After Gb's Business Marriage, I Ate Really Well

Yes, it's an ordinary short story. The male and female protagonists have equal personalities. It's not like the popular low-self-esteem, paranoid, and yandere novels nowadays. It's rare to see a four-love novel about normal people. Do you have any writing plans?

The author writes very well, but you can use more reference to learn the paragraphs. Some paragraphs are too long, which affects reading and the experience is not good. I hope the author will continue to work hard, 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😘[Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

It's pretty good, nothing off-putting, just a refreshing cookie. However, you still have to pay attention to the paragraph division and word count. When reading a novel, a paragraph with too many words will become a long paragraph, which makes it uncomfortable to read.

It's a very sweet little story. I highly recommend it. The male and female protagonists are both very upright and well-educated people. There is no such thing as a male or female supporting character who just makes trouble out of love. There are very few love-minded people in the article, most of them are career-minded.

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It's a warm love that flows slowly

Nice! ! ! ! So sweet, mutual favor is the way to go!

It's just that every paragraph is too long, but the rest is okay.

What can I say, that's the end of my writing skills. I hope someone likes this kind of pure love as much as I do.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Although the number of articles is small, it is very, very sweet and not cruel at all. My aunt laughed when she read it.

Love this novel!

There's no meat at all [almost crying]

Love to watch, like it

Sweet and reassuring

Jiang Yangsheng♡Tang Qingzhi

Nice, but too short

Just a little too short Not enough [shy][shy][shy]

Ah ah ah why is it over so quickly?

Soft and waxy Zhizhi~so cute and cute Write a side story ~ and then have a baby

Each paragraph is too long, you can divide it into a few more sentences

Woohoo, it's so good. I've really been short of books for a long time. I love this kind of warm cookie. [Sending my heart] Please publish a new book.

Very warm and beautiful, but a bit short! ! It's simply not enough to watch! !

Although it is short, it is beautiful. Abo is really good

Beautiful! Plain and simple is the best

The writing style is very good, the plot is also great, and the characters are delicately carved, but it doesn't pay much attention to sentence segmentation and paragraph division. It seems like a lot of effort.

Such a sweet short story, I really like it. Will the author write on the same subject again in the future? This movie is really short and I can't get enough of it.

So sweet! ! ! I like it so much. Please write more. I love watching it. I love watching it. I like this kind of sweet cookie with long flowing water [love][love][love]

Sweet and reassuring

Nice! ! The feelings are delicate, have a good time