System+Rebirth+Green Plum+Campus+Entrepreneurship+Multiple heroines+Shura Field
Five years ago, late-stage gastric cancer took away Yu Yanshan's life, and Wu Wenyuan's heart was filled with endless grief. Perhaps his life was destined to be unhappy. His beloved relatives passed away one after another, which dealt a heavy blow to his soul.
After wandering around one night, he got a glass bottle with the Arabic numeral 8, and accidentally unscrewed the lid. What Wu Wenyuan didn't expect was that a five-clawed golden dragon jumped out. The old dragon said that it could grant him five wishes and thanked him for saving him.
He made five outrageous wishes, one of which was to go back to the past. All the wishes came true, and he successfully returned to eleven years ago.
Back to Wu Wenyuan in 2013, what he didn't expect was that his wife in his previous life was also reborn, but she just forgot about him.
[The introduction is too weak, please read the novel]
Reader comments
I read Chapter 6, and from the perspective of perception, I can see that the author's writing style is very good, and he can summarize the psychological activities of the characters in detail to the point of empathy. But there are also shortcomings: too much text is spent on introducing past life experiences at the beginning. The systematic introduction and various settings even include the seven deadly sins, male body, and female body. It's not that too many settings are bad, it's just that too many settings are introduced from the beginning. Not only will it not appear rigorous, but it will appear verbose. It is introduced at the beginning: the heroine is sick and is about to die. After the hero tried to deceive the heroine about her minor illness and was found out, he stayed with the heroine for four months. The bottle was left open for a long time, but it was not opened. After it was finally opened, the male protagonist made a wish to a dragon. After that, the female protagonist was reborn and spent a lot of chapters describing how good-looking the female protagonist's best friend was. Then the two went to get food and expressed how attractive they were at school. Then the male protagonist was reborn and got the system, recalling how painful he was in his previous life. Then, he used the system to measure his own data, and the system began to introduce the seven deadly sin settings of various superpowers. After drawing a wave prize, he got a female body and began to introduce the role of the female body. Then the male protagonist began to try out the female body. He introduced that the female body was very beautiful and could play the violin. He took a picture and sent it. Then the male protagonist switched back and imagined that if the female protagonist had not been sick in the past life, The two of them can still have a better life, and then they pray for their sister and brother-in-law, and then they fall into a dream and travel through time and space, constantly repeating the experiences of their previous lives, experiencing the ups and downs of life and death again, and after experiencing the pain of life and death again, they draw money and ask the system for advice on what to buy. The system starts to introduce the skill book, and then draws the potion. The protagonist wants to drink it all at once, but the system advises against it. The protagonist gives up drinking it all, and starts to introduce various super powers. The protagonist asks the system for answers. At the end of the Q&A, the protagonist's various skills on the data panel are shown. Then the protagonist picks up his phone and sees how many people comment on how beautiful his female body is. Finally, the protagonist looks at the street scene and sighs with emotion. Chapter 6 is over @ in Dongaozi Island. The author, come out and see for yourself if you think the plot is a bit too dragging [face covering]
I read Chapter 6, and from the perspective of perception, I can see that the author's writing style is very good, and he can summarize the psychological activities of the characters in detail to the point of empathy. But there are also shortcomings: too much text is spent on introducing past life experiences at the beginning. The systematic introduction and various settings even include the seven deadly sins, male body, and female body. It's not that too many settings are bad, it's just that too many settings are introduced from the beginning. Not only will it not appear rigorous, but it will appear verbose. It is introduced at the beginning: the heroine is sick and is about to die. After the hero tried to deceive the heroine about her minor illness and was found out, he stayed with the heroine for four months. The bottle was left open for a long time, but it was not opened. After it was finally opened, the male protagonist made a wish to a dragon. After that, the female protagonist was reborn and spent a lot of chapters describing how good-looking the female protagonist's best friend was. Then the two went to get food and expressed how attractive they were at school. Then the male protagonist was reborn and got the system, recalling how painful he was in his previous life. Then, he used the system to measure his own data, and the system began to introduce the seven deadly sin settings of various superpowers. After drawing a wave prize, he got a female body and began to introduce the role of the female body. Then the male protagonist began to try out the female body. He introduced that the female body was very beautiful and could play the violin. He took a picture and sent it. Then the male protagonist switched back and imagined that if the female protagonist had not been sick in the past life, The two of them can still have a better life, and then they pray for their sister and brother-in-law, and then they fall into a dream and travel through time and space, constantly repeating the experiences of their previous lives, experiencing the ups and downs of life and death again, and after experiencing the pain of life and death again, they draw money and ask the system for advice on what to buy. The system starts to introduce the skill book, and then draws the potion. The protagonist wants to drink it all at once, but the system advises against it. The protagonist gives up drinking it all, and starts to introduce various super powers. The protagonist asks the system for answers. At the end of the Q&A, the protagonist's various skills on the data panel are shown. Then the protagonist picks up his phone and sees how many people comment on how beautiful his female body is. Finally, the protagonist looks at the street scene and sighs with emotion. Chapter 6 is over @ in Dongaozi Island. The author, come out and see for yourself if you think the plot is a bit too dragging [face covering]