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Douluo's Book, Torture Tang San, Beat the Master
Douluo's book, join the Wuhun Palace, the master and Tang San are best killed
Looking for Fan Fiction That Travels to Douluo Continent
The wonderful story of the male protagonist traveling to Douluo Continent and being with Tang San
Are There Any Fans of Douluo Dalu 2 Peerless Tang Sect?
I haven't found anything good yet
Douluo's First Soul Ring Is 100,000 Years Old
Douluo Continent Twin Dragon Spirits, the Heroine Qian Renxue
Douluo Continent Twin Dragon Spirits, the female protagonist Qian Renxue.
Douluo: at the Age of 18, I Have Become a Titled Douluo, and the System Asked Me to Go to Shrek
I traveled to the Douluo Continent and became a titled Douluo when I was 18 years old. As a result, the system asked me to go to Shrek to complete the task @ Shuai Shuai's Toothpick Cloud. Toothpick Cloud can give me some advice.
Traveling to Douluo Continent to Awaken the System of Many Children and Many Blessings, the Protagonist Is the Man-Faced Demon Spider
Please, Douluo, Conquer at the Beginning, Xiao Wu
Invincible Level 99 Ultimate Douluo at the Beginning
If you want a cool article, a cool article about picking up weapons at the beginning
If You Like "Bibi Dong", Come and Take a Look
A Titled Douluo Enters the Spirit Hall at the Beginning and Becomes the Ninth One to Be Enshrined.
Pure Douluo Only Accepted Ning Rongrong
Douluo Who Doesn't Want to Be Obscene. or Break Up
Don't accept women's obscene articles, don't step on the protagonists, don't seize opportunities, and follow a new path of cultivation by yourself. Just two of the three points will be enough.
Wearing Douluo, He Beat the Seven Monsters as Soon as He Entered the Academy and Doubted His Life.
This Only Requires Douluo, and Anyone Who Comes Will Not Be Rejected.
Any type is fine, as long as it's Douluo, it's OK
Seek Pure Douluo, Have a System, Martial Soul Dark Gold Terror Claw Bear, Inherit the Throne of Destruction
The Protagonist of Douluo Dalu Is a Support, but Very Strong. I Love Watching This When I'm Older
The protagonist's assistant is very powerful. I don't like Tang San.
Seek to Travel to Douluo Continent and Become a Hundred Thousand Year Soul Beast
Douluo, Accept the Three Beauties of Wuhun Palace, Become Bibi Dong's Disciple, and Torture the Shrek Seven Monsters
Douluo Continent Wuhun Palace, Fighting Tang San in the Competition
Douluo Continent, Title Douluo at the Beginning, More Than 500,000 Words
Don't push it if it's not Douluo, it's better to be Dou Yi, the kind who steps on Tang San.
Douluo Dalu, the Female Protagonist, CP Is Guang Ling Douluo
I want to read a book similar to "Douluo: Snowfall and Linglan". The protagonist must be a girl, a girl! Cp must be Light Ling Douluo.
Douluo Fanfic, Don't Criticize the Protagonist Group at Every Turn
I want to read a book similar to "People in Another World, Awakening Twin Martial Spirits". Don't always criticize the protagonist group. It takes up too much space. It seems annoying and affects the viewing experience. Try to reduce the system. Thank you^_^
The subject matter is pretty good, but it's still a bit sparse now, and the plot of Axiang and the snake-catching village accounts for too much. If you didn't use the first person, I wouldn't even know whether the protagonist is a dragon or Axiang. Are you writing like this to be like the mythical beast of the clan? If not, I can only say that we will transition this plot as soon as possible. , Because it makes no sense, the protagonist has not grown in any strength during this period (it doesn't make any difference if he grows up or not), and you write about other people in the first person (because you are not a group portrait article, writing in the first person is awkward for others, and they don't necessarily revolve around the protagonist. Even if you reduce the plot of other people in the eyes of the protagonist, it would be good, but your plot is capturing The plot of Snake Village and the plot of A Xiang going to school are completely described like a bystander. If you hadn't said that he was the protagonist, I would have thought that the protagonist was that A Xiang). It's not interesting to see the protagonist like a bystander. I came to see the protagonist, not a passerby, and I am an original passerby (mainly because this plot currently takes too long). The protagonist is a soul beast, and the relationship between soul beasts and humans is clear to those who have watched Douluo. Don't write so many plots that have too deep contact with humans. Even if you were a human before (you said that the protagonist is approaching snakes), you can't want the protagonist to be Xiao Wu A Yin, or people like the Silver Dragon King and those soul beast traitors (after all, there is nothing good to say about Love Brain Continent). If you want to write better, try to keep the first-person focus on the protagonist, rather than flying around here and there (referring to the plot of Chapter 54). You can't write every character in the first person, and you can also draw a dividing line when changing characters.
Overall it's pretty good. Score a score by the way.
First person is not good
Compared with Tomato's other Douluo fanfics, it's okay.
Good potential
Average but not too bad