After the Villain Family Read My Mind, They Shredded the Trashy Script

It's not easy. I finally came across a passable mind-reading novel. The plot is not sluggish, and the characters of the protagonists don't have any major flaws. The voice of my heart is quite detailed and I don't leave half the story and leave the other half. I quite like reading this type of novel. That's it. I read at least 45 of the 50 books that I kept for the Chinese New Year. I basically gave up after reading more than a dozen chapters. This book is not said to be of high quality, but it doesn't have those two problems. Anyway, I think it's okay. I added it to the bookshelf. Well, there is one thing I don't like very much, that is, I feel a bit too big when being attacked [laughs and cries] The ending was unexpected

It's pretty good, a little immature. After all, it's the author's first book. The inner activities of Can Baobao in the book feel a bit like reciting statements, not quite like some psychological activities, but it's also very good. I like the interaction between the two protagonists very much. The emotional lines of other people are also pretty good. Some of the progress is too fast and unstable. The author can modify it appropriately. I quite like the characters and stories of some of the people in it. The author should work hard! I hope the author can hone his own feelings in writing!

The plot is good, the progress is not laggy, and the characters are also very good. However, the writing style feels average, a bit like reading a running account. Forgive me for not being able to hold on. Come on, author!

Wow wow wow, it's really good-looking, and the family members are also very obedient and very capable of action. Shen Can's mind is spoiled one second, and the family members start to take action to change their original destiny the next second. The eldest brother and sister-in-law are my literary friends, the second brother and Lu Shao (the second brother-in-law) are the brothers who I have a crush on my straight roommate in literature, the third brother and Su Nanxing (the third brother-in-law) are my sworn enemies who supported me in literature after I went bankrupt, and the fourth brother and fourth sister-in-law are the military boss and the mute bride. I really like each pair very much, hehe, I also like the kid brother cp. And the story line is also drawn out very quickly. I like this kind of novel the best.

It's pretty good. The plot unfolds quite quickly. At least it doesn't drag on. But the writing style is biased toward Xiaobai, and the descriptions in many places are too fast. For example, when Xu Zhuo recognizes his relatives, the Shen family is too obvious. Didn't Shen Can think that his family could hear his voice? I don't deny that this article does have merits, but paying more attention to certain details in some places will improve the quality of the article. Moreover, when reading mind-reading articles, don't rely too much on your own voice. You must rely more on your own verification. What if sometimes it is unreliable? I think this is the fault of most mind-reading articles. They rely too much on what the mind-reading articles say.

The plot is not procrastinating, the structure is complete, the emotional line is relatively fast, and the characters' personalities are well described, but there are one or two small problems. First, the writing is a bit rough, and I hope the author can practice his writing. Second, the description of the article is sometimes a little wordy and could be pruned and concise. However, the writing is still quite good. The CP is very sweet and plentiful, and it tastes very good when kneaded. The characters' personalities are also very rich and distinctive. I hope the author can continue to work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง.

🥰🥰🥰 It is a rare novel that goes from beginning to end. It does not mean that there are no ups and downs, but it does not have the kind of [learned], the plot is about to end and the villain is about to be defeated, and the result is a super twist (no). The reader feels comfortable, breasts are relaxed, and the penis is strong. Highly recommended 🤔🤔, it is very, very good for people who like to read sweet stories. There are very few peeing spots. It makes people want to continue reading after reading a chapter. The ending for everyone is very acceptable (including the ending of the villain is also very refreshing [I learned]) Oh, by the way, it is also a rare plot where the villain does not fight back after defeating him (the child has long wanted to know why in those previous books, when the villain was defeated in the finale, the villain had to have a chance to hurt the protagonist again, which made people's breasts jump 🙂)

The plot is very smooth, especially the mind-reading part. It is very straightforward. There will be no situation where the mind-reader says "original plot" and then stops in the middle to make people guess, or repeats it several times and asks other people to read the mind. It is very enjoyable to read! [You taste carefully] The conditions for mind reading are also very simple, as long as the Shen family and their partners can hear it. For example, Huo You couldn't hear it at first, but he heard it immediately after he identified Shen Zhuo, so I stood by this pair of little CPs from the beginning! 🤭 Every couple is very sweet, and the relationship is gradual. After all, Huo Xi and Shen Can have never met before, and they gradually fell in love with each other through daily interactions. They are really good! 😘 The deputy CP progressed so quickly after reading her mind and piercing the window paper, so it was very sweet. However, the proposal was a bit "difficult" and you had to always pay attention to Cancan's voice. It was really interesting! 😆

The author is really good at writing, I love reading, the plot is not procrastinating, the characters' IQ and EQ are all online, of course I am not talking about the group of people named Zhou, they are not worthy, Huo Xi's straightforward romantic [admiration], the confession under the starry sky, really excited me to death, Chan Chan is my best talker [blowing kisses], can talk a lot, loves to listen, and Lu Shao's proposal, not to mention how excited I am, so excited, I am really happy for them. To sum up, the characters and plot are very good, especially the desire to watch.

It's super good-looking. Although this is a novel about two male protagonists, what's different from other novels is that the secondary protagonists not only write about two male protagonists, but also the secondary protagonists progress very quickly without being abusive, and each pair of protagonists can write a book. What I like most is that their family members I can hear the protagonist's voice, so when Huo Yu could hear it, I knew that he and Shen Zhuo were a couple. They should be childhood sweethearts, and everyone had their own ending, and the characters were much more three-dimensional. In the end, there was not too much hatred, only myself was the one to blame.