[Two male protagonists] [Quick travel] [With cp] The system is an old bookworm who loves to read, and it discovered a treasure. The author's writing is smooth and can directly become a god! But the plot... Is hard to describe in a word...
After reading the tenth book, he was furious!
"Okay, whatever you say makes sense! In this book, how do you explain the male protagonist falling in love with an aunt who works as a rice cook after he turns 16? The aunt who works as a rice cook is already fifty-five!"
Li Ming, a freelancer, after reading ten novels in a row, was approached by a system that wanted to give him a razor blade?
Li Ming raised his chin and said proudly: "He doesn't just fall in love with the rice cook aunt, he falls in love with any woman, and all men like this!"
The system can't bear it anymore and there is no need to bear it anymore! Directly throwing Li Ming into one of the novels, "Okay! I can't tell you! Then you can be the male protagonist until the plot is corrected before it comes out!"
Later, Li Ming said: "Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurdanny... Did you change the plot randomly in the system? Why are all the perverts I met..."
Violent output i human author is attacked vs system reader who is driven to madness
1: After becoming a poor kid on campus, I became a top student
2: I started with a useless physique, and I was so frightened by the crazy comments that I ran away.
Three: Roommate, I really don't have a fetish for cross-dressing
Four: The disabled fake young master was abducted by crazy critics again
5: The pretty kid was stunned after being taken home by crazy critics
Six: He laughed at me for not doing my job properly, and I laughed at him for only having a foundation-building period.
Seven: Help him ascend the throne, the eldest prince wants to imprison me
8: The poor little guy in the apocalypse turns out to be a real boss
9: The rich woman in the online game is actually a boy, and she is mine now
10: After the engagement was broken off, the master took him home and forced her to have sex with him
Short story "Love must grow wantonly"
Reader comments
It's still okay, but the description of Li Ming's appearance in the early stage seems to be a bit disconnected from the full text, as if the style of painting has suddenly changed. There are some aspects that really surprised me, because I didn't expect that there would be an author who dared to write it, and I couldn't believe it. I didn't expect that I would finish it. The author is really perseverant. I can see that he really enjoys writing novels and is very optimistic. Haha, I didn't expect that it would end so quickly. Also, I want to say that the short film about Li Minghe System is so sad. Can you be sweeter? [I'm about to cry] Author, I will continue to support you. Come on👏 keep writing! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
The writing is still very interesting, and the contrast between the protagonists is also very funny.
But I would like to make a small comment.
It was the part where the protagonist was falsely accused of cheating. I felt that the old teacher's behavior was a bit exaggerated. To be honest, she discovered that the protagonist was really a genius. That part really scared me. It was a bit suspended and unrealistic. After all, I have been teaching for so many years and have so many students. A behavior pattern like this is not appropriate. If the author has the time and the willingness to make a change, that is also very good, but if there is no time and no ideas, in fact, there is nothing and you can treat this paragraph as if you have not seen it.
Except for this paragraph, I see that there seems to be no problem now. The writing is good, especially the contrast between the protagonist's character is quite interesting. I personally think the handling of some places is very good. Overall, I can see that the flaws are not concealed now. Ignoring some of the things that weren't handled very well, it's still pretty good.
It's not bad. It's very interesting. Are you interested in making a sequel? (๑ºั╰╯ºั๑)
Really super pretty.
Can the author? Let the protagonist make up for the regrets of this person in the first world again. It's really touching
Is it possible to have Onda and the protagonist do a sideshow together?
The golden finger is too big and it's too easy to give. Add some plot twists and the first world is also fun and not that bland.
It's still okay, but the description of Li Ming's appearance in the early stage seems to be a bit disconnected from the full text, as if the style of painting has suddenly changed. There are some aspects that really surprised me, because I didn't expect that there would be an author who dared to write it, and I couldn't believe it. I didn't expect that I would finish it. The author is really perseverant. I can see that he really enjoys writing novels and is very optimistic. Haha, I didn't expect that it would end so quickly. Also, I want to say that the short film about Li Minghe System is so sad. Can you be sweeter? [I'm about to cry] Author, I will continue to support you. Come on👏 keep writing! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
The writing is still very interesting, and the contrast between the protagonists is also very funny. But I would like to make a small comment. It was the part where the protagonist was falsely accused of cheating. I felt that the old teacher's behavior was a bit exaggerated. To be honest, she discovered that the protagonist was really a genius. That part really scared me. It was a bit suspended and unrealistic. After all, I have been teaching for so many years and have so many students. A behavior pattern like this is not appropriate. If the author has the time and the willingness to make a change, that is also very good, but if there is no time and no ideas, in fact, there is nothing and you can treat this paragraph as if you have not seen it. Except for this paragraph, I see that there seems to be no problem now. The writing is good, especially the contrast between the protagonist's character is quite interesting. I personally think the handling of some places is very good. Overall, I can see that the flaws are not concealed now. Ignoring some of the things that weren't handled very well, it's still pretty good.
It's not bad. It's very interesting. Are you interested in making a sequel? (๑ºั╰╯ºั๑)
Really super pretty.
Can the author? Let the protagonist make up for the regrets of this person in the first world again. It's really touching Is it possible to have Onda and the protagonist do a sideshow together?
The golden finger is too big and it's too easy to give. Add some plot twists and the first world is also fun and not that bland.