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Your introduction successfully attracted me, but the process successfully dissuaded me. The introduction is quite attractive. What a pity. I still think four stars is too high.

The relatively simple rebirth holographic fusion reality game reminds me of the time when I first read online game articles. There were one or two holographic online game articles in which the female protagonist was the first mage or the first priest. Although the content was different, the feeling of reading the article was the same [face covering] I can't remember the name. Later I read the article once or twice. I give it five stars because I think it's a very cool novel without any brains, because I'm really interested in reading the follow-up [Cool] [Exploration] Just keep going like this [laughing and crying] [covering face] I'm tired, I've read countless novels with different types of settings, and there's nothing I want to read for the time being [Read carefully] Come on 💪 Let's update the novels on the bookshelf

It's so stupid and peaceful [covers face] like it was written by a middle school student. But this kind of unintelligent look is not the disgusting stupidity that is common in male porn videos, but a naive look... First of all, there are too many small bugs to count. Secondly, the heroine talks too much and is not very smart. And then, as a game article, there is no data at all, just a few levels. The game mechanics and world view are also imperfect. After reading it, it is the only one by the author. If it is the first one, it is already very powerful. I encourage you. Some issues are indeed difficult for novice authors to grasp. Without writing the novel as an outline, it has exceeded 50% hahahahahaha

How do you feel about this book? I read it because I really like this genre and there is no cp. I have read Chapter 25. Well, I feel that there are a lot of bugs and the heroine is a bit of a middle-class girl. But I can still watch it. After all, this genre is not too many and it doesn't step on my big surprises. Also, my memory is not very good. Although I know that there are many bugs, I forget about them after looking around. As long as it is not a big thunder, I usually don't care about it. Therefore, it may not be recommended for people with more rigorous logical thinking. But for people like me, um, the requirements are not too high. I can just pass the time. There are indeed a lot of bugs

23 Things about top celebrities and young fans? It's got CP right from the beginning, the dungeon guide is top-notch, official cooperation, poverty alleviation to the neighbor's grandma's family, the hands are very loose, I feel that the heroine is a sweet and white fool, anyway, I skipped and continued reading as soon as I saw the heroine and the neighbor's family, okay, you can take a look, after all, the article is not long

Nice. The heroine kills decisively. Two updates a day is not enough. Looking forward to the author's update

Overall, this novel is more good than bad, and its flaws do not hide its flaws. It can be regarded as a good novel about the heroine's upgrade. There were some minor flaws in the early stages (the major flaws were the way the protagonist concealed his identity and seemed a little immature and not very smart when dealing with major forces), but there were no key flaws, so I kept watching. The author is getting better at the end~ I feel like I am getting better and better as I get started, and my writing is much better than in the previous stage. The heroine is also very domineering when dealing with major forces, and there is no doormat link, so you can eat it with confidence. The overall feeling of the novel is that the protagonist's way of dealing with things in the early stage is relatively immature (which may be a minor point for some people), but the novel as a whole does not particularly dissuade readers. So for new readers, if you can tolerate some minor bumps in the early stage, I still highly recommend this article. The subsequent writing is really good. Worth a look.

It's very interesting. Even though the world is in crisis, she still has to take the college entrance examination and go to school. The heroine wants to take a leave but she refuses. Going to school is so important than a world catastrophe.

At present, I have read Chapter 60. The heroine is not the Holy Mother. The title of first kill in the whole server is all in the hands of the heroine. It is a really refreshing heroine. The heroine hides her identity in the early stage, and at the same time, she frantically picks up other people's wool to improve herself, and her strength directly doubles to kill others, and she can't bear the suffering. Although she is a lone wolf, she has a younger brother, and she will cooperate with the authorities. It looks good! Ps: There will be people who admire the heroine because of her strength! It is not recommended for those who like to read the whole story about pure friendship, because the admirers are official people, and the heroine will have more interactions with official people (including people who do not admire the heroine) There are annoying male and female supporting characters in the book (the heroine's father and the heroine's stepmother and step-sister), but there are also positive male supporting characters (Shen Letian) and female supporting characters (Wen Qiyue and Qiao Manman). I like the whole book and there is no vicious female supporting character. I even think that if there is a vicious female supporting character, it means that the female protagonist is competing. I don't recommend reading it.

It's a pretty good novel. The heroine's character is really fun to watch. She has a violent nature, lucky cheats, and kills people randomly. But the ending is too hasty. Upgrading is as fast as riding a rocket. It's boring. ——After reading, watch to relieve your boredom——

This book has a lot of interesting points, especially some of the characters, which are difficult to comment on, but the plot is indeed good. I finally finished it while I was reading it or not. There is no CP, the heroine is strong, and the other female characters are also very distinctive.

Fortunately, it's very enjoyable. It's the first time I've read a game-type novel [laughing]

Overall, this book is pretty good, and the overall writing style is a bit more serious. Let's talk about the advantages first. The heroine has a unique design. She seems reckless and impulsive, but she has her own Xiao Jiujiu in her heart. The protagonist is not extremely smart. She will make mistakes and fall into traps, but she will also use her own strength and luck to fight her way out. When faced with the danger of game upgrades, she will tell everyone the information she knows for free, and is very thoughtful and generous. I rarely see such a reckless heroine who takes revenge and kills whenever she wants. It seems quite satisfying. Now for the shortcomings. ①Except for the protagonist, the other characters are relatively flat. The younger brothers and sisters love to show off and are stinky when they are young, especially the younger brother. He wants to show off when he sees the boss. He has no idea whether this will bring danger to himself or bring trouble to the boss. ②After reading this book, I feel like I know nothing about the other characters, and my knowledge of the protagonist is limited to the fact that although his brain is not particularly good, he is powerful and has a big picture. The personality charm of the character is not written out, ③ including the description of the emotions between her and Qinglong. I only know that, oh, they have fought together for a long time, so they have a very deep relationship. ④The battle scenes are also averagely written, and I can't even think of them in my head [face covering] Summary: It is recommended that the author learn more about the analysis and shaping of characters, as well as the expression of some actions during battles. In fact, I can feel that the author wanted to write about the protagonist's personality charm and the admiration of other characters for the protagonist, but the writing power is still slightly lacking. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

I read this book as a bedtime fantasy material. I brought in the heroine and I was really excited. The early stage was really consistent. The heroine's decisive killings made me excited. In the middle stage, it felt a bit suppressed on intelligence, and then indirectly suppressed combat power. Although it was short, it was still very responsive. After all, it affected my bedtime fantasy material. In the later stage, it was okay, and it was pretty cool. The intelligence was lightly suppressed, but in reality The power is strong, it's okay, the side story is quite interesting, especially Calabash's Wild History, although it's not true, but it's wild. I think some people think that Lu should not be set up as a character, as they feel that he is doing Aquaman's thing under the banner of no CP, but after actually watching it, Lu's character is quite normal, and the description is mostly because Lu was the number one in his previous life, not to mention that besides Lu Duo Shen can't Is there too much, but it is a normal plot development, just like a female master appears in a male channel. The male channel will also make the female master ambiguous, or a bit pornographic, but in this book I did not see the ambiguity, and there is no pornography at all, not even a metaphor. This is really comfortable. Watching male videos often makes me feel uncomfortable because of pornography, but female videos are more comfortable , but in the last chapter of the extra chapter, Lu still writes about the heroine who is in love with her. It's not the main text, so I think it's okay, and Lu is not the only one who is in love with the heroine. In the male channel, all the women want to like the male protagonist. There are only three in this book, which is good, and this kind of plot is only in the last chapter of the extra chapter. After all, this kind of invincible novel is clean.

I finished reading it all in one go. Phew~ It feels so good. The main heroine is so exciting [blowing kisses]. The heroine is ahead of everyone from the beginning. I wish I could kill monsters 24 hours a day. In the early stage, he was single and weak, so he chose to grow slowly, fabricate his identity, and hide it from everyone. However, as his strength increased, he gradually took the initiative to expose himself, and finally led all mankind to become the overlord of the universe. Those who were critical or hostile were all killed, very decisively. The unofficial history part is also a bit funny, I just like to see them getting jealous.

I am 23 years old in my previous life and 18 years old in my resurrection. I am not very smart at this age. I am a bit of a middle-class person. My words are full of loopholes. Many of my words cannot withstand scrutiny. People with the eyes of the heavens understand and live in the present and their strength will tell their lies. It's okay to pass the time, and the heroine and the Wang family get along okay, it's mutually beneficial. Although I am a little smart, I can understand that hugging the thigh is quick. It doesn't matter if that grandma sings the praises of others, it doesn't matter if it's just a small favor anyway. It's okay to pass the time

No follow-up? (Glancing up and down) (Cold eyes) Hehe (Smiling disdainfully) Very good (Shaking the red wine glass) (Take a small sip) I have seen through your little trick (the corner of your mouth raised a hint of evil) It's just to attract my attention (lowering the corners of your mouth coldly) However, you have to have a degree (eyes are three points cold, four points expectant, two points proud and one point indifferent) It's best to update immediately (sneer) Don't force me to kneel down and beg you.

In fact, I think the writing is quite good, but the rating is a bit low. Although there are a lot of small flaws in some places in the front, such as typos, or some settings are not explained clearly, the plot is still quite enjoyable. But maybe it's because there were a lot of small problems in the front, which discouraged a lot of people, and many people may think that the author didn't correct the small problems pointed out by the previous readers, so the rating is not high. As for the later ones, it's actually okay. I read too many articles that require my brain. Occasionally, I also feel that this kind of porridge and side dishes has a unique flavor, haha

Overall it's pretty good. People are already into the game, and they still have to go to school? Can't you reduce some time for reading and such? I have to gain game experience, go to school, sleep and eat. Think about it, playing like this every day is not enough time! Everything was fine in the beginning, but the last chapter is actually a harem chapter? ? ? ?

The 4 stars are for the author's hard work. There are some characters in the plot that I don't particularly like, but the big plot is still okay and relatively novel, and then there is the second-ranked one. It's not because I thought he was the male protagonist without CP.

The author's writing is quite good, but I would like to mention that this article is indeed non-CP. Maybe when you first saw Shoubi Nanshan appear, you thought he was the male protagonist, but the author's description does look a bit similar, but there is no ambiguous atmosphere between the two of them. The heroine could only treat him as a friend, so she couldn't be considered as using my cp banner to engage in cp, because the two of them didn't have many interactions in the future. Therefore, some people in the comment area said that the author may have criticized it because he did not finish reading it. When you read it later, you will find that there is really no intersection. But overall, it's okay. After the heroine left Blue Star, her combat power increased too quickly. I feel, well, it's a bit exaggerated. Maybe it's because the author thought about it and concluded that the previous combat power was quite satisfactory. Overall it's a good book. I had read the main story before, but now that I have read the extras, I am going to write a side review. There are some CPs, but not entirely. Anyway, there are three men, and they are not completely together. Anyway, they just have some small feelings. Anyway, reading the main text will not affect it, so I think it is still good.

I don't understand. The game has come to reality. Reality is not affected at all. I order takeout and the rider goes to school! That's ideal

The female is strong but there are too many supporting male characters [eat melon] and these male supporting characters are quite shining. Can't the female lead of the female channel have more sisters?

In fact, I think the rating is a bit low. I think this book is quite interesting, and his story line is very smooth. Some people have been saying before that the identity of Calabash Baby is a bit exposed, but I think it's actually okay because in that case, I actually think the rating is a bit low. I think this book is quite interesting, and his story is good. Things are going very smoothly. Some people have been saying before that Calabash Wa's identity is a bit exposed, but I think it's actually okay, because in that case, the leaders don't know what the heroine's trump card is, and it's really difficult to reveal it. Then I hope that next time I can make up for it and want to know more about Calabash Wa's love story, haha

Oh my god! It's good-looking\(//∇//)\I found that I really like novels with these themes recently. This article is more biased toward Shuang Wenfeng. The heroine never holds grudges, because she avenges them on the spot. I really, really love it! [Lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]Write more at the conference, it's really fun and beautiful [crying][crying][crying]I can't bear to let it go! I just had a vacation and I didn't catch up with the ending [crying] [crying]

He did a good job, but he has too many identities, and he is very easy to rub against with that Lu Chuan, and I like it very much. The most important thing is that it is really good-looking and the writing is very good. I suggest you not to break up the romance of my protagonist.

I think it's very interesting. It's similar to Game Invasion. I want this and this book. Jiang Nan is a smart and hard-working person. She never settles down in life, or she won't settle down when she's not strong enough and is in danger. Her violent temperament shows that she's not a soft persimmon. Killer Everyone will always kill them, and those who bully others will always bully them. She is not a Holy Mother. I think this character is very good, and the friends who are close to Jiang Nan are also well portrayed. Lu Beichuan and others always stand behind their friends in front of other people and Jiang Nan. They have empathy but are not a Holy Mother, and will not criticize their friends from the commanding heights... There are a lot of fake ones in the comment area, and this fidelity has no CP. These are all rumors and nonsense. You can tell by the length of time I watched it (26 hours) that I have definitely read the entire text. I really think this book is very good. I am not trying to whitewash the author. I just hope that the author can continue to work hard to write better and more interesting articles.

The book is quite good, but I feel like the priest is just a gimmick, or a title that lets the heroine start pretending to be a pig and eat the tiger. Doesn't it have the ability to increase blood? Why don't you use it? I would rather take medicine than use skills to restore health. I like to play as a priest. I like chasing people and pets with low health to increase their health. No one should lose a little health in front of me.

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