Humans Are Evil and Want to Save the World

Beautiful, love watching. Finally there is a fate novel that is not a simulator. Is it that hard to find a book that tells a story honestly?

It's good-looking, it's Tomato after all, and this book is outstanding here. By the way, author, please add some keywords in your introduction or book title. I can't find your book in searches like fgo and xingyue.

It's very beautiful, needless to say. The setting is also very complete, but the update is a little slow (quietly), but the protagonist is set in Beast and is in FGO, so I feel that the novel will not be very long. Can the author make a small comment about this and tell me the length of the article in mind? It doesn't matter if you don't say it! It looks very comfortable. I'm going to brush it again.

Learn from mushrooms, right? It weakens the strong ones and strengthens a bunch of shock waves. How far has the evil god of Zoroastrianism been strengthened? Wushang is full of holy swords, and the surface range is AOE. The opposing fire and good are cut into dogs. There is nothing you can do against the evil god. Gaia and humans have been washed, and there is no fart reaction. The common disease of moon-shaped moon came out, and the blowing was so bad that even a dog on the roadside was beaten to death, and there was no one left.

The part where the goddess proposes is quite touching, with that kind of narrative expression and the character's personality is quite distinct. The author adds more

The previous writing is very good. I feel that the opening conditions for the Noble Phantasm can be used as a reference for ascending to heaven. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. Will Mom have her own plan after she comes out? When will we break up with the dead? It's not necessarily necessary to write all the special points and lost tapes. It's better to be a little original.

I have to say that this book is what I want to learn from. It is wonderful, restores the characters, and is slightly funny. I am also planning to write this type of book. I will give it a try and learn from it.

Let me evaluate it objectively. Disadvantages: In the early stage, there was a Genshin Impact song, which was a bit controversial. Then there should be a point of suppressing the protagonist's combat power. Just looking at the panel, I feel that the protagonist is very strong. When it comes to actual combat, he is always 55 vs. Everyone. Then there is the Tomu Holy Grail War that was modified by the magic version. It has no shortcomings. The biggest shortcoming of this book is that it is incomprehensible to people who do not play F Go. Another point is that the update is too slow. Advantages: The writing is very good, and the writing style also describes characters and other aspects. It can be seen that the author f go has a very deep foundation and is an old player. The description of the protagonist is also very good, and the chapters are also very good. It is very comfortable to read. Sometimes there are some chapters that make people feel more comfortable. In Tomato, it can be said to be a top-notch work. If it is updated quickly, it can actually touch the threshold of a masterpiece.

It's nice to read. The prologue is very interesting. I don't know if there is a prototype. Anyway, the description is very mythical and has great potential. There are quite a lot of jokes in the back. All in all, it's good and worth watching, but it's a little lacking.

The book is really good, but... There is so little written, hum hum... I can't do it anymore... I'm addicted... I really want to read the subsequent chapters... [Laughs evilly]

This is a good book about the type moon. It has potential. The author is very strict about the setting of the type month. You can rely on this book to supplement the setting.

Tomato is one of the few good-looking FGO fics, and the characters are well-drawn. Part of the reason is that I started writing from the Absolute Warcraft Front. Personally, I think the plot and character settings of Chapter 7 of FGO are really great. I just need to put a tag on it, otherwise it will be really hard for others to find [Sending my heart]

It's a very smooth narrative that doesn't feel abrupt at all, and the writing is very good!

Zheng'er Ba Jing writes a second-length book review. The clear meaning at the outset: All good books should be read by me! Really highly recommended. First of all, the character design is very restored, and the setting research is very rigorous. I think this is very important. The basis of fan fiction is the original work. You can make any changes, but they must be logical and driven. Otherwise, it is purely private. The author does this very well, and the moon flavor is very strong (this is what initially attracted me). If you like the plot of FGO, you must not miss it. Then there is the plot, which is exciting and the changes made by the author are quite bold. And it has not turned over so far, and it has come full circle. This is a test of writing skills, after all, it is almost equivalent to an original plot. The second volume is equivalent to directly covering up the 4th battle and starting to write it. Nice! The last point is that the composition of the author is complicated, so I played the role of Thief 6. But don't worry about it affecting your look and feel. The author integrates it very well. People who understand it will smile knowingly, and people who don't understand it will not find it awkward. This kind of point can be regarded as a bonus, it is quite fun to read the book. Finally, let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. Update speed. Although there are 4,000 chapters per chapter, the update frequency is too slow, almost every three days. In addition, many original settings and plots need to be explained to readers, so the number of settings has to be piled up, which reduces the gold content of a chapter. 2. The boss in the second volume never gave me a sense of oppression (personal opinion). I think on the one hand it may be because the lineup is too luxurious, and on the other hand it lacks intuitive description. The author has said that the second volume is the "first half of the volume", so the stronger the pressure of this boss, the better. In this way, the response to the unfolding of the next volume will be better. Suppress first and then raise. I think the author can try to give more descriptions and use more exaggerated and conceptual words. Bring out the B cell.

Dear author, is there a clear heroine? ❃ႣᄎႣ❃. I see that although the protagonist and other supporting characters have a lot of ambiguous scenes, I personally think that the heartthrob Xiangwu CP is really great... V✪ω✪V

I personally think this book is very interesting. I don't know much about Fate, but the content in the book is not only the plot but also its own narrative. So far, no poisonous points have been found. It is worth reading. It is also friendly to people who have not read Fate and Shuhuang. Worth a look

A very good book. It can be said to be one of the best books in Shangxingyue. It has no poisonous points.

Watch feat fans and experience fantasy life [laughs]

It's pretty good. I really like it except for the slow update. I also learned a lot of popular science about mythical stories and learned from reading novels. So, I hope to update it twice a day [cool]

After reading Chapter 10, Yuepai said it was great But... Salvation is save, and the savior is not saver. Savior savior, ← correct spelling @hostile author greatly Except for this, there are no flaws. The writing style is very similar to Yue, with something interesting and well written [Like] [Like] [Like]

This is the second well-written Xingyue fanfic I have read. The other one is "I will eventually embark on the road of no return called the savior." The writing is really good, like a mushroom [laughter]

The only way I know so far to really break through the narrative layer is for the author to express his true feelings and write like crazy, such as the one who wrote "Reimu Yuan: Xi'er Comes to Me". His characters really push through the layers of his narrative.

The author's rigorous research and bold adaptation definitely deserve full marks. The story is smooth and not OOC at all. It can be considered a ceiling in many moon fanfics.

I like it very much. The writing is great. I fell in love with fate after reading this book. The setting of fate is so charming. The only pity is that the proportion of virgins in fate is too low. Of course, this is just my random thoughts and has nothing to do with Haji's work.

Very good article, but the author is too short-tongued

I finished watching Warcraft Battlefront a long time ago and it was too painful to catch up. Give the author a good review, don't write about it, the person is gone [crying]

Very nice looking and makes my binzhou spin

It's quite interesting. The identity of the protagonist is quite complicated. Judging from the attitude of the grandfather, I guess it has something to do with the fact that he is the Messiah. Then the beast class chat room is fun. Scheduled to meet Beast Ni and Ai Ge.

It's very good-looking. The abstract and serious elements from time to time are very suitable to my taste. However, the latest chapter does not have any knowledge of mythology, so it may be uncomfortable to watch.

The pacing is great and not sluggish. It can be seen from the plot progression and some text passages that the fate and original content are very well grasped. A well-deserved masterpiece from a fellow author.