Dying from Hungry: a Journey with You

Not bad, it avoids the point that Liang (himself) is Suisui's father-killing enemy. But I personally think that in the subsequent plot changes, Mansui seems to have been greatly reduced (a bit OOC). Liang's changes are quite reasonable, after all, they are consistent with the changes at the beginning. In Luoyang City, the author wrote his own original plot. It was this part of the plot that made me feel that the image of Man Sui was inconsistent with the previous article, and it was also different from the original Man Sui in my impression. The main problem was still the inconsistency with the previous image (after all, the author said that the image of the character needed to be slightly changed) In the previous article, Mansui always gives people a sense of intelligence and kindness (this is also the character design of the original work) In Luoyang City, in order to perfectly resolve the core contradiction between the two, the author created the original plot of Man Sui misunderstanding Liang (there is no problem with this) However, in the subsequent process of uncovering the misunderstanding, it became clear that Mansui seemed to have become a vase that could only cry? ? ? Whether it is the reaction to the hint or the arrangement of the more trusting person, I feel that there is something wrong with this paragraph. I can understand the reason for this arrangement in order to highlight the strengthened version of myself, but I think I am personally not very satisfied with Mansui relying on Liang to save her in times of crisis. I am still very grateful for the carefully created work [Love] Five stars! The author knows how to sprinkle sugar [admiration]

It looks good, the writing is delicate, sweet and delicious [like] and there are great changes compared to the original work (Sui's father is not a good person, his tongue becomes good, etc.), Moreover, the author of each chapter carefully gives it a symmetrical and elegant name. It can be said that it is unconventional and unique in the humanities of Hungry and Death.

Never been a wolf, good! Now you can be unscrupulous in giving out sweets [laughs]

Looking at the Hungry Death fanfic, it is one of the best written ones. Although I didn't finish it and only read 50 chapters, I couldn't bear to read it, because this book is completely dedicated to the ideal type of Hungry Death for all the good guys, so it is very comfortable to read, and the protagonist group (including the protagonist group) (Including tongue) All the members are good people. This is what I want to see. Even those who have never played the game can read this as a love novel. The author is also good at writing about battles of wits. It can be said that this book and "Frost Fire" are the mainstays of Hungry Death fan fiction! ! !

I really have to boast about this creativity! Being able to completely translate the story in my mind into such a wonderful novel, both in terms of imagination and writing skills, is amazing. I really admire Luo Bao's talent and persistence [Like] [Like] [Like]

Very good novel, made my brain spin Now that there is no revenge, when can Suisui push Lao Liang directly to Kuni?

I finished reading the first volume in one go. The early part of the first volume was really bad, but the sweetness 🥰🥰 becomes more and more exciting as you go to the end. Just like the bamboo on the mountain in Yecunzi, it is thick and thin. The ending of a stable life is over. It depends on how the author plans to narrate it later. I look forward to it.

Can the author update it more? Try to get a few million words, it's not enough. To be honest, Luobo put a lot of thought into polishing the plot and characterizing the characters. Usually every important plot has to be discussed with friends and polished repeatedly. From the beginning of no longer being a wolf, to the later warming up of the relationship between the two, and how to deal with important issues in their lives. The author takes every step very carefully. He is such a careful person. Then I am also very much looking forward to the follow-up content of the future author. I believe he will not disappoint all of us. Come on, author, and keep going with you.

The characters of Suisui and Laoliang are both maintained very well. I just feel like it would be nice if Lao Liang and Suisui could have some interaction in the intervening years, such as Suisui leading a caravan to secretly help or something [eating melon]

It's good to watch [Like] [Like] [Like] The characters and plots are extremely rich, and the plot has ups and downs, but the ending is a bit rushed. I always feel that there are still some things that haven't been written, such as Liangsui's wedding.

It's great. I am no longer the enemy who killed my father. I wish the original work was like this and I could still walk with Suisui. Come on, you have been updating for 21 days in a row. Each chapter has about 4,000 words. It's really a promising future. (Wife) refers to Mansui.

It's well written. I don't know if I read it too fast. There are a few weird places. After the first person pretended to be mute in front of the tongue, did he not pretend to be mute from the beginning? Or did he forget to explain it? Also, the village suddenly changed. It was so sudden.

Very beautiful very beautiful

Lao Xing is not dead at last. Lao Xing is very kind and kind. Unlike the original work, he has no emotional intelligence. He has no more emotional intelligence than the original work, but he is still a dull person. It is quite good-looking.

It is full of sugar and reasonable. The author set up an unexpected plot to let Liangsui lose his identity as an enemy and become lovers without any contradiction.

It's great, I'm looking forward to the next episode

It's really beautiful, I like it very much

Why such a rating? It's because I forgot when I read this book before Chapter 11. . .

When Chongzhen became emperor, he had nothing to do anymore and could only find opportunities to collect some money and then run away [eating melon]

It's good to watch, and the plot has ups and downs.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [admiration] [admiration]

Not bad. I hope I will write better and better in the future. Good luck, author.

The writing is really good, it's among the top five fanfics.

So far, the writing is relatively good, and the plot is quite sweet.

The story is novel, the links are closely linked, and it is very interesting.

It looks great, thank you to the author.

It looks good, I love watching it, it won't end so early [I'm about to cry]

Overall, it's pretty good. There are main quests, but Suisui's role feels a bit lacking.

It's so well written✍👍👍Keep up the good work!

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