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It's not easy. I finally came across a passable mind-reading novel. The plot is not sluggish, and the characters of the protagonists don't have any major flaws. The voice of my heart is quite detailed and I don't leave half the story and leave the other half. I quite like reading this type of novel. That's it. I read at least 45 of the 50 books that I kept for the Chinese New Year. I basically gave up after reading more than a dozen chapters. This book is not said to be of high quality, but it doesn't have those two problems. Anyway, I think it's okay. I added it to the bookshelf. Well, there is one thing I don't like very much, that is, I feel a bit too big when being attacked [laughs and cries] The ending was unexpected

It's pretty good, a little immature. After all, it's the author's first book. The inner activities of Can Baobao in the book feel a bit like reciting statements, not quite like some psychological activities, but it's also very good. I like the interaction between the two protagonists very much. The emotional lines of other people are also pretty good. Some of the progress is too fast and unstable. The author can modify it appropriately. I quite like the characters and stories of some of the people in it. The author should work hard! I hope the author can hone his own feelings in writing!

The plot is good, the progress is not laggy, and the characters are also very good. However, the writing style feels average, a bit like reading a running account. Forgive me for not being able to hold on. Come on, author!

Wow wow wow, it's really good-looking, and the family members are also very obedient and very capable of action. Shen Can's mind is spoiled one second, and the family members start to take action to change their original destiny the next second. The eldest brother and sister-in-law are my literary friends, the second brother and Lu Shao (the second brother-in-law) are the brothers who I have a crush on my straight roommate in literature, the third brother and Su Nanxing (the third brother-in-law) are my sworn enemies who supported me in literature after I went bankrupt, and the fourth brother and fourth sister-in-law are the military boss and the mute bride. I really like each pair very much, hehe, I also like the kid brother cp. And the story line is also drawn out very quickly. I like this kind of novel the best.

It's pretty good. The plot unfolds quite quickly. At least it doesn't drag on. But the writing style is biased toward Xiaobai, and the descriptions in many places are too fast. For example, when Xu Zhuo recognizes his relatives, the Shen family is too obvious. Didn't Shen Can think that his family could hear his voice? I don't deny that this article does have merits, but paying more attention to certain details in some places will improve the quality of the article. Moreover, when reading mind-reading articles, don't rely too much on your own voice. You must rely more on your own verification. What if sometimes it is unreliable? I think this is the fault of most mind-reading articles. They rely too much on what the mind-reading articles say.

The plot is not procrastinating, the structure is complete, the emotional line is relatively fast, and the characters' personalities are well described, but there are one or two small problems. First, the writing is a bit rough, and I hope the author can practice his writing. Second, the description of the article is sometimes a little wordy and could be pruned and concise. However, the writing is still quite good. The CP is very sweet and plentiful, and it tastes very good when kneaded. The characters' personalities are also very rich and distinctive. I hope the author can continue to work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง.

[Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] It is a rare novel that goes from beginning to end. It does not mean that there are no ups and downs, but it does not have the kind of [learned], the plot is about to end and the villain is about to be defeated, and the result is a super twist (no). The reader feels comfortable, breasts are relaxed, and the penis is strong. Highly recommended [Thinking][Thinking], it is very, very good for people who like to read sweet stories. There are very few peeing spots. It makes people want to continue reading after reading a chapter. The ending for everyone is very acceptable (including the ending of the villain is also very refreshing [I learned]) Oh, by the way, it is also a rare plot where the villain does not fight back after defeating him (the child has long wanted to know why in those previous books, when the villain was defeated in the finale, the villain had to have a chance to hurt the protagonist again, which made people's breasts jump [smile])

The plot is very smooth, especially the mind-reading part. It is very straightforward. There will be no situation where the mind-reader says "original plot" and then stops in the middle to make people guess, or repeats it several times and asks other people to read the mind. It is very enjoyable to read! [You taste carefully] The conditions for mind reading are also very simple, as long as the Shen family and their partners can hear it. For example, Huo You couldn't hear it at first, but he heard it immediately after he identified Shen Zhuo, so I stood by this pair of little CPs from the beginning! [Laughing] Every couple is very sweet, and the relationship is gradual. After all, Huo Xi and Shen Can have never met before, and they gradually fell in love with each other through daily interactions. They are really good! [Blowing kiss] The deputy CP progressed so quickly after reading her mind and piercing the window paper, so it was very sweet. However, the proposal was a bit "difficult" and you had to always pay attention to Cancan's voice. It was really interesting! [Laughing out loud]

The author is really good at writing, I love reading, the plot is not procrastinating, the characters' IQ and EQ are all online, of course I am not talking about the group of people named Zhou, they are not worthy, Huo Xi's straightforward romantic [admiration], the confession under the starry sky, really excited me to death, Chan Chan is my best talker [blowing kisses], can talk a lot, loves to listen, and Lu Shao's proposal, not to mention how excited I am, so excited, I am really happy for them. To sum up, the characters and plot are very good, especially the desire to watch.

It's super good-looking. Although this is a novel about two male protagonists, what's different from other novels is that the secondary protagonists not only write about two male protagonists, but also the secondary protagonists progress very quickly without being abusive, and each pair of protagonists can write a book. What I like most is that their family members I can hear the protagonist's voice, so when Huo Yu could hear it, I knew that he and Shen Zhuo were a couple. They should be childhood sweethearts, and everyone had their own ending, and the characters were much more three-dimensional. In the end, there was not too much hatred, only myself was the one to blame.

Nice! ! The plot is rich, and every couple is very happy. Shen Can's voice makes them realize their feelings. Of course, some of them are enlightening [send heart] [send heart] and the characters have distinct personalities, and the timeline is very smooth [laughing] The last sentence: I really like Huo Yan and Shen Zhuo! ! [Send heart][Send heart] Come on, Jimeis [love][attention][attention]

Hey hey hey, it's beautiful, it's so beautiful, Cancan is so cute, the entire Shen family and the Huo family are all very happy! ! ! I really like this kind of plot where everyone is happily married! ! ! The main CP is very addictive, and the deputy CP is also very addictive. I felt very moved after writing this! !

I finished reading it. It's a good watch. [Send Heart] [Send Heart] The plot line and emotional line are well written. The emotional lines of each couple are also well written. There is no problem with the overall plot line. [Send Heart] It's sweet. Every couple is sweet. I like every pair very much. [Send Heart] I like the two children the most. I also like the second brother and the third brother. The second brother falls in love with his straight roommate and the third brother's nemesis. It's very interesting. I also quite like this kind of setting [smirk] [snicker] [smirk] It's a sweet and refreshing article. There is nothing sad about the fate of the bad guys. I am quite satisfied with the fate of the bad guys [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] reading the mind is also very enjoyable [snickering] [smirking] [smirking] The overall structure of the article is really good. It will either make you feel good about revenge and abuse of scum, or it will let you watch some sweet love. It is still very good and there are still many pairs of lovers. I won't say that I'll get tired of watching the same couple all the time [laugh][laugh][laugh] In fact, I feel like I can write a spin-off for each couple, because I'm very interested in the stories of each couple [laugh][laugh][laugh] By the way, the elder brother also loves his younger brother, who is our protagonist [send heart][send heart] Comments say that some people say that the writing style is still a little bit bad and could be improved a little. Indeed, for this type of mind-reading novel, this is considered a short story. The plot lines and emotional lines he can write basically have no big problems. They are very powerful, so I think it is very good.

Good luck to the author, it's very beautiful! But it's not cruel, I kind of want to watch it! [Sinister smile]

[Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it] This book is the least procrastinating I have ever read in the mind-reading/telling-of-your-feeling genre! The author is really efficient! What speed! Although the plot develops quickly and only has more than a hundred chapters, everything that needs to be explained is explained before and after without leaving any holes. Instead of the two male protagonists, you can add tags and micro-group portraits to create various characters and full personalities (without using clichéd descriptions of appearance). Readers do not need to guess again and again to express their feelings for the other half or the follow-up. Most of the grievances between wealthy families and bloody plots in the entertainment industry are included. It includes all kinds of BL/BG types (emphasis added), as well as all kinds of crazy old men and women [smirking] The comments from the book friends in the comment area are simply a source of happiness haha ✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎The author's writing style is good, and when he finds typos, he corrects them in time without making it impossible to change the words after the completion, which affects the reading experience📖All in all, in one sentence, this is the most enjoyable book I have ever read on a similar subject [shy] I finished the review with excitement (*≧∪≦)👍🏻 Let me talk about the minor flaws. Some of the voices don't sound like what's going on in my heart, and the narration seems a bit "dry". There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. It's impossible for every author's work to accurately hit every reader's pleasure. There will always be some book friends in the comment area who exude hostility because of the plot or the lack of male and female development (꒪⌓꒪*), which affects the enjoyment of reading! (There are book friends who don't read the comment section to avoid being tortured) Discussion is not quarreling and swearing. Thank you! Most book lovers just read books to pass the time and have fun! (Belonging to the circle of cuteness) "Shouldn't you read the introduction and tags first when you encounter a book you are interested in? I don't understand but respect it." (Actor Ma's roaring style (๑--๑))

It's very good-looking, but it progressed a bit too fast when there were still more than 30 pictures left. The bad guy and the career of love were taken away from both parties. Although, he is still very good-looking. The full text didn't hit any of my favorite spots and I didn't skip reading it. I woke up this morning and read it, and then I finished reading it at noon today. You can imagine how good it is.

Hehe, I just read a sad story, and I was very sad, so I stopped reading it. I came to look for sweet stories and read more than 20 chapters. I found that this read was incredible, because the characters are really likeable, and the writing is really beautiful (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

It's different from the mind-reading movies I've seen before. Normally, only family members can hear the voice, or only family members and the main character can hear the voice. This is the first time I've experienced the companionship of family members. It's also a wonderful experience. It's really well written.

There are so many melons, so interesting. That's right, I think it would be better if there were more emotional scenes between the two male protagonists. Of course, this is just my personal feeling.

Finished reading on August 8, 2025. I wish the young lovers will always be happy in the parallel world🥰🥰🥰 I hope the author can write more extras about Xiao Zhuo and Huo Yan, their wedding and married life. I really want to read [shy][shy][shy]

I basically laughed all the time. I almost died laughing. I really find the characters very interesting and like them. I like every one of them. Their personalities are different but they are all interesting. (The above opinions are only my personal opinion)

It's okay. The setting is quite interesting, and many of the sub-CPs are sweet. The ending is satisfactory and the logic is self-consistent. The star I removed is because the writing is average, but I can read it, but some places are a bit abrupt. In addition, The main character, Gong Shou, always feels that there is no sense of CP. The relationship between the two of them is not very smooth, and their love is inexplicable. In comparison, the relationship between the deputy CP is more natural. I really like the pairing of Huo Yan and Zhuo Zhuo. They are very sweet.

It's really good-looking, the plot is smooth, and it's all sweet. I can't get enough of it! ! !

It's really great to watch, I highly recommend it. I personally like the plot inside, and the CPs in it are very interesting and sweet [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Learned][Learned]

I have read so many novels about mind-reading, and this one is the one that suits me best. The others became unreadable after just one or two chapters. The plot is smooth and the characters' emotions are well grasped. 2024.8.25

It's good to read. I've read novels similar to "Hear the Protagonist's Voice" before, but I read it today and it's really good. The protagonists all have good personalities and there are no weird points. I'll wait for the update.

Let's talk about the advantages first. The plot is relatively compact, without much delay, and the story is told completely. Although there are many CPs, each one has its own characteristics. The protagonist's voice is very interesting and enjoyable to watch, and the protagonists all have their own mouths. When they realize the problem from the protagonist's voice, they immediately find a way to solve it. They explain when they need explanations and apologize when they need to apologize. They are not stubborn. As for the shortcomings, the writing style needs to be strengthened. The overall narrative is relatively straightforward and a bit dry. Some of the plot descriptions feel like a running account, which is relatively stiff. Sometimes the protagonist's voice is too long. Even if the protagonist knows the plot, when he sees a person, he immediately thinks about the entire plot and has a beginning and an end. Although it is convenient for us readers, it is not very reasonable. The overall literary shortage is remarkable. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write more and better works. Come on!

It's good to watch, but the love line of the main CP is a bit too fast, but it's very interesting. I'm very addicted to the couple of secondary CPs, ah ah ah, I really like the story between them.

Two male protagonists, 1v1, being read, pretending to travel through books, all sugar and no knife It tells the story of relying on the awakened memory of the plot and being read into the mind to help his family change the fate of being persecuted by the original plot. All sugar and no knife, seriously, I saw the story of the Shen brothers who were changed from their original tragic fate, Huo Xi also changed his original tragic fate, and the story of the bullied little poor Huo Yu who changed his fate and grew up together with Xiao Zhuma. There are quite a few French coffee makers, but the protagonist's family is not a French coffee maker. The only problem is that the speed is good but the driving skills need to be improved. Those sessions feel a bit like watching a vernacular. Huo Xi × Shen Can must be happy!

Ahhhhhhhhhh! Super sweet! Although people like Shen Keke make me speechless, it doesn't stop me from having fun! The villain's ending is not bad either! The main thing is! Can't there be more extras between Shen Zhuo and Huo Yan? ! ! ! I want to see junior's sweet daily life! !