Travel Through Books to Become an Immortal and Seize the Opportunity, Letting the Heroine Become Cannon Fodder

It's really good-looking, but I hope the author can use punctuation marks when writing, otherwise it will be a bit uncomfortable to read.

When I'm in a good mood, I don't seem so irritable! You can piss people off when you're in a bad mood! The plot is good! The content is long-winded! Sometimes the punctuation marks suddenly disappear and it becomes difficult to read! But give it four stars for encouragement! I hope to continue writing articles about cultivating immortality. There are too few female-channeled novels about cultivating immortality now!

It looks good, but it's really hard to have no punctuation marks [Chigua]

It's so good-looking, so good-looking. Why did it disappear after reading a few pages? Please update it soon and hope it will be more exciting in the future. [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like]

Next time, you can make the punctuation marks of the dialogue look better.

Well done to the author! It's so beautifully written! The cute baby mouse is so cute! It's so funny to change from big to small [laughing][laughing][laughing][like] The author could have written hundreds more chapters! I really enjoyed watching it! The author has thanked you for your hard work! Come on, keep updating! Support you

Like children's book

It's very good, but there are a lot of stammers, a lot of punctuation errors, and the language is not fluent. If it can be corrected, I think I will like it very much.

No matter how miserable the beginning is, I just hope that the revenge will be as miserable as it is, instead of the bad guys always looking for trouble, looking for trouble to find the finale, and then ending with one kill. It's really cool to see the beginning. I like it.

The writing is okay, but it would be better if the punctuation marks were corrected.

Wow, the size of this gold finger is really unparalleled, so beautiful [Like]

It sounds great. I like it very much, really love it

The storyline is exciting! Looking forward to…

So far I think it sounds great and the plot is very well written.

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author

Pay attention to punctuation marks

It's really, really beautiful. I highly recommend it.

The novel is well written and beautiful. It's worth recommending.

A very good book, worth reading

Novel tweets, the novel is well written and beautiful.

Really very beautiful It's really good to read, the thinking in it is clear, and a lot of rhetorical techniques are used to write the sentences very vividly.

Please, please add punctuation.

Very interesting. I found this book through Douyin with great difficulty.

I have to say, this novel is really great, with a compact plot, vivid characters, and lots of laughs!

Come on, come on, come on

Very beautiful, very beautiful

Well written, five stars from now on

Good looking and worth recommending

I was watching my addiction and suddenly it disappeared. I was really anxious.

I saw that the update was discontinued. Why did the author discontinue the update? I think the writing was pretty good.