逍遥诸天，送易小川进宫开始

It's not bad, but there is a little less interaction with the heroine. If you don't plan to describe the relationship in detail, I suggest you take it less. A harem and a stallion are two different things.

If you want to say, bullying Yi Xiaochuan is 5 stars, it must be 5 stars.

It looks good, please update more. Also, the writing of full-level comprehension is not good enough. Full-level comprehension should have: super understanding ability, photographic memory, the ability to complete incomplete exercises and martial arts, the ability to integrate and innovate completely, and the ability to deduce and create exercises, martial arts or other things based on various knowledge.

So far it's pretty good. There's no plot about giving away girls. I just want to enjoy watching it.

Okay, okay. There are many plots in various worlds. And it's good if the combat power isn't too exaggerated. It's when the hero and heroine are in love. Don't write 10,000 or 100,000 words here. Am I someone who lacks that little traffic? [Note] [Note] [Note] Feel free to write this part. I'll give you a reward after I've written it [Learned it] [Learned it] [Learned it].

Hello author, I copied your book and published it on other platforms. The feedback from readers has been very good, the profits are good, and there are many donations! In the past few months, I want to buy a new car. I hope the author will add more chapters so that it will not affect my income. Hope to know

"Happy Heavens:" [Get portable space at the start] [Invincible] 🟦🟦🟦🟦 Realm 🟦🟦🟦🟦 Third-rate, second-rate, first-rate, innate, master, great master, land immortal, broken, heavenly being, human immortal, earthly immortal, heavenly immortal, true immortal, mysterious immortal, golden immortal, Taiyi, Daluo, quasi-sage, saint, 🟦🟦🟦🟦wife🟦🟦🟦🟦 Ning Zhongze——🟣64 Li Qingluo——🟣195 Ruan Qingzhu——🟣Already Qin Hongmian——🟣already Ganbaobao——🟣already Yan Ying—🟣332 Zixuan—🟣422 Ouyang Jiajia—🟣456 ——🟣 ——🟣 ——🟣 🟦🟦🟦🟦heroine🟦🟦🟦🟦 Lu Su——Love 9🟣15 Lu Pheasant——Love 9🟣15 Yu Shu——Love 20🟣21 Xiaoyue——Love 47🟣47 ——Love 55🟣60 Huixiang——Love 60🟣60 Dongfang White——Love 73🟣75 Li Mochou——Love 130🟣130 Little Dragon Girl——Love 142🟣142 Lu Wushuang——Love 153🟣157 Cheng Ying—Love 156🟣157 Zhou Wangqing——Love 110🟣182 Shasha—Love 110🟣257 Ma Guoying——Love 180🟣182 Wang Yuyan——Love 199🟣199 Mu Wanqing——Love 210🟣215 Zhong Ling—Love 210🟣215 A'Zhu——maid 215🟣238 Azi—Love 227🟣239 Tong Piaoyun——accepted 237🟣239 Plum, Orchid, Bamboo and Chrysanthemum - Maid 239🟣254 Abi——Take away 254🟣255 Qiudi—Love 260🟣261 Zhao Yun—Love 276🟣287 Yin Tianxue——Love 287🟣287 Doudou——Take away 293🟣294 Pearl——Take away 293🟣294 Mingyue—Love 299🟣299 Youruo—Love 310🟣313 Yu Chuchu——Take away 312🟣313 The second dream——Love 323🟣323 Ling Qian'er——Love 347🟣347 He Lan—Love 353🟣360 Silly girl——accept 358🟣382 Aqiu—Love 368🟣369 Tang Xuejian——Love 392🟣405 Nightshade——accepted 405🟣418 Holy aunt—Enjoyed 414🟣414 Xiyao——Enjoyed 422🟣422 Shuibi—Love 424🟣425 Ma Xiaoling——Love 447🟣470 Chang'e—Love 514🟣514 Xiaoyu—Love 517🟣531 Daughter King—Love 569🟣569 Biyou—Love 627🟣627 White Lotus——Love 629🟣629 Yaochi——Reunion 632🟣633 Nuwa—Love 700🟣710 Houtu—Love 700🟣710 Su Daji——Love 700🟣710 System IncarnationXu Zi——🟣716

Yes, yes, it's very good. I like it [smile][smile] The male protagonist is invincible. He travels through all the worlds and attracts beauties. The time it takes to travel between the worlds is neither too fast nor too slow. It's just right. It doesn't drag out or make ink marks. It won't stay in one world for a long time and drag out the plot. There is also a plot in the main world and it won't be mentioned in one go.

You'll be pretty soon, and you'll get girls soon, you know

Although the writing is not detailed enough, the general direction is still strong enough. The author is also mature and more honest. I would like to give you a suggestion: write more worlds and don't end it hastily. The last book did not go through a few worlds and ended in the prehistoric world. It was really not satisfying [laughing]