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System + Don't Develop It Yourself + Hand It over to the State +
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I Remember There Is a God Named Zhuan. as Long as You Call Out the Name of the God, You Can Inherit It.
Beg
22.7MViews144Books9dUpdated
The Male Protagonist's Perspective, Scientific Research, a Person Protected by the State,
Preferably a child
17.9MViews298Books10dUpdated
Ask the Protagonist to Have a Certain Ability, Not Hide It, and Hand It over to the Country
Or if you know when the end will come or something, tell the country about it.
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The Male Protagonist Has a Small Team Fighting on an Alien Planet, and After His Death, He Is Discovered by the Country and Brought Back.
The male protagonist has a small team fighting on an alien planet. After his death, he is discovered by the country and brought back. It's tear-jerking!
6.9MViews157Books2moUpdated
Reported to the National Level Is a Rebirth, a Technological Powerhouse
I would like to read a book similar to "On the Eve of the College Entrance Examination, Promoting the Fifth Revolution in Physics".
3.7MViews69Books7dUpdated
I Beg You, the Twin Men of National Luck, I Hate the Book Period so Much.
I would like to read a book similar to "Survival of the National Fortune: I am a fragile person and rely on my luck to help me fly".
3.5MViews79Books5dUpdated
Technology, Surrender to Patriotism, System, Ability, Key Points (Shuang Nan)
I want to read a book like "My Boyfriend is a Superhero".
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Hand in the Golden Finger at the Beginning
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The author's first-person narration is very novel, but the word order is a bit confusing, and the quotation marks before speaking make it a bit unclear whether it is a verbal description or a psychological description, and the language is a bit monotonous, but the subject matter is novel.
The subject matter is good, but the writing still needs work. The pronouns are not consistent and it's a bit confusing. It's a bit difficult to read. Come on, author.
Madam, the punctuation marks are not just commas and periods [laughing and crying], it is best not to use personal pronouns throughout the article, otherwise it will be very confusing when reading. Finally, you can add some detailed descriptions appropriately, otherwise it will be a bit confusing. Come on, CP is so awesome [blowing kiss]
It's a bit like a running account, come on
Yes, it's pretty good. I like it very much, but the ending is a bit too fast and a bit short.
Not bad, just a little lacking. Raise it for a while first
Nice, but too short
The story concept is very good, but the writing is like running water.
It's too short and not enough to read. The theme is okay. I hope there will be more in the future.
It's very beautiful. Although it has some flaws, it doesn't affect the viewing. Come on, I wish you write better works.
It looks good, so good, but one thing that's not good is the time-travel system. Why not give the male protagonist a powerful system?