This is the first time a newcomer has published a book. Please read it and give suggestions to the author on any areas where the writing is not good. The author loves words and literature. This is my first time writing a long story, and I have written many short stories before.
Reader comments
The writing is very good, and the lyricism is very smooth, but the combination of lyricism and plot is a bit stiff, and the lyricism is very abrupt in some places. In addition, the plot progress is also a bit stiff, and there are a lot of typos and wrong punctuation. But it has surpassed many novice writers [Like]
The writing is very good, and the lyricism is very smooth, but the combination of lyricism and plot is a bit stiff, and the lyricism is very abrupt in some places. In addition, the plot progress is also a bit stiff, and there are a lot of typos and wrong punctuation. But it has surpassed many novice writers [Like]