The World of Origin: Apocalypse Begins

To be honest, the previous plot plan does not have any serious flaws, and the character development is also quite good. As for the problem, I personally think you can try to divide it into more paragraphs. The combination of them makes me feel like I am swallowing the jujube. Also, you can write articles in the apocalyptic style, but remember that the upper limit should not be too high. It is almost equal to the opposing camp. The most important point is that once it comes to high-dimensional combat power such as Xianxia, it will be very difficult to ensure the balance of combat power in the article. The end of the world is supposed to be a science fiction article, and sometimes it becomes quite difficult when it touches on fantasy, but I don't rule out that some people like this style. Come on, the most difficult thing about novels is persistence.

Hope to get everyone's support