Hogwarts: Metamorphosis, Starting with the Philosopher's Stone

For the first time in Tomato, I saw someone thinking and resolving the relationship with Harry from the perspective of the Dursleys. Harry's life was very miserable, but the author gave him a good childhood.

Tomato actually has such a high-quality book. The protagonist is sensible but not smart, and he will hit the mark when he needs to be scolded. Although he can use tricks, he will not hurt innocent people! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Not enough to watch at all! ! ! ! Update soon! ! ! !

The protagonist is very in line with my taste. He is decisive, smart, and has no virgin heart. I can see that the foreshadowing written is to realize the dream of everyone, and the most important thing is that Deng Duoduo will change! Face your shortcomings head on

The author's self-comment, the book is finished and waiting to be slaughtered. At the end of the article, I thought I would have a lot to say, but the author who finished the last chapter had something to say. When I started writing this book review, I thought about it and didn't know what to say. I won't say much more. The novel of more than one million words, plus my replies in various comment areas, has already said most of what I want to say. There is no point in repeating it again. I sincerely hope that everyone can read my book from the perspective of the protagonist and objectively evaluate the merits and demerits of the original characters. No novel can be liked by everyone. No matter how great the writer is, he is still writing his own side, and the author of fan fiction is writing a new side on one side of the original work. If this book can bring you a little smile and touch, that is my honor. If there is something in the book that you don't like, that's normal. I would like to apologize to you all. There is no need to worry about it. The last last. I wish you all well.

I remember that Snape seemed to only support purebloods and did nothing to harm half-bloods and Muggles. The group of four had directly hurt him with magic spells, and the damage to the group of four seemed to be greater. I feel that based on Dumbledore's position and character, he should have used more tactful words to persuade Snape, rather than "he never wanted to kill you." After all, James' trauma to Snape was also real, so Snape would feel a little dissatisfied. It is difficult to judge whether Snape wanted to kill James, but it was definitely wrong for him to seek refuge with Voldemort. Now that his IQ has been restored, Dumbledore will probably persuade him from this perspective. I haven't read the last two books and movies in full (I heard that many people didn't dare to finish them), so I might have missed a little bit of the plot. The author explained it, and I think it makes sense. Dumbledore did not destroy his character and gave him a full character again.

The characters are sharp and sensible, the logic is perfect and the plot is smooth. It's really good.

There is no water content. The protagonist has clear logic and clear goals. I would like to call it the strongest cousin. I highly recommend it [like][like][like]

A super great protagonist, a golden finger system that is truly unlimited. The early positioning perspective of [Lao Deng] [Sijiao] [Predator] is very consistent with the normal character setting. The [Utopia]-like school and world in the later period saved all the [Difficulty of Feelings], and finally echoed the [System] + the reason why the protagonist came. The writing is good, and it is similar to the settings for grading wizards in the HP world in "Becoming a God of Magic". Overall, it is still the same sentence "strength comes first". If a school does not cultivate truly powerful wizards, no matter how exciting the plot setting is, it will be nonsense.

The attack on Snape was too harsh. The Cruciatus Curse was unnecessary. I have seen the rhythm of many novels in the Oriental part. Basically, the original world is resolved, and then another force pops up and starts to fight to drag down the novel. The advantage of this book is that it is fast and has real facts. This part is unnecessary. Just capture Nagini and it is over. Add in the individual. It is unnecessary. It is really unnecessary. I read it for almost a day and that's it.

I've read a lot and I still like it. It can be said that it's one of the better Harry Potter fanfics. I read what other authors wrote about pure-blood supremacy. How can there be so many pure-bloods? In the current real world, the only example of pure-blood preservation is the Japanese royal family. Look at that child, her appearance, and all kinds of natural problems. They are all living examples of pure-bloods. The four major colleges are integrated and develop together. I like this kind of educational development very much. There are so many things to think about and it's well written. But I skipped through the part about the big spider. I'm afraid of spiders and thieves. I'm afraid I could faint directly.

This is my favorite HP fanfic. Some illiterate people admire the deified Dumbledore and Snape. The male protagonist of this article is really good! ! ! As a NJ person, I really like this kind of rational and planned person! The writing is good and doesn't make people feel embarrassed. As a girl, I often encounter old literature when watching male videos. Many of them claim to have no female protagonists but also write some ambiguous plots and say things that objectify women. This book truly has no heroine! Regarding Ron, many male video authors choose to marginalize him, or write about how Ron has low self-esteem and how he is jealous of the protagonist. Although it is not OOC, as a character, it is too flat. The author really portrayed each character very well, without overly deifying or overly belittling a character. The behavior of each character is reasonable and consistent with the character's personality. I can be called the god of HP male videos! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Author, you are so good at writing novels, you will succeed in whatever you do!

Awesome, a cool article in the Harry Potter world, cool, so cool

Let me give you an overall review first. It looks good. Since we are the same person as the world view and background view, there is no big problem. In terms of combat power, there is generally no big problem. The character creation is OK. The fan characters and the personality are not ruined. There are also shortcomings. Basically, it does not follow the original work. There is no one. The protagonist's combat power improves too quickly. He is an elite professor at the beginning. He defeated the God of Death on the first day of the second grade. The concept is too great. The writing of the first grade is too long. Later, I feel that I have become a fun person (basic moral bottom line, the character is not broken)

I don't know why this novel has such a low rating. I think this novel is very well written. It doesn't follow the plot very much from the beginning. It's very different from other HP fan novels. I don't think it's the same or boring after reading it. Although it doesn't follow the original plot, it still feels reasonable. I like to read and write more.

How to say it? It's rare that Harry Potter satisfies me (or maybe I'm tired of reading it before). There are many Harry Potter novels that describe how awesome they are and how geniuses they are. When the magic master goes through the plot, there is no expected result. He only talks about this and that according to the main plot. It's better to start over. There are many places in this novel that have been changed. It feels a bit harsh to describe it from an angle, but if you look closely, I feel that it can be explained clearly, and it is relatively novel (maybe because it is too novel, and I can't stand the protagonist's character, so the rating is a bit unfair). In the final analysis, it is a matter of preference. At least I can read this book, and I am happy to give it five stars╮(￣▽￣)╭

It is really healing, not brainless, the plot is smoother, and very interesting. It makes up for a lot of regrets and explains everything reasonably. I hope the author will continue to write it well and never leave it unfinished. It has been added to the column of only 3 good books.

In fact, the plot highlights of this book are quite exciting. Very different and interesting. At least I am willing to read it chapter by chapter and see how it develops. But the writing was too fast, almost like reading an outline instead of a full story. Maybe the author hopes to show the protagonist's confidence and core status through such a rhythm. All things develop in the direction of the protagonist's thinking and wishes. It was really fun to watch it at first, but it was too straightforward and the character was antagonistic, and it felt like an annoying pretentious person showing off one's self. I don't know if it will improve in the next year, but I'm currently at chapter 30.

This should be the best book about Harry Potter that I have ever read. It is very sensible and enjoyable. But I hope that the author can write the relationship between Draco Malfoy and Harry Potter better and not write it as an opposition. Thank you.

It's a perfect template for a cool novel, and it has brains, not brainlessness. It does things logically and makes up for a lot of regrets. The villains also get the punishment they deserve. The plot is unique and not step-by-step. From the beginning, many potential threats and troubles are solved thoughtfully, making Dumbledore a truly well-organized, ideal and capable White Devil.

Subjective evaluation: The protagonist is not brainless, very sensible and strategic, which is very enjoyable to watch. Objective evaluation: A good book. It seems that its essence is to make up for regrets, but in essence it is a refreshing article on strategies. Rating: A good book The author's mind is very clear, not brainless, and very thoughtful. Readers can feel the protagonist's thoughts, which is worth reading. [Lightning protection: Dumbledore's white wizard character collapses, fans should not pursue too much] I have only watched 40 chapters and will add more comments later.

Among the many Harry Potter fan novels, this one by the author ranks first in my heart☝🏻[Salute]

The subject matter is very novel, but the emotional output is suddenly too explosive.

The most enjoyable book! ! Most people's regrets have been eliminated. The protagonist kills decisively and distinguishes between good and evil, without hurting innocent people. It was a great ride, no regrets! And there is no female protagonist, which is highly praised.

I have read at least four or five HP spin-offs. Most follow Dumbledore's will to destroy the Philosopher's Stone. A few, such as the one where everything is three, make their own Philosopher's Stone in the later stage. I thought why can't such a thing like a moon well be used to build a perfect foundation? Finally I saw it here

How do you rate this book? Well, actually there are many places that are slightly less detailed. For example, Ollivander's part. I don't think Mr. Ollivander is that stupid to be deceived. But maybe the author may have some of his own judgments about these characters in the original work. All in all, if you are more attached to the original work, or want a more detailed description, you may not like to read this book. Because what does this book say? Too direct. However, if you want to see all kinds of regrets filled, the regrets of the original work are filled. And she just acts decisively, not like the Holy Mother. You can read this book, I think this book may be very suitable. This book is prone to mixed reviews. I personally can still accept it. But I don't particularly like it. So I choose to give it four stars.

Dear author, please update me quickly. I like this book very much. Please make your style better!

It's much better than other plug-ins where the first-year Philosopher's Stone is a second-year Lockhart and then learns magic by himself. At least the plot is more reasonable. The main thing is to imagine that Dudley is not the original work when reading it, but it was earlier, otherwise you will always think of Fatty.

I feel like the author is having so much fun debating in the comments. The book seems to be pretty good so far. If I don't like it in the future, I will review it. The aftertaste of joining the Chinese forces is very strange.

Write quickly, who can read this little bit? Foreigners outside think we look down upon them when they see it. One more chapter, one per person.

To be honest, when I saw the rating introduction and names, I didn't really want to read on! But I became addicted as soon as I read it. After reading Chapter 42, I thought this was awesome! This is the first time I see a Harry fan starting like this!