Demon Slayer: I Became a Ghost After Being Betrayed

I think it's quite interesting. The protagonist is quite miserable. Because of his birth appearance, he is not recognized by everyone and is regarded as a disaster. However, he expresses his kindness like a warm sun to people who treat him kindly. He is clearly not wrong, but he is still treated like this. Although he later turned into a ghost. , Is still gentle, as bright as the bright moon, Ling is very strong and gentle, he is really good, I hope Ling can be happy, I hope someone can really care about him and recognize him, I recommend everyone to read it (this is the first time I write such a long book review, it is only my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it) Finally, I want to say that your writing is very good. Come on, Dada! Keep up the good work! [Send heart][Please update]

Very nice! You can see that the writing style has gradually improved! Keep up the great work, author! ! [Sending Hearts]

Nice! Once this book becomes popular, I will be an old fan. Ohohohoho\^O^/

It's so beautiful. The author is also slowly making progress. Come on! ! ! Update more [Sending Hearts]

What about our protagonist's protagonist aura? Such a tragic fate, I feel so sad. I hope the ending will be the villain's death and justice for our little protagonist. This is a fan! ! Something happened to the protagonist! I hope to see Ling have a good ending

This is the first Demon Slayer fanfic I've read. It's good-looking and fits my taste, but it's too short. I hope the teacher will read more [Send heart][Send heart][Love]

Come on! ! Great author! You are working hard and your writing skills are gradually improving. Although there are some minor flaws, namely typos and incorrect sentences, overall it is very nice! ! I hope you will gradually correct your shortcomings, work hard to develop your strengths, and make this work better and better! ! Come on! ! Support you!

Ahhhhhhhhhhh it's beautiful! ! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such a beautiful fanfic. It's not obtrusive at all, and there's no contradiction. The only bad thing is, there are too few [crying] and I don't have the patience to read more [face covering] But the author should pay attention to rest, thank you for your hard work [please update][please update]

Be nice to Ling! Be nice to Ling! Be nice to Ling! Be nice to Ling! Be nice to Ling! Be nice to Ling! Be nice to Ling! Be nice to Ling! Be nice to Ling! Be nice to Ling! Be nice to Ling! Be nice to Ling! Enough! I feel sorry for him [crying]

Good luck! But the promised group pet turned out to be betrayed by even the bird. Why does it feel like everyone around him is taking advantage of him. I sincerely beg to let go

It's super beautiful. It's one of the novels that I look forward to the new chapter every day. Ling is the best and most beautiful. He's not a monster! Another person wrote a letter in blood begging his wife to write sweet Yueling [almost crying] [almost crying]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, all good-looking and good-looking. I can't stop looking at it except that it looks good. It's super good-looking. Besides being good-looking, it's great. This is the first time I've seen such an article. It's high quality. I like it [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The author has a lot of typos because of procrastination, but I read books very quickly, so it doesn't have much of an impact. Ling is really good. I don't think the characters are OOC. Ling's character struck a chord with me, I've long wanted to watch the stupid and strong character [please update] Love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love the author [love] [blowing kiss] Don't worry about the bad comments, don't worry~

Can you tell the people around Ling to stop betraying him? It looks a bit sad. I hope the author can make Ling a happier ghost and stop betraying him. ⸝⸝ʚ̴̶̷̆ ̯ʚ̴̶̷̆⸝⸝

Looks good! Like it! Come on!

Super pretty! ! The character creation is also very good, and it feels relatively novel [Adoration] [Adoration], especially the protagonist, who has a very charming personality. I hope the author can continue to update [shy][sending heart][sending heart][asking for more updates]

I like it very much. It's been a long time since I've come across a piece of writing that I like very much.

This is the best fanfic about Demon Slayer I have seen so far! ! !

I have to say that this book can be considered a good book. The plot is quite compact and not too dragging. Except for the timeline being a bit blurry, this does not affect it. After all, every book is better if it has its own innovation and creativity. The protagonist of this book is too indifferent. Although the character is like this, I became a little uninterested after reading it. The beginning was okay, Kotonoha and Kanae were saved, but Tanjiro and his family still sent it as in the original plot, which made me feel a little uncomfortable (forgive me, I really hope they survive). Although I know that the plot will not progress if they don't send it, but I just don't like it. Regardless of other things, I can still give this book five stars, but I have selfish motives (I didn't save Tanjiro's family), so I just want to give it four stars (the author apologizes). In short, many people will still like to read this book, so I would like to recommend it!

The setting is very novel, at least I haven't seen this trend very often, but there is still room for improvement in terms of writing. The author is probably a novice, and it can be seen that he is not very skilled in handling rhythm. The overall reading gives people a feeling of eagerness to advance the plot, and he is a little stingy in the application of punctuation marks. It should be that he has not passed the local punctuation mark application license. It is easy to pass. I sincerely recommend that the author take one. All in all, the flaws outweigh the flaws. The novel setting and non-OOC character descriptions can ignore the discomfort with the rhythm. (After reading the first few chapters, I couldn't help but write about it. Reading for less than half an hour should not affect the rating of this book)

I have a picky taste and finally found a book that I like very much [Adoration]

It looks good, please give it a thumbs up to the author (ง•̀_•́)ง

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! Finished the chase in one day. . . Author, please be sure to update more! ! ! I really like this article. I don't know what to read after reading it. I like Ling Bao's character so much! ! ! I hope the author will not give up [love][love][love][love][love][love][] To be honest, after reading this book, I found the others boring. I really like Ling Baomei's strong and miserable character, it really pissed me off [Blow kiss] [Love]

Ah? I finished reading it in one go, and now it's gone, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nossssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssn; ve; ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! The psychological tangle of the character and what he went through made me feel a little distressed. They were all betrayals. Xiaobai betrayed him. Wuxian, a peer in this world, also had bad intentions. It was also a betrayal in another sense. Alas, now I just hope that the child is well and that his brother can protect him.

Nice! Ling's character really impressed me! I really like Ling! [Blowing kiss]

I just want to ask if there is anyone who has been reading longer than me (proud)

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It's really good to read. From my very embarrassing first novel, I can see that the writing has improved a lot. The plot has become smoother and the characters have become more fleshed out. And I can really feel the author's rapid progress in writing. The writing is really good-looking, the plot is compact, and the characters are well-drawn. It's a very good-looking novel. I like to read it. [Love][love][love][love][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It looks good, can the author update it faster? [Send heart][Send heart]

It's quite interesting. After inserting an anchor point here, this book became popular and I am the senior! Super nice