it. The author is really perseverant. I can see that he really enjoys writing novels and is very optimistic. Haha, I didn't expect that it would end so quickly. Also, I want to say that the short film about Li Minghe System is so sad. Can you be sweeter? 🥺 Author, I will continue to support you. Come on👏 keep writing! 💕💕💕💕💕
The writing is still very interesting, and the contrast between the protagonists is also very funny. But I would like to make a small comment. It was the part where the protagonist was falsely accused of cheating. I felt that the old teacher's behavior was a bit exaggerated. To be honest, she discovered that the protagonist was really a genius. That part really scared me. It was a bit suspended and unrealistic. After all, I have been teaching for so many years and have so many students. A behavior pattern like this is not appropriate. If the author has the time and the willingness to make a change, that is also very good, but if there is no time and no ideas, in fact, there is nothing and you can treat this paragraph as if you have not seen it. Except for this paragraph, I see that there seems to be no problem now. The writing is good, especially the contrast between the protagonist's character is quite interesting. I personally think the handling of some places is very good. Overall, I can see that the flaws are not concealed now. Ignoring some of the things that weren't handled very well, it's still pretty good.
It's not bad. It's very interesting. Are you interested in making a sequel? (๑ºั╰╯ºั๑)
Really super pretty.
Can the author? Let the protagonist make up for the regrets of this person in the first world again. It's really touching Is it possible to have Onda and the protagonist do a sideshow together?
The golden finger is too big and it's too easy to give. Add some plot twists and the first world is also fun and not that bland.