The only constant in the world is that life has always been difficult and makes people unable to resist, but in order to survive, you must look forward, whether before or after the end of the world.
Reader comments
To be honest, the previous plot plan does not have any big flaws, and the characters are also well developed. As for the problem, I personally think you can try to divide it into more paragraphs. The connection together makes me feel like I swallowed the jujube in a hurry.
Also, you can write apocalyptic-style articles with your special abilities, but remember that the upper limit should not be too high. Just be on par with the opposing camp.
The most important point is that once it comes to the situation of high-dimensional combat power such as Xianxia, it is very difficult to ensure the balance of the combat power of the article. The end of the world is supposed to be a science fiction article, and sometimes it becomes quite difficult when it comes to fantasy, but it is not ruled out that some people like this style.
Come on, the hardest thing about novels is persistence
To be honest, the previous plot plan does not have any big flaws, and the characters are also well developed. As for the problem, I personally think you can try to divide it into more paragraphs. The connection together makes me feel like I swallowed the jujube in a hurry. Also, you can write apocalyptic-style articles with your special abilities, but remember that the upper limit should not be too high. Just be on par with the opposing camp. The most important point is that once it comes to the situation of high-dimensional combat power such as Xianxia, it is very difficult to ensure the balance of the combat power of the article. The end of the world is supposed to be a science fiction article, and sometimes it becomes quite difficult when it comes to fantasy, but it is not ruled out that some people like this style. Come on, the hardest thing about novels is persistence
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