City****

The plot is dull but makes people want to keep reading. The writing is mature but fresh. The plot is also close to life and is not rhetorical. It is a rare good book for urban immortality. There are shortcomings, but they don't hide the good points. However, I suggest the author write more chapters about cultivating immortality. Come on! ! !

"Stop and forget and follow the wind, walk and watch and be calm" immediately attracted me to read on. The beginning of the story is narrated with delicate writing and humorous narration... It's very interesting, [like][like][like] I've finished reading it, it's gone. Please keep up the good work, author [smile][smile][smile]

The writing style is delicate, and every word seems to have been carefully crafted, making people feel as if they are actually there during the reading process, completely immersed in the world of the story. The content is novel and unique, full of innovations and surprises. Whether it's the setting of the plot or the shaping of the characters, it's all eye-catching.

This novel uses a stone as an opportunity to lead the protagonist into the mysterious world of immortality. In the story, stones are no longer ordinary objects, but the key to starting a fantasy journey. The author skillfully uses the mysterious power of stones to show readers an imaginative world of immortality. In this world, the protagonist continues to grow and experience hardships and challenges. The plot of the novel is compact and the characters are vivid, making people feel as if they are actually there. Whether you are a reader who is interested in the subject of cultivating immortals or a person who likes fantasy adventures, you can find fun in this book. It is a masterpiece worth reading.

It's an amazing experience. Growth always comes at a price. Zhao Mingquan is very lucky. It took me two days to read it. The author's writing is very good, the story is logical and the ideas are clear. It was a pleasure to read. The second time I read it, I finished it again.

Overall, this is a good urban immortality novel. In my mind, it ranks behind The Strongest Abandoned Young Man and The Reborn Urban Immortality (Chen Beixuan's book). However, there is a small point in the novel that makes it very uncomfortable. The description of the era is very fragmented. Sometimes it seems to be the early 20th century, but in some parts it is written 10 years later.

The author's rich imagination and superb writing skills make the story particularly attractive. The novel adopts a fantasy style and the storyline is very bizarre. It is indeed unique and fascinating. Always give readers a surprise inadvertently.

A very wonderful story, well-conceived, light-hearted and worthy of praise.

Excellent urban Hugh Immortal masterpiece! As a male protagonist with a super high IQ, he is confident in managing his career! The writing is also quite clever! Well worth reading!

The protagonist Zhao Ming is a smart person, but he was just a little smart teenager at first. After many hardships, he finally grew into a responsible man. Upgrading is only a necessary element in novels about cultivating immortals, but this one pays more attention to cultivating the mind. In Chapter 108, the protagonist said that he had not heard any discipline from his parents for a long time, which further confirmed his belief that he wanted to become stronger, cure his father and protect his family. It is an important step in changing from the son's identity to the family's backbone.

Very well written. Why is there no rating? The plot is reasonable and not exaggerated. The plot is vivid and interesting. Those who lie can come in and take a look. The author keeps up the good work. Come on! Update faster.

The author's writing style is really good, his imagination is rich, the story arrangement is smooth and fluent, and he writes the voices of many urban young people. Very exciting! Like it very much! Come on

The beginning is very attractive, the story is simple, and the sense of history is strong. I like it very much! Added to bookshelf, read slowly!

The author's writing style is good, the novel is written smoothly, and the storyline is very attractive.

It's quite exciting. I can't stop seeing the protagonists who are practicing the village road openly and secretly plotting against Chencang! Exquisite structure and meticulous writing!

The author's writing is good, the protagonist's background setting is reasonable, and he truly cultivates immortality from scratch. In a wonderful life, you can always see the highlights. The storyline has a sense of the times, and some of the insights and descriptions are often endlessly memorable. Every growth and progress of Zhao Ming makes people feel the same. Keep reading! Come on, author↖(^ω^)↗

It's a wonderful novel about cultivating immortals, but it doesn't break away from real life. Very nice. I have the desire to keep watching, the characters are vividly drawn, and the male protagonist is so good that it's a bit of a draw, haha. But everyone likes good people. Big cheers for the author!

The author's writing is good, and it is different from ordinary leveling novels. This is a real growth series. The protagonist of the novel, Zhao Ming, was a somewhat clever, clever but naughty high school student at the beginning. After getting the opportunity to start the path of cultivating immortality, he experienced many catastrophes and his mind gradually changed. He began to truly think and slowly turned into an adult with great wisdom.

The plot has ups and downs and is full of unexpected turns and developments. From the protagonist's journey of cultivating immortality, to the encounters and entanglements with different characters, to the occurrence of various mysterious events, every chapter can firmly grab the reader's attention and make people want to keep reading. For example, when the protagonist faces different enemies and challenges, he can always rely on his own wisdom and ability to cultivate immortality to avoid danger. This exciting plot setting makes readers very enjoyable to watch.

It's really beautiful! The author's thoughts are wonderful, the descriptions of each character in the book are very realistic, the language is vivid and fluent, and the plot content has twists and turns, ups and downs. It is a good book worth reading, five-star recommendation!

The storyline has a very contemporary feel, which made me feel the author's intentions. Zhao Ming can feel that every step of his growth is not easy. The main line of this article is clear and the storyline is particularly reasonable. The novel really attracted me and I kept following it! ! !

Such a wonderful article, the plot content is smooth, the writing style is also very good, and it is updated quickly. It is a rare book. I couldn't stop watching it.

The author's imagination is very rich, the entire writing style is very smooth, the brushwork is delicate, and the emotions are sincere. I must recommend it with five stars!

I saw it on the recommended list. I tried it to see the results and I was hooked and watched it for a long time. The story is exciting, the plot is twists and turns, and the characters are distinct. Looking forward to the follow-up. It's beautiful, but it's still unfinished.

The author is rich in imagination and has a strange and fascinating beginning. The writing is excellent, the story is exciting, and the characters are well developed. Come on, look forward to the follow-up

The writing style is really good, and the plot is also okay. I have an indescribable feeling when I look at it. It's pretty good, but I can't understand the emotional line a little bit. Haha, other aspects are very good. Big cheers for the author [laughs]

This is the best work I have ever read among urban immortality novels. I give the author a lot of cheers. The writing is so beautiful and the writing style is good. It is smooth and natural without being laggy. The plot is full and vivid. It is good [like] and must be praised with five stars. I read it every day after get off work, it's very exciting

The content is very exciting, the structure is very clear, and it is very beautiful.

This cultivation of immortality is very casual! It's really up to you! See the back and forget the front. Zhenzhen mainly focuses on doing whatever you want.

It is a type of urban immortality that you will never tire of. The author has a clever idea and a good writing style. He tells a wonderful story about the growth of a high school student after having an adventure. [I learned it] [I learned it] Looks good, give it a thumbs up