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I don't know how to evaluate it, but it should be said that it really deserves to be a female channel. When it came to Journey to the West, I actually wanted to rely on emotions instead of improving my strength, and it also described the faces of monsters. To be honest, those who cultivated immortals and cultivators all had magic powers, and they were all big monsters. They were all good-looking and speechless. For a female channel, it was okay.

Very interesting idea! When I was a kid, when I read Journey to the West, I felt that the jade-faced fox was very pitiful and it shouldn't have ended like this. Thanks to the author for giving Jade Face a new life, I hope she can find happiness in this book [Blowing Kiss] The author will update it soon

A heroine like this who can flirt with and sleep with without being sloppy at all is an SSS level rarity. The only shortcoming in the early stage (about 100 chapters) is that I always stop practicing. Later, the author said that it was due to the characteristics of the technique, I couldn't practice alone, and I always used a very long paragraph to describe the appearance. (I hope there will be more appearance descriptions like this in the future. Divide it into paragraphs. If you write an online article like this, the number of words in each paragraph is smaller, or the number of words describing the appearance is reduced. I feel that I can retain more readers, but these are just some of my personal reading suggestions) and the portrayal of the village woman... Overall, I feel that this article is really good. The faults are not hidden. The character of the heroine alone is already hard to find in the world. (I really want this kind of romantic heroine now. It's not the kind that looks romantic but is actually more chaste than anyone else, and the kind who treats romance as a superficial character, but this kind of heroine. Such a real romance in this novel) and the writing style is also very good and fascinating. It very naturally brings out the characters of each person on the page [like][like][like] I really licked this writing style [licking the screen](//∇//)[licking the screen] Finally, I beg for more updates. The child is starving to death while holding the bowl. He is starving to death. Hey, you have not updated for thirty-one hours and twenty-nine minutes. The baby has starved to death in the comment area. This romantic heroine is really awesome (//∇//) Many female characters are portrayed as somewhat vicious, while male characters are generally noble and perfect.

It's really beautiful, but why can't the author update it in time? ⊙ω⊙ (I don't mean to condemn, stack up your armor to save your life) I really like the author's writing style. I also like the protagonist's character. The concept is still very clever. I just hope that the author can make regular, quantitative and qualitative updates. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

There are too few male protagonists, how can three be enough? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I'm going to be angry [Angry] I'm here because of the many male protagonists [Grieved] I said wait a minute, why are you waiting for me? No, no, the author is great, don't have only three Ah [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Erlang Shen, Monkey King, there must be at least one such classic character [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] I'm going to make a scene [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy]

Why did the update stop? Please update quickly^o^~! ! ! ! ! I will always support you!

I like this kind of small character's struggle and growth history, but I feel that the development of the heroine's supernatural powers can be more imaginative. For example, she is from the fox tribe, and her cultivation cannot be enhanced because of the skills, but illusion is their talent. So, can this aspect be developed? Enhancement, learning from each other's strengths, and the character design of the heroine. I feel that it is starting to be shaped towards the Virgin White Lotus. I prefer the chaotic evil character. The same goes for the plot. I feel that it is going towards the human race's belief in worshiping gods. I am tired of similar plots. I hope there will be something innovative.

So pretty! I can't find a meal replacement, but it just hurts to see the heroine helpless against the Bull Demon King. I hope to take revenge on the Bull Demon King as soon as possible. It would be better if I can get the money back. I'll wait for the update. My wife wrote it very well. I like it very much. It's great.

It looks great, but the update speed is too slow. (Can the heroine slowly become stronger? I can't read so many chapters, and there is no progress at all. She can't just increase her IQ without increasing her strength. This will make her look very... Passive and controlled by others. You didn't say she must be very strong, but she should have the ability to protect herself.)

This novel is so beautiful. I highly recommend it. I couldn't stop reading the plot after just one glance. I love this author so much. I want to see the plot behind it and update it soon. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

This plot, this story, I love it to death, very exciting, but there is one point that I am really afraid that many people will not like it and will scold them maliciously. Don't do this. I really like it, so don't run away from him.

First of all, I like the descriptions of the male protagonists, they are all very good, and then the emotional lines and other aspects are actually quite good. I can accept it and read it with relish. But it was okay at the beginning. After reading so many chapters in a row, the portrayal of the female villains is very flat, and even the motivations and purposes are: to squeeze out the female protagonist and seduce men. I can understand the need for some villains to add to the excitement of the story, but the purpose and motivation are hard to judge...

Jijiji I am the King of Jiji. I hope the author will update it a lot. I like this work very much.

It's quite creative, and the heroine is also very sober and gradually gaining strength. But sometimes I feel that the heroine is awkward and awkward. The plot design is interesting, but the content of the interspersed novel is too long and too specific, and I don't want to read it in Chinese. The design is so interspersed with the content of the novel that I just want to skip it.

So I went to Huaguo Mountain or Zhongnan Mountain. I was curious, could it be done faster? People always update chapters three or four. Baozi, why did you only update one chapter? You don't update it every day. It's so painful.

Too little, tied. The writing is really good, and the heroine is also struggling to survive. I hope to be able to torture the scumbag to death in the future!

I really like this book, can't it be updated? [Send a heartfelt message]

It's pretty good to watch, but I don't really like how the various sports events are described in such detail. I can just brush it off in one go. The main thing is the plot.

It's super good. I hope the author will update it more. It's not enough. The plot is so touching. It's my favorite kind of author who can't stop watching it. If you don't update it, I'll go crazy😭😭😭

It's beautiful and interesting. The descriptions of people and scenery are very detailed. It has the same feeling as when I read novels a few years ago. However, some comments always say that the heroine does not focus on improving her strength. I want to say that the talent is there, and there is no opportunity. Everyone's imagination and ideas are different. The author can write whatever he likes, and you can find what you want to see.

Sensational character. After the misunderstanding between the heroine and the man occurs, the heroine will not fall in love sadistically, but let the heroine run to the next man, leaving the man alone as a widow. Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Can we add a golden-winged roc later? He's very capable and handsome in the background [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Hee hee, [shy] good-looking and strategic

Characters with distinct and three-dimensional personalities

Actually, it's quite interesting, and it looks delicious.

The author should update this article soon. What do you say? Really nice to look at. Well, how should I put it? It's really fun to watch. Anyway, it looks good.

It's very beautiful and the writing is very good, but the author is a bit slow in updating it.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

I like it very much, I like it very much, I like it so much, I just like the heroine to pursue a career and a boy's self-guide 😏 I really like the heroine to be smart and business-minded, she won't have a smooth journey like cheating, and then stand at the top

It looks good. I was worried that it would not look good when only about 3,000 people saw it. I didn't expect it to be so well written and divided into volumes clearly. It's worth buying! Moreover, the heroine is not aggrieved, she is also calculating and knows how to protect herself.