Immortal Cultivators Have Arrived, and I Started Immortal Qin Heavy Industry

Later, I suggested invading all realms. What do you think, author?

I don't know why so many people are praising it. When I read a book, I usually read the comments section first and then read the content, and this time I was indeed deceived. Not to mention the traditional cultivation of immortality, no matter how traditional it is, it must have the positive feedback and satisfaction of cultivation. The content and plot of this book are just to rub the reader's brain on the ground. You know, there is a very deliberate sense of pretending to be stupid. If the author didn't expect it at all, everyone can understand it, but this kind of pretending to be stupid is insulting to the reader, and it cannot be replaced at all, unless you go back ten years ago. Moreover, all the characters have no characteristics. They basically just have the same name and identity, and there is no personality of the character itself. Calling it a novel is a bit insulting to Xiaobai. As for what the author said about being weak in the early stage and so strong in the later stage, I can only say that you can't write positive feedback for the huge strength in the early stage, let alone the later stage, because you were persuaded to quit in the early stage, so where is the later stage? And it is very obvious. From the lines of the previous article, you know that the author is indeed a person with ideas, but the author's pen power and writing style simply cannot write what you want. All I can say is, let's settle down first. It's not that there are no novels where the identity is not revealed. There are also similar novels in which Ying Zheng pretends to be another identity, just like in 🍅. However, others don't regard readers as mentally retarded. There are also explanations for concealing the identity, and it is relatively reasonable. The concealment of the identity in your book is really a lie to children. It's as if he is ignorant. Finally, give it a five-star support. After all, it is a novel, and most of them are novice authors, or authors who just love to write and really want to write content. I won't give a negative review, but I want to say why I am so angry to comment. It is because the author has a high goal and gives readers a high goal. When I went in and took a look, the feedback on the content brought a huge gap. I hope the author can see his own position clearly. He must first learn to be humble, and then constantly revise and improve himself. Come on author.

This kind of novel is just for fun. You don't need to look at the character descriptions or details at all. Just read the plot.

It looks good and the writing is good! Come on, the author is great

It's so poisonous that it makes me jump, but at the first level of Qi training, my physique is the same as that of an ordinary person, hahaha, it really made me laugh.

It looks good, but don't write Fusu in a bad light. After all, his name is Fusu.

It's good, but it's too exaggerated. This is the express version of quickly cultivating immortality! It's a bit too fast!

So awesome, golden elixir stage You can beat ordinary soldiers at the second level of Qi training. You can at least run ten meters in one step at the golden elixir stage. After you become an immortal, you can run ten meters in one second at least. You are better than the prehistoric saint who took ten meters in one step.

Not bad, so far, alas, it's just a bit short, just like squeezing out toothpaste, but I'm willing to wait, it's so good, this is the best novel I've read so far, it's my favorite novel subject, and it's also very well written, without flaws.

Very well written, I like it very much

It's pretty good. After reading so many chapters, there's nothing sinister about it.

It's good to read. The author should reveal his identity quickly. There are too many novels of the same type. Mo Ji, Immortality with the First Emperor. Come on, come on [cool]

It's beautiful, very good, and there are many more authors, so keep up the good work! [Praise]

Not bad, a Da Qin novel that is very comfortable to read.

It's good-looking, I love watching it, and it's great to lose my mind. I hope to give Brother Zheng more roles. The protagonist has taken all the glory, and Brother Zheng is a bit dispensable in the end. I think many people are here for Brother Zheng. Please give Brother Zheng more opportunities to show his sage in front of others, so that he can be the real immortal emperor of all ages! ! !

It looks good, cheers author＾0＾~

A particularly innovative book.

I want to practice martial arts instead of becoming an immortal

It's pretty good, good luck to the author

Not bad, it suits my taste. Keep the book

I came here just to see the grand scene of the Pre-Qin Dynasty, and I also asked the author to fast forward to the Pre-Qin Dynasty [laughing]

It's been a long time since I've read a book so carefully. I'll update it quickly [Read carefully] Hurry up and tell your dad about the dead people who can be resurrected after becoming immortals, so that he will be more motivated! !

A wave of 5 stars. It's been a long time since I watched the pure Da Qin cultivator.

Yes, yes, this is the Xian Qin in my heart, don't collapse.

Come on, come on, come on. . More interesting than others,

Very novel and beautiful! Not enough! ! !

Is there a female protagonist? I think Yu Ji is very good. It seemed that Xiang Yu didn't know her yet, so he could make a move first.

Very interesting book

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author

Big cheers for the author