HP Almighty Medical Wing

Super pretty hahahahahaha the heroine did what I wanted to do! ! ! Professor! ! Dad Lu! ! There are also photos and autographs! It's so cool. Who wouldn't want it?

She is my favorite type of heroine. The sunshine warms the little sun. Although she is only in the second grade, she is too sweet. Sweetly collecting Sijiao's peripherals makes me feel that my body is warm. The heroines used by Sijiao feel that they are worth cherishing more than gems. Hide it, imagine that there is a photo with Professor Sri Lanka under the pillow. Every night of this is a sweet dream, and there is no ambiguous male protagonist. The heroine has not yet entered the divination department, otherwise the professor will predict her, study hard and not be afraid of hardship, and marry Snape when she grows up! Worthy of her serious study. Susie traveled through time. She was pragmatic, studied hard, and didn't want to be ambitious. She loved her parents in the magical world. She couldn't believe that Churchill liked her in turn, so she just collected his surroundings and her own happiness. She was a very positive girl who radiated her own light. And light will attract Si Jiao, because he was like a plant growing in the darkness. He has been in the darkness for too long. When Susie gives birth to a baby in the future, oh my god, this is Snape's baby, so cute, so stick to it as hard as you can. He looks just like his father, and he is worthy of being his father's child. She swears this is the most special piece of merchandise! She gave birth to a baby and was rolling around happily.

I really like it. This setting is also very novel. Who can resist Sijiao peripherals! The behavior of the heroine Qing Mimi collecting peripherals is really cute!

It's finished, and I'll give myself a book review: At the beginning, I was really scribbling (and getting beaten). During the process, the characters and world framework gradually took shape, and there was a feeling that I had to pay attention to. Because Suzy and the Professor and Horn and Victor all started to feel alive to me, and I couldn't make things up like they were making fun of them anymore. After not pretending or escaping, I found that the story gradually caught my eye, and I could actually write it? ! And when I looked back on it myself, I found it really beautiful (hahahaha As well as those fat friends who have been with me all the way, I remember your names and you really stayed with me until the end. Moved to tears. Finally, this book serves as the most important starting point for be7 on the road to growth. No matter good or bad, I accept and learn from the experiences and lessons learned. The new book will definitely be better (encourage yourself)

Nice! Love watching! ! The heroine's father used to be good friends with Snape and Lucius, but they broke up for reasons that everyone knows. The heroine herself has a little hobby, such as collecting some idol peripherals. I won't say more about who the idol is [laughing evilly]. The heroine is a young nurse in the hospital wing, inspired to save Snape [laughing]. The heroine also likes to play straight ball. (It doesn't count, right? Anyway, it's just saying "I want to save 'him'" to the moon rose, and saying "I like him" to the s. S on the bottle. It's not much different from a straight ball [laughs].) The heroine is also very powerful. She will learn some shamanic witchcraft in the future, and it seems that she will establish some connections with some flowers, trees, and magical creatures. I have forgotten the details. Unicorns and some magical creatures lie at the feet of the heroine and let her touch them. She seems to be radiating light. This scene is very beautiful just thinking about it [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]! (Snape also discovered) Anyway, the heroine is very awesome [cool][cool][cool].

Madam, to be honest, because HP is very popular, I have read Snape's articles every day for the past two months, and I haven't read them all. But there is really no article in which the professor has such a perfect life. I sincerely thank you. Anyone who falls in love with the professor in this article will rank him in the top three. It is already number one in my heart. At first I thought that what made me fall in love with the professor was his unfulfilled feeling of love. It was so powerful but would never be satisfied. Regrets always made people sad. Even when I read the novel, I also loved the scene where Snape thought the heroine didn't love him. But there are 10 out of 10 of them. I couldn't bear to make this scene very long, including everyone. The scene where love makes Snape travel through time in the original novel and gives him a dream of a weaker Huang Liang. Yes, I think it is difficult for someone who can write a novel about him not to give him all the love and let him get a sense of perfection. His broken despair and tears are all unforgettable for me. To be honest, the song "Lonely Warrior" really suits him. Thank you again for your willingness to share the world in your mind, which is gorgeous and yet so smooth and complete.

Update it soon! It's been a long time since I've seen such delicious Sri Lankan fan fiction! Come on! Looking forward to the growth of the heroine! I believe in your performance of the emotional line! Don't use Lily to torture people blindly, okay? Scream with excitement! (So ​​sweet to me)

It's really good to watch. I really like watching the heroine and Sri Lanka get along with each other. The emotional line is also very good, tender and tender with a bit of pull. Even when it's not love at the beginning, it's easy to make love. The heroine is not stupid and sweet, but a little pervert who is a fanatical fan of Sri Lanka (but the heroine's love is not annoying, but very cute) hahaha. Moreover, the heroine is talented and learns things quickly. Sijiao's character is as venomous on the outside as ever, gentle on the inside, and he cares and indulges the heroine, and is a bit pampering at the end, but when he does this, he doesn't seem OOC or act out. All in all, it's great to watch [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

I like the heroine very much! ! ! ! This is the best Snape fanfic I have seen on Tomato. The heroine is smart and capable, and I really like getting along with Snape! Many times it's just my mouth! The main text is very good, but one star is deducted because the extra story contains too many stories about naughty children, which is a bit boring, and I really don't like naughty children [crazy]

It was a dream come true to see Principal Snape fighting in the final battle. The writing is good, but OOC is acceptable. The second Patronus is a positive response to his feelings for Lily Potter, which is very good. Many articles avoid talking about Lily, but that is an essential part of SS. It is all his experiences that make him who he is. (But I still prefer to change the patron saint. It's really weird to have two at the same time) The heroine's father is a friend of SS when he was a student. This setting is very good, and SS has many friends. The Slytherin trio was also well written. Disadvantages: The emotional line in the early stage is too anxious, and it is really weird that the ss has thoughts about the heroine who is still a little girl. It's a bit of a black lion's house, Iron Triangle, Dumbledore is more OOC, there are plots where the protagonist group is holding him back, and the heroine always relies on her hard work to fill in the gaps, which may be a bit irritating to read...

1. Some parts of the advancement of the career line (aka killing Voldemort) make people quite anxious. It feels like I didn't do anything in the early stage Opportunities are always missed in the middle period. The protagonist team only makes stupid mistakes. The heroine sacrifices her own life to make up for their mistakes. She is obviously driven crazy every time, but the story changes and is not mentioned again. . . But the ending is good 2. The teacher and student of Professor But in the middle and later stages of the story, the old house is on fire is still good to watch, especially since the heroine keeps teasing her. She can only endure it and feel happy. My wife is very good at writing this kind of thing. 3. In the characterization part, the characters are not clear enough most of the time. For example, in the first half, I feel that the heroine does not have a distinct personality of her own. Although a lot of actions are written, only one character around the Ai Gathering Sect is established, and the other plots are always going here and there. The overall reading experience is good, and my wife is getting better and better.

Very different feeling. Also very exciting. I have read a lot of articles about Xifu's CP. This one does not completely protect Xifu from reminding him of unpleasant ways. But to accompany him through the moment of facing the past Not to mention when Harry was learning Occlumency, she did not watch out for Harry to counter Legilimency, but stayed with him and hugged him afterwards to let him know that she understood everything about him and would always be with him (this was after Sif asked the heroine to use Legilimency on himself) [crying] Although the initial good feelings came a bit quickly. But later on, their relationship felt very warm. Sifu would buy her gifts, plant flowers for her, and decorate their home for her. [Crying] The heroine is on good terms with both Harry and Draco, but she won't let them completely avoid conflicts because she knows the plot. She doesn't take sides on either side. The original female supporting role is also very good. She is not a time traveler like Drac, she is very smart and protective of the heroine and Drak. The final battle involves all the professors, so the Aurors work together to protect Hogwarts against Voldemort. They are particularly united [crying] Professor Moody is kind of cute! Hahaha, it helps the heroine a lot. GGAD's emotional line is also pretty good! Three times. [Crying][Crying][Crying] The relationship between Susie and the professor is really touching, and it's really nice to see them going both ways.

After reading it intermittently for several days, I have great stamina. It's really well written, very good, very good. Complete and true happiness, everyone has their own shortcomings but they are all good people, which makes people's hearts warm. I have read five or six HP Sect fanfics in the past few days. I don't mean to dislike them, I just feel that this one is the most satisfying - it is so complete and happy, like a real children's literature and fairy tale. ，，，，， Everyone has their own growth, and the heroine is like a butterfly that really affects and stirs the plot. Then this little love and happiness flows through her to Snape, to Harry, Ron, Neville, Dumbledore, Filch, and everyone else. It not only prevents life and death, but also the shortcomings in everyone's emotions and life are filled one by one. Everyone walks in the sunshine and is loved well. Snape finally came out of the shadows and faced his regrets, mistakes, and shortcomings. He had love, courage, and friends who had always been close to each other since childhood. He was no longer a so-called double agent. His honor was known to people. His students also respected and loved him, and his lover would give him kisses and hugs every morning in the future. He has a life that is gentle, happy, and as soft as sunshine. It is hard to imagine that the author is writing for the first time, because the personality and emotions of the characters as well as the logic of the writing are quite well grasped. Thank you for giving me a glimpse into his life in another universe, where my favorite characters live happily, which is very satisfying.

It is really a very "live" article, not just a running account, nor a following of thinking. Every character in it is very vivid and lively. It will not be an old-fashioned plot that makes people guess the end at a glance. There are many thought-provoking parts in it. The author's writing style is also very good. The characteristics of each character in it are also very distinctive and vivid. Susie is also a very capable, thoughtful, creative, and a firm image with very active thinking. Although at first I just wanted to save the professor, but then I saw other innocent people, like Cedric at the beginning, it was easy~ (No, no, of course she put in a lot of effort) I personally think Susie is facing something more important? It still embodies the quality of Slytherin when it comes to things - weighing the pros and cons, I think an imperfect life is truly "perfect". After all, even a code composed of numbers will have bugs, not to mention Susie [Blowing Kiss] The author's writing is really great. I will continue to read new books [laughing]

The author started to catch up about two-thirds of the way through the book. Susie's character characteristics are very distinct. For this Sijian who is close to her father's age, she wrote the story from an adoring fangirl to a romantic one very well. Susie, who is willful, bold and cautious, faces the cautious and restrained Sijiao with ideological conflicts that are very realistic and very aptly written. As for paying the price, it is indeed a bit worrying. I thought that the price of AD has been paid by GG, but it is a pity that Susie still has to bear the tilt of the balance of fate alone. Also, it's a pity that Susie's dad has too few scenes. The character of this old father is really awesome.

It's so beautiful. I felt a little disappointed after watching it. I thought it was a bit ooc in the early stage. I always felt that Sifu is not that easy to talk to and easy to be moved. But the more I see it later, the more I realize that he can actually be very delicate, thoughtful, childish, humane, and passionate... (Sorry, I may not be able to express myself in words). Actually, what I want to say is that Sifu deserves all the love in the world because he is a person who loves everyone passionately, cold on the outside and hot on the inside. Thanks to my wife for letting me see how happy he is in the parallel world! !

It looks really good! The professor in the fifth year is no longer the same as in the original book. He is misunderstood and misunderstood by everyone. The students are getting better and better at the professor. I am really touched by it. And the emotional scene between Susie and the professor made me laugh all the time and my heart beat faster. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh the sexual tension between the two people is full of. Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh-hhh-sexy-sexy scenes between Suzy and the professor. Even if I still have those painful memories, the professor is no longer alone. Someone is with him and loves him. Those painful memories are not important anymore. What is important is the person in front of him. Full marks, full marks, full marks! But I still hope to have a little more Sese [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy] [shy] I can't see enough!

It looks good. There are a few things I like the most. One is that he will participate in the plan to destroy Voldemort, but will not follow Potter's lead. The other is that Dumbledore can experience the feeling of offering himself to beg others. Although Sanlai and the Savior can be considered friends, they can only be casual acquaintances. Unlike other plots where the trio turns into a quartet, and then quarrel in defense of the professor when they doubt the professor. Except for Mad-Eye Moody, he and other members of the Order of the Phoenix, such as Sirius and Lupine, do not go out of their way to make friends. They just do whatever they say, which is very satisfying! For a fan of professors like me, I love it so much! ! ! I'm looking forward to Dada's next work, but I can only finish it and say goodbye. It's too hard to follow up. Goodbye.

It's very interesting, very good, but please note that there is a child in the extra story, and the only thing worthy of criticism is that it is an unexpected pregnancy, and the child is doted on, relying on Snape, lawlessness, between the child and Susie, Snape is more protective of the child, I can't accept it, but this part of the extra story before is very good, very good, and the writing is great, highly recommended

The writing is excellent, the plot is smooth, and the characters are not too OOC. The key is the change in the relationship between the characters, such as the pull between the heroine and the Sect, the grievances between the Sect and Harry, and the heroine's relationship with Dumbledore. They are all very layered. I like this kind of heroine very much. She understands the feelings of the characters very well, just like she deliberately retaliates against Dumbledore and Sif during the sacrifice. She has a clear distinction between love and hate, and the character is not broken at all. It's really good. The emotional line may be slow in the early stage, but the later stage is full and sweet. The more you write, the better. I highly recommend it. The ending is he. (But the author was not happy with the indecisiveness of the Order of the Phoenix and the recklessness of the trio, and Draco got together with the original female partner.) Come on, author! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Although the pace is a bit slow. But it really made me cry later~ The emotional changes between the two were not sudden. How should I describe the heroine's character? She's a pregnant woman who is a huge fan of the professor. Although she knows the plot, she will not actively change certain nodes. Probably because of insufficient strength? However, I only wanted to have the professor and I didn't run away. There seems to be some golden fingers, but not many? They are stronger than Harry and the others, but they are not invincible, which is quite reasonable. The main reason is that the way she gets along with the professor is really sweet~~~ I give it full marks. Is it four stars because I heard that fan fiction requires higher scores?

It's okay, the character descriptions are still very delicate, but some plots have a few minor bugs that don't affect reading, just don't use your brain too much. The heroine's character is quite good, but I still prefer the strategic heroine. Sometimes it makes me uncomfortable to think that famous scenes can be made to happen in other ways instead of being rescued after they happen.

Very pretty. Nothing about the plot is abrupt and natural. But I think the professor had a crush on her a little too early... There was a slight crush on the heroine when she was in first grade. I don't quite accept this. But that's okay. Quite pretty. Now I've only seen second grade.

I have witnessed the progress of an author from a naive beginning to a heartfelt empathy. I was moved by Qianqian's writing. Until Chapter 290, I couldn't help it anymore and commented without reading the whole story. In my mind, this is the story of Susie and Snape's growth. Due to their youthful throbbing, they constantly pursue beauty, are full of caution, and have the determination not to give in. This is so realistic! Sometimes I feel very gratified when I read it. For example, the bystanders represented by Victor are all individual, vivid, and flesh-and-blood. This is a work that is innovative and then combined with the original huge world view. There is a saying in the author's article that really resonates with me and I like it so much that I directly copied the original text: Love and death are as eternal. You only die once, but love can be reborn. -Dedicated to A. R.

I couldn't watch it at first, I thought it was too childish, and I gave up after reading about fifty or sixty chapters. It wasn't until one day that I found someone pushing it that I started reading it again seriously. I was hooked, and I watched it from night to eight or nine in the morning. I was very surprised that the heroine didn't become the nanny of the protagonist group, and she didn't force her way into their threesome. She had her own threesome. This is really super, super, super good! He did not regard saving the world as his own responsibility, but only for the professor, and both parties were determined to go both ways, and they would not let go once they decided. The professor is really charming hahaha. Instead of beautifying the savior trio, they did a lot of stupid things. It's a pity that they didn't apologize for their stupid things in the end, which gave ggad a good ending. It's a little OOC but it doesn't matter. The heroine's own Slytherin trio also has their own. The thread is not just an accessory. All in all, it is a happy ending. Everything that can be saved is saved. Fortunately, there is no family happiness. You forgive me and I forgive you. We hug each other and laugh at each other. It is best for individuals to live their own lives... This HP fanfic is worth recommending!

It's so beautiful, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh help or between me me guys ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! Show them all to me! ! ! 🧎🏻It's so beautiful, I need to repaint it

Perfect! (What if there will be another little snake sister in the future? Two snakes and one lion are true... Sorry, I can't do it anymore) 100% perfect! Very neat! I will study punctuation by punctuation, word by word, sentence by sentence, chapter by chapter [love] [love] [love] [send heart]

After reading this fanfic written by the author, this is simply the most perfect ending in my mind. The image of Professor Snape jumped out of the page - he was far more than just brave, and with his profound resourcefulness and complex soul, he became the ceiling for sapiosexuality in my heart. The author really wrote all the regrets and resentments, and even made the characters that I once disliked reasonable. (I am a bit abusive to the heroine and often injured, but then I think about it, if I can really step into that magical world, maybe I will do whatever it takes, even if it means giving my life, just to get the professor a chance to survive) The author's writing is really superb, and other fanfics are eclipsed. I would like to keep the beauty of this writing in my heart. This may be the last fanfic I teach. And their feelings are a kind of silent symbiosis. Just like the vines that are deeply rooted in the ancient stone walls of Hogwarts, they grow without any noise. Only after many years do they realize that their lives have been intertwined and cannot be separated. This trickle eventually converged into a deep pool that reflected each other's souls, and gave the redemption that was once considered impossible the most solid shape.

The writing is very good! ! The highlight is probably that Sijiao is quite OOC! But because it's so sweet and the heroine's setting is good and the writing is great, I can keep watching it. It's not too silly. All the cheats come with a price, which is great! I haven't watched the extra episode yet, so I'll go there without stopping.

It is a very good book. It is currently the top one I have read in Sri Lanka. Suzy, the most determined Snapeist, constantly heals Sri Lanka's heart and pain and regains her vitality. Very good Suzy and Sri Lanka. To be honest, I don't like to read fanfics with more than 200 chapters. It's easy to get bored, but after reading every chapter of this book, I still feel unsatisfied. The emotions and plot are in-depth layer by layer. There are some exciting scenes, but also warm family love and friendship. Even after it is finished, I still want to continue. It is a really good book, the author is a big fan, I give you a thumbs up👍👍👍