Ninja World: Peak Puppet Master

It's so little. I feel it's okay, but I feel like the protagonist doesn't have a clear path to become stronger. Now I'm just talking about the inspiration for the chakra armor, and nothing else. It doesn't express what the main plot the author wants to write is. I'll look forward to it [Thinking] It feels like we can integrate sealing techniques into chips, use chakra metal as wires or the first-generation trees as wires, and create some cyber puppets [Thinking]

Hehe, that's great, that's great, a close-up cp of the art duo Yeah, so sweet, so sweet, Brother Scorpion and his little wife, and it's so sweet, right? I like it so sweet. I like it so sweet. I like it so sweet. We get along with each other in daily life. This is so pampering.

This book is like an undiscovered treasure, not widely known but of infinite value. It may not be widely praised, but like a unique concoction, every sip is full of novelty and fun. If you love adventure, this book will surely start an extraordinary reading journey for you.

I think it's okay, but I wonder if it could be without a female protagonist. [Thinking][Understood] It's not that I'm misogynistic, but I have very high requirements for emotional lines. I'm afraid that you won't be able to write well and not be able to write that natural feeling. [Grieved][Almost crying][Angry]

Although the few books with scorpions as protagonists are somewhat OOC, they are also attempts at writing. Even if it's a bit of an old-fashioned system, it's generally good.

The plot of this article is very novel, but the character written in the beginning is different from the character below. The character above is more out-of-the-box, while the character below is calm. You can change time travel to obtain the memory of the soul, which is more in line with the following (I am just giving an opinion, not a nitpick, I personally think it is very good.)

The subject matter is very attractive to me, but the content is a bit bland, and there is a certain gap between it and the imagination. I think the puppet master can completely develop into the mechanic and gunner in DNF, and the wireless puppet technology of Six Paths Payne can also be used. Anyway, keep going [like].

Will there be Gundam Eva and Mobile Ultraman later? Uh. Machines in various anime This won't be Iron Man, Scarlet Prototype Machine, Palm Cannon. Author, can the protagonist go to the ancient country of Loulan to collect the dragon veins and use them as the core of the mecha?

It's not bad, but it doesn't feel as strong as in the original work.

I'll give it five stars first and then I'll tell you not to write about Orochimaru all the time. It feels like you're writing around Orochimaru.

The time traveler transforms into the Red Sand Scorpion who has rebelled against the village and joined Akatsuki, and obtains Gundam technology by completing the puppet. It is not bad, but it is a pity that the update has been discontinued. I hope the author can complete it.

I! In the end! ! What kind of underworld CP are you consuming? ! ! !

It's really comfortable to just act like a master when you come up [laughing evilly] The books that read "Call me Young Master", "Don't call me Master" and "Don't call me Master" all make me feel uncomfortable.

Is there only one world for Naruto?

Very good, at least it has its own plot

I'm looking for some design ideas for machine puppets. Let a big guy help me think about them.

It feels good to support me

It's okay. Come on, it's okay now.

Good, very good, very good!