My Brother Is a Genius but My Sister Is Too Afraid to Speak.

Personally, I think it's okay, mainly because the setting is more to my liking, but I feel that the author is still a bit of a novice. I suggest you review the manuscript more. If you have time, I suggest you revise the previous ones, refine the sentences, and practice the writing a little better. The person pronouns should also be unified, and don't use the first person and the third person, and the original book sister in front of me. You don't need to write so detailed about the cause of my sister's death. Just write a few paragraphs. You can intersperse some details in the memories later. You don't need to write so many chapters. I suggest you change the introduction and the title and cover of the book to make it more attractive. In short, it looks good so far. There is nothing wrong with it. I will give you five stars to encourage you. If you encounter any surprises later, I will modify the rating [Sending Hearts]

From my experience, it is a good book, but it is a bit uncomfortable with the various interpersonal relationships of the heroine. After all, although a girl is silent and reluctant to communicate with others, I personally feel that it should be easier to make friends with girls. Of course, this is not necessarily true, but for more than 50 chapters, the heroine has an enemy relationship with women, but there is no one Female friends, on the contrary, are a lot of boys. Although there are people with whom we only have a few words of friendship, there are not a few good-natured girls to communicate with the heroine. This is a bit of a problem in my opinion, but it is not a big problem. Come on, the author is great. It would be better to add one or two female supporting characters. After all, the female channel also has female supporting characters other than vicious female supporting characters.

It's very beautiful. I don't know why the rating is so low. I really like the heroine and the setting of the brother. He looks cool outside but looks like a big dog in front of my sister.

The plot is quite good, but I feel that there is a bit of blankness in the description of the characters and a lack of language description. I think the author can add a chatty character. Of course, this is just a personal feeling. The author doesn't care if he doesn't listen.

It's okay. The subject matter is quite new. I just hope there won't be a male protagonist. If there is a male protagonist, what will my brother do? [Thinking]

Heaven is still suppressing the protagonist, and the protagonist has to follow the plot to get rid of it. I hope that the protagonist can change the fate of himself and his brother later. If he can seize the opportunity, he will seize it, otherwise he will become an enemy. I hope I have my own thoughts. If you like this kind of article, you can read it...

The author's writing is pretty good, but I hope the author can make the heroine's brother and heroine work hard to change their destiny and make some companions along the way. The two of them practice immortality and become stronger together. I don't want them to have CP.

The plot is great, but the writing seems a bit complicated, but the more I write, the more I practice! I think he is a rising star⭐, he can join the trap🕳️[Like this post][Like this post]

It's very interesting, the topic is very novel, and it does look like an outline at first, but the writing gets better and better later on, so keep up the good work! !

It's very good-looking, and it doesn't matter if it has a male protagonist or not, but the male protagonist can't be Hanji! The title of the first meeting in the courtyard really scared me, especially when he was immediately grabbed by the princess's sleeve and agreed to go shopping with her.

The story is very good and shows the growth process of the heroine. However, perhaps because of the third-person perspective, the sense of immersion is not strong.

The author's writing style is gradually getting better. It can be seen that the writer has become a little better than Xiaobai, and the plot is still enjoyable to watch. It is somewhat attractive. From the front to the back of the book, you can see the author's changes and the improvement of his writing style. You can see that the author is slowly getting better. However, the author can tell that he probably has to go to school a little less. He still hopes that the author can write more. Don't be tired, author, and of course don't stop. Threat. Jpg It is recommended that the author keep more manuscripts during vacation, and then slowly publish them when he is in school. Otherwise, there will always be nothing. I always like to search for novice writers like this. I really can see that the writing is getting better. Hehe. If the author opens the next book after finishing this one, the score of the next book should be 89 points. If he stops following the ones with lower scores, there will be no traffic. Otherwise, with the author's current writing style, it will be no problem to get 8 points, so the author, please update more. You can save up your manuscripts over the weekend and publish them slowly.

I like the plot of this novel very much. The heroine works hard to practice for herself and her brother. She never acts impulsively and observes problems calmly and objectively. I really like the heroine with this kind of personality. Moreover, the heroine is someone who will not tolerate being wronged and will fight back. I like this advantage very much

This book is really beautiful. There are some minor flaws in the writing style, but because it is the first time the author has written it, it is already very good. It will be improved in the future. Also, the updates are too slow. You can keep it up.

It's quite good-looking. I don't think I'll be obsessed with him. He's such a good brother, and the heroine's efforts are in vain.

It's pretty good-looking, but has a bit of a human-machine feel.

Dear author, does my sister have CP?

Yes, I came in after reading a tweet. I searched for it for a long time, but the name of the tweet didn't work. I was dissatisfied and searched for a long time before I found the name, but I still couldn't find it. Fortunately, I didn't give up and kept searching.

If there were no settings such as furnace, rebirth, and book travel, the subject matter would still be very good.

Love it! I'm a little curious if the way of heaven will prevent the protagonist from suppressing the protagonist after passing the certain death point (because I'm not sure if I have passed that point). You can use it but you can't do it without it. Especially when others look at you, you will feel pressure. I hope that the protagonist can find a suitable master and learn more assistance to directly explode the whole world. Since I just updated, I have indeed not passed that point yet. I hope the protagonist is fine!

I started listening to the book at double speed too fast or something. I felt that the heroine was like an NPC following the plot. When drawing the symbols, the heroine concentrated hard. After drawing several talisman papers, she finally finished the drawing. I felt that the heroine didn't need to put much effort. She just finished it with just a few strokes. It was like a wonderful story that was told in two sentences.

May I ask if the heroine has CP?

For the time being, deducting one star, I feel that the conflict broke out very strangely. Who else would have ridiculed an unfamiliar child for no reason, and then on the third floor of the foundation building, he fought with Nascent Soul back and forth and even killed him. And why was the Nascent Soul in the sea of ​​​​consciousness of the human original heroine in the storage bag [Thinking]

Okay, will my sister have CP?

It's very, very beautiful. The heroine is really beautiful. Not only is she beautiful, but she is also very good at life and work. I prefer reading this kind of writing to mindless writing! Love you author [blowing kiss]

It's quite good-looking, with a very heart-warming plot of getting along, Mo Yu is very good, and Mo Ning is cute. Looking forward to updates [sending heartfelt wishes]

Everything else is fine, but I feel the currency system is a bit weird, and shouldn't equipment that can withstand the attacks of high-level monks be a life-saving trump card? How can I still buy it directly?

I was attracted by the introduction and it was my first time seeing this kind of subject matter. Personally I think it looks great! I hope there won't be another male protagonist. You can write more about the interactions with your brother. Please don't let it be unfinished and you can update it more slowly. I'll keep an eye on it. Big cheers for the author!

It's really good-looking, I won't comment, I can only say wow, wow, everyone, show it to me! ! !

It's really sad, the protagonist's character is so lovable! Strong Amway!