The Record of an Ordinary Woman’s Cultivation

Overall, it's okay, and I can see that it was carefully crafted. Both men and women have read a lot of fairy tales, but the male videos don't dare to have the "innocent" crisis in the first few chapters. The fairy tales are very low-key. To replace the male videos, someone wanted to anally the male protagonist, and almost succeeded. If you want to express the sinister nature of people's hearts, there are many ways, and the female protagonist does not have to suffer this kind of hardship. It feels like putting this kind of pain on display for a specific audience to appreciate. Strong women should be more sensitive. Scenarios like this are quite disgusting. Male videos have this kind of drugged plot when they open a harem. Afterwards, when they come back to their senses, they can no longer watch it. However, this book is still full of flaws. 👍 Keep up the good work and look forward to updates.

The author's writing style is very good, and it is very comfortable to read at the beginning. The introduction is very attractive, and I was attracted by the introduction, but the protagonist was drugged and knocked unconscious, and was taken advantage of, which was really discouraging. When I saw it, I thought that the protagonist would be more tolerant of mortal medicine because of his cultivation of immortality, and would not be completely knocked out, so that he could act more cautiously in the future. However, I later saw that the protagonist was really knocked out and his blood pressure was high. Although I haven't seen the back part, the beginning is really good overall. I'd better support the author by giving it five stars.

The writing is very good and the plot flows smoothly. The fighting scenes and experiences are both well written. The character creation is also very good, she is dedicated to practicing Taoism, and the heroine has a very good character, she is really decisive in killing. Do things based on your heart. I have read it all and updated it to chapter 140. There are no thunder spots in the middle. The only regret is that I didn't see the heroine kill the mortal. He goes around saying that the heroine is his wife, tarnishing the reputation of the heroine. In the middle, the heroine's teammates know that they want to kill her. But it has not been written whether he killed it or not. If not, just let the heroine kill him quickly without adding scenes to him. Overall, this is a very good novel about casual cultivators. I hope the author will continue to work hard! Think carefully. I hope it will be longer. I want to see the plot after they ascend to the upper world.

Chapters 7 and 8 have been greatly revised and adjusted on May 26 ❤️ ❤️ Sincerely thank readers Baozi Lin Guiyue and Linglinghua for their suggestions and support ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Welcome Baozi to leave comments and work together to build a good work for the heroine to pursue her career! Happy reading, little cuties! Live a happy and happy life ❤️ ❤️ @ @guiyue

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking orthodox fairy tale. There's no book or system, just a local heroine fighting for her fate step by step. The heroine is neither a virgin nor a novice. She is smart, decisive and ruthless without leaving any consequences. She also has clear grudges and does not kill indiscriminately. She is simply the heroine who cultivates immortality in my dreams. Nowadays, the mainstream fairy tales on Tomato are all light-hearted and funny, either through books or systematic, and they also focus on a rescue series and a group favorite series. It is really boring. Some super popular books can't be read after opening two chapters, and I don't know where the focus is. Don't be fooled by the author, come on and update more!

Few female characters

The writing is really superb. Traditional fairy tales are about the heroine's step-by-step realization of the Tao and her ascension. This book is wonderfully written, and the writing style is quite delicate. It is the first time I have seen someone describe all aspects of cultivation so vividly! Especially this book is written about a casual cultivator in a city. The heroine starts from being a casual cultivator in a poor city and needs to earn daily necessities to survive step by step. The author's writing is very powerful, and he combines cultivation with the "mind cultivation" of Taoism. When you reach a new stage, you will have a mental understanding. The writing is quite exciting! It's really beautiful! It's really good to tie 💕 in one breath. I haven't seen this level of traditional immortality writing on Tomato for a long time!!

The beginning is really good, but it's a pity that there is no commentary, otherwise I would have shouted and cheered when she chopped off Liu's father's legs. The heroine is really repaying kindness and revenge, and she is very courageous. I hope the writing will still be as good in the future 👍

Stay up late and watch Five Stars, it's wonderful, the heroine is a role model for us. If she doesn't ascend, who will ascend? If she doesn't criticize, who will be criticized.

This kind of writing is rare in Tomato. The author really put a lot of thought into it. The transition of the heroine's state of mind from an ordinary hunter to an immortal cultivator is well described, and the plot is unconventional, making people want to keep watching. The front is okay