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The description is very period, and there is no annoying wife or girlfriend at the beginning. It travels to 1998, starting from the mountain village, and there are no cheats. It develops step by step, and the more you watch, the more interesting it becomes. 1. There is a foreshadowing for the male protagonist's time travel, unlike other books where he just jumps through time without thinking. 2. It's the first time I've seen the use of my identity before rebirth. It's reasonable. 3. Each character has his or her own characteristics. I want to see Xiaoya's future development. 4. The plot advances without delay.

The plots are intertwined, and the multiple storylines are appropriately interspersed with the sense of camera, intertwined plot points, and the occasionally glimpsed text with strong literary sense. The writing is far from mature and sophisticated like that of a new author. In a world full of cheats, the author must have a relatively in-depth overall understanding of history, economy, digital, and human emotions before he dares to write such a realistic work accumulated from scratch. "There are mountains on the other side of the mountains, and the end of the mountains is the endless sea. Then, conversely, if the end of the sea is not the endless mountains, then our village is located at the end of the sea." "He feels that nostalgia is like a river, flowing down from the top little by little, and then flowing into the distance little by little." These sentences were surprising when they suddenly appeared in front of me. The literary level of sentences that can be seen in a realistic work of male videos (even every adverb "" is written correctly, a rare level of professional rigor) makes the whole work a whole level higher than that of similar male videos. The male video writers can write such sentences, which makes the software of the novel stand out from the crowd. A few suggestions: The beginning of 1 already has such a professional feel (science popularization such as C4 laboratory), such a sense of future technology, and the decryption uses small notes, which is a bit misaligned with the background. A sufficiently stimulating beginning can retain more readers. Good works deserve to be seen by more people. 2. Male videos generally have multiple female emotional lines. Currently, Xiaoye and Xiaoya can compete for the female lead. They may also need a confidant. Although reporter Xu is not necessarily used, a girl who repairs a computer alone has to tell the repairman her family name. If this character is not used in the future, this plot that does not conform to realistic motives will not be used. Therefore, it may be necessary to think about the story behind reporter Xu's self-reported name. While improving the logic, the emotional line branch can be developed. 3 Xiaoye made Su Zhe wait for two hours on their first date. It was not until much later that Su Zhe realized that it was the girls who put in makeup before their first date. This probably comes from the author's own insights into life. These small details can deeply impress readers and at the same time make the work a flash of inspiration. There are currently more macros, and I look forward to more realistic details. The beginning alludes to masks? The multi-angle lens sense, the little sparks mixed in (the origin of Tiedan's name, this passing layout is exquisite), and the hardware is wonderful.