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Overall it's pretty good. You can ignore the minor points and don't make them too dense. Keep writing.

Yes, the writing is very interesting.

Generally, I can't understand even if there is a hangup.

Not bad, after all, there is a shortage of books, I am really hungry

There is not so much internal friction, the disgusting plot is very good

Not so internal friction, overall good look and feel

It's nice to watch, it's a planting flow, it's almost the same as the introduction, and the content is quite novel.

Not bad, almost a survival story

Very interesting novel, recommended

Very nice, good luck to the author

Try to become a human race logistician

At present, it seems that there are no poisonous points. The protagonist is a development stream and the main guard. Love watching it, I can't sleep at night, please update it soon! After reviewing it for the second time, the plot of the first transaction with the heroine is indeed a bit flawed, but I don't think it is a poisonous point. From the transaction price, it can be seen that normal peppers can be planted with ten peppers (the protagonist has 16 peppers, with talent), and a normal transaction costs five pepper seeds, which is equivalent to selling one pepper seed for one. Half of the harvest (not counting talents) (at this time, all humans can farm with just one click, except for the protagonist's Qingshuipu, which has water needs). The heroine wants 70% of the harvest at once, which is really a lion's mouth. But they are strangers. Isn't this how transactions are negotiated? The protagonist also wants to exchange five peppers for a bunch of seeds. Later, after the protagonist told the heroine about his talent, the result of the discussion was that each of the ordinary seeds would earn 50% of the profit. Although the full-scoring seeds would be given to the heroine 100% (the protagonist would be given extra for gaining the talent), but if it wasn't calculated that way, then why didn't the heroine plant the full-scoring seeds herself? So the second point is also reasonable. Moreover, the protagonist's talents and plug-ins are related to planting. Without seeds, there is no improvement at all. After cooperation, the protagonist actually gets more (but he also pays more). Compared with being idle, it is earned. Planting gives back experience and the planting points needed for plug-ins, and then you can get half of the income. If the protagonist has enough seeds, the cooperation will of course be a loss. In the next few chapters, the protagonist discovers that cooperation is indeed not profitable, but it is not a huge loss. The plots written in the future will not be these minutiae, and it can be considered as officially entering the main line. After the novice protection period, the protagonist will directly receive considerable bonuses.