My Little Pony: Journey's End

A very good subject. I think Chinese people with a spirit of sacrifice like this kind of passionate chivalry spirit (I get goosebumps every time I hear the word "Charge"). And who is the CP, Tia or Luna? Moreover, the Royal Abandoned Castle of the Endless Forest was destroyed during the fight between the two sisters of Nightmare Moon, so the background is a bit confusing. The protagonist can also refer to the pony Tianqin in the background to arrange a curse or something to disappear for thousands of years. Generally speaking, I think you can give it a seven out of ten points. Let's talk about the advantages first: the subject matter can resonate with many people, the story progresses at a good pace, and the family line with the royal sisters is very warm. These can continue to be optimized. Let's talk about the shortcomings: the background of the protagonist is too deep and complicated, and there is no systematic analysis. Writing whatever comes to mind is likely to lead to plot conflicts in the later stage. Secondly, there are many pitfalls about the background, which may cause problems in the personality construction of the protagonist. Furthermore, in the end, these knights held a mausoleum meeting, which was okay. They are heroes, not lonely ghosts. You can consider building a Knights Hall, and the noble souls of all knights will be called into the Knights Hall. Here are my opinions: The first thing is to enrich the plot. Thousands of years ago, Equestria was surrounded by powerful enemies, full of external worries but few internal worries. There is no need to make the class antagonism clear so early. You can add some nobles who have outstanding achievements and moral character and awakened to become a knight family due to the protagonist's personality charm. Thousands of years later, the overt and secret fights between the knightly nobles and the pedantic nobles are all points to write about. I suggest you consider it. And consider adding thousand-year-old powerhouses like Chrysalis Tirek, Discord, and Yellow Devil to the main line. [You taste carefully]

The content is smooth, and may seem a bit confusing at first. This is because things from various big worlds are mixed together. As the plot develops, it will become more and more smooth. The main storyline of the first three volumes is the pioneering story of little Maria 1,000 years before the protagonist group. There are no obvious poisonous points. But it's hard to recommend the book. After all, the things written in the front are too complicated. It's easy to give up at first glance. There is no pattern. It feels like I just remembered one part and wrote another. The background is too complicated. Although the plot is getting better and better so far, the front part is really too complicated. I have read this book three times. The first few times, I gave up after just one glance and felt completely clueless. Later, I ran out of books to read and read on, only to find that the writing got better and better. However, the messy beginning is really easy to discourage [facepalm]. Now I want to recommend a book to you, but I don't know how to recommend it to others [facepalm]

It's very beautiful, and the various settings are perfectly integrated. I just hope that the words of the characters can be added with "", and I hope that the author can continue writing (the protagonist should have a story in the m6 era [sending my heart])

The background alone is very rich, and it's a wonderful story even without being included in the main plot (Twilight/Twilight Sparkle)! It is highly recommended to watch it. Although the main plot has not yet been reached and is still being laid out, such a protagonist is more real and does not feel like an existence outside the world!

It looks good, but it feels weird without the ""

Is there a female protagonist in this book? If so, who is it?

The narration of the story is quite good and very interesting.

Ah, uh, ah, well, it looks good [like]

I have a good idea, but it hurts my eyes when I look at it and it feels messy

This book may feel a bit confusing at first, mainly because of the various backgrounds blended together. But if you look at the back, you will know that this is very well knitted and will get better and better in the future. The most important thing is that the main plot has not yet started. There are many, many chapters to read, and there are also some foreshadowings, such as which pony Nianxin brought to Hogwarts. In short, it is very interesting (if the author can add an introduction to the protagonist at the beginning, it will be a lot smoother at the beginning)

The story is very good and interesting

This book is very good∨

It might seem a bit boring at first, but the story behind it is still very exciting.

I have only read the previous original story, not the rest, but it is really exciting, because the protagonist has been to many other worlds before coming to Equestria, so some people may not understand some of the settings, but don't worry about those more vague settings appearing less frequently. Even some of the more complicated settings are explained more clearly. And then there is this novel, which is really a very spiritual novel.

It feels like this is the one with the strongest comprehensive national power among all the pony fanfics so far. It's a bit strange that a good book can't live up to it.

Whether the protagonist is an Alicorn or a Pegasus, by the way, the author must draw a portrait of the protagonist. How many girlfriends will the protagonist have in the future?

Come on, come on, come on

Very good, very touching. The story is well written and wonderfully written.

Great story, keep it up!

Why isn't it popular? [Angry] [angry] [angry] How beautiful it is Hurry up and get a CP for Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash and Applejack The author is great, I also want to write a book, can I link up with you?

Well, I don't know what to say. Well, that's it.

Very beautiful, this is a rare book

It's very cool, he blends different worldviews together, and nothing goes against the grain.

Will it end well?

The painting is "really really" good

Mark the punctuation marks on the previous pictures. The writing is really cool.

Very good, but the dialogue without quotation marks will probably dissuade many people.

Not bad. Very nice book.

Looks good

It's good to watch, love to watch.