HP Disguise Demon

The writing is indeed very good, the characters are well-developed, and the plot is also full of ups and downs? But Snape was a bit OOC, and in the later part when Snape discovered Rose's true identity and didn't believe her, Rose also kept a cold war, waited for Snape to apologize, and later deliberately ignored him, emmm, it was a bit weird, I still have to say, after all, I watched Harry Potter first, and then these second creations. For the original author, Rose is the character you created, and she is your OC, so you will naturally invest more emotions. I hope she can be happy, happy, or not at a disadvantage, but for me, the characters in the original work that I met earlier are naturally more important than the OC she created. What's more, concealment is Rose's problem. In addition, the surname Potter really caused too much damage to Snape. The stress and sensitivity are too normal. Otherwise, why didn't Rose say it at the beginning? So in the final emotional treatment, well, I don't side with Rose, but everything else is very good.

Good guy, except for Chapters 1 and 21, everything else is updated at 18.00, So on time [eating melon] I feel that the heroine currently has a favorable impression of Snape based on movies and Ben Xian, which should be more than 60% (I have voice control, and I will be attracted to Snape when I hear a nice voice, which will directly increase my affection). I hope that the subsequent plots will not have the kind of heroine doing something for him (of course, it doesn't matter if there is, but I am tired of seeing this) I feel that it can stimulate Snape. For example, he thought that the newly appeared Dark Lord (the introduction said that the heroine will be the Dark Lord) threatened the heroine, but he found the heroine's vest. Both be and he are acceptable. I feel that the long-term relationship may be able to replace Bai Yueguang's position, but he feels that the character design (Snape's) will be a bit broken. I want to see the heroine change her persona (it is said in the article that the heroine sets up her persona in front of Snape). How about changing to a bitch? Or maybe she is a bitch by nature [eating melon] I want to see Snape being shy. I think it would be interesting (come on, Snape is so cute when he gets angry) [laughing] I feel like it's a rather cool novel. The heroine is quite strong and has unique abilities (this makes me happy). Snape gives the heroine a unique treatment (which is quite unique (funny)). It's not a loss if you invest in it.

My favorite Snape CP novel, very good character design, very good plot I feel that the plot of getting pregnant before the war is not particularly wise.

It would be great if it could be rated 4.5. The first half is quite enjoyable to read, the setting is novel and interesting, the ideas are very good, and the descriptions in many places are very beautiful. It is a pity that the image creation of Sri Lankan religion in the later period was somewhat weak. From the moment the heroine left Holdwards, the image of Tom started to feel a little confusing. Tom's plot was okay at the beginning, but it felt a little unfocused later on. Personally, I feel that the two characters of the heroine are not clearly shaped very well, and they are all written from the heart. In particular, the heroine is obviously portrayed as resolute and courageous or as a devil. As a result, in the later period, I was tangled up in worries about gains and losses, and the inexplicable plot, and I doubted that the author wrote whatever he thought of, deviated from the course, only cared about himself, and forgot about the protagonist image he created. But it is still worth a bite. I almost finished it in one day and am looking forward to the author's next book.

It's good to read, but I think their emotional line will be very long. I hope they don't give up. It has been added to the bookshelf and I look forward to the follow-up stories [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Attention][Attention][Attention][Adoration]

Wow, the writing is very good, and the interactions are quite sweet. I think the heroine not only likes Sri Lanka, but also the characters in Harry, and the lost youth in her previous life. But I prefer Sri Lanka to teach, hehehe, I love watching, more, more, more [shy][shy]

Although I don't know why the pregnancy was arranged at the critical moment of the war, the overall plot so far is still very good. The female protagonist is stable, very strong and smart, and there is basically nothing wrong with it. It's just that the relationship between Si Jiao and her needs a period of entanglement before it can be completely stable. I hope you can continue to read the novel easily.

Apart from running with the ball, it's really good. The heroine's emotional handling in the early stage can be better. For example, the heroine can resist the professor and refuse to help, or the heroine is willing to help because she wants to hear the professor's voice more. Otherwise, the heroine will appear to be a bit too easy to bully. The professor's emotional transition could also be more subtle, but it already feels very stretched. It might be best to have a chance to talk about the two masks of the heroine in front of the professor? There's absolutely no need to pretend, right? It might be uncomfortable to keep pretending to be two extreme personalities. The new side cookies are also good, I also like this kind of light and sweet snack. Except for running with the ball, if this article has more than nine points, I will give it four stars. After all, running with the ball is too weird. But it's only 8.1, So I still give the author extra points.

The content is wonderful, but no OC matches the character. The characters are real and the transitions are smooth and smooth. A bit short but very nice

After watching half of it, the overall feeling is pretty good, the writing is also okay, and several settings are also very novel, such as the heroine pretending to be another Tom Riddle, forming a three-legged check and balance situation. Basically, the characters in this book are not very serious OOC. Sometimes, I think some vague OOC is actually a matter of plot setting. The most regretful thing, and the one I didn't finish watching, is that some plot points that should have been the climax were not pushed forward, such as the setting that Snape asked the heroine to forget. Although the heroine did not forget it, Snape probably didn't know this, but I don't know why I didn't see this part of the explanation until the heroine dropped her vest🤔 And the heroine's forgiveness seemed to be a little quick🤔

Memo Tomato's top ten hp articles. The author's description of the scene/environment is spot on. The fact that the protagonist has a dual "personality" also makes people curious about ss's reaction after knowing the protagonist's other identity. Looking forward to the next development It's a bit of a drive high and a walk low. From Rose's first exit in the middle to her reunion with Snape, the relationship developed a bit strangely. The progression from being interested in each other to "love" is very strange. How does Snape accept Rose's two "personalities"? According to the first half, it is the white rose that he likes, not the "black" rose. This paragraph doesn't make sense to me... It's ooc for Snape to simply accept that she has multiple identities. Secondly, Rose's motivations are also very subtle. Her decision to play Riddle was a bit for the sake of acting. At first, I thought it was to use the Dark Lord's original power to play a game of real and fake Dark Lord, but it turned out not to be the case. And they originally used the name "Knights of Walpurgi", but they didn't mention it later. I thought it was a pity. I originally thought Rose was going to create her own third force, but in fact she didn't... Even Barty Jr. Didn't appear again later. At the same time, she opened a bakery and hired Lupin as an employee. I thought there was some special foreshadowing, but I didn't mention it again. Overall it's a pity.

No need to doubt, this is the HP fanfic with the most interesting character design I have ever seen. I really like the heroine's character design. And the subject matter is also very novel. I really like this plot! The author would like to work hard and update! ! ! I don't understand why such a beautiful book has such a low rating? ! ! [Crying][Crying] Because I used another account to read this novel when I was in school, so I may not have read it for that long on this account, but it is really good. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It is very beautiful, and the descriptions are very detailed. There are many characters in it that are very consistent with my imagination. If this book is not unfinished and continues to be updated, I declare that the author is my god! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's great. After saving for more than half a month, I finally finished the main text. It was a pleasure to read it in one go. During this period, I found several books about CP taught by Sri Lanka, but I was not very satisfied with them. This book is well written, and the characters are not seriously OOC. Wearing Tom Riddle's skin to fight against Voldemort, this idea is very eye-catching, and the story line is also very round. The heroine is very strong and has her own abilities and career. I think this is very good. I really have had enough of those darling wife articles disguised as Sri Lankan CP. Finally, I look forward to the author's extra news and the next new book [Blow Kiss]

Super pretty. Let me talk about what I think are the advantages: the writing is pretty good, not a noob, and straightforward (anyway, I don't like those books that don't have any trace of Snape in twenty or thirty chapters, so it's hard to retain me), although there are three little ones, they are not considered nannies (she has her own things to do, and she doesn't revolve around the trio), and the heroine's soul is mature (actually, at the beginning of this book The body is also an adult, so I can accept the ambiguous pull between the adult soul and the immature body). The plot is very well set up. It is very different from the original work but very reasonable and very satisfying (I don't like to follow the original plot after reading it too much). If the Sri Lankan teacher doesn't become a spy, he doesn't have to be troubled [crying] (This is awesome!)

It's very good-looking, but the short-sightedness and gray hair of Si Jiao at the end make people feel distressed and regretful, but it is also separated from Si Jiao in another parallel world. It is obvious that this situation is also under the author's expectation. It is a good article

It's a good article that can be read in one sitting, but compared to the main text, I prefer the settings and rhythms of several extra chapters, especially the last extra chapter. It would be nice if the length of the main text could be allocated to extra chapters. Too many unnecessary plots and descriptions in the main text can easily make the characters inconsistent.

What a fairy book this is! What a great fairy! ! So pretty! ! ! I love Da Da! Work hard to update! Mwah! Don't miss it if you pass by, you'll earn it if you see it! If you don't watch it, you'll be at a loss! Everyone rush! !! Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, this book is so good! ! Beautiful as a fairy, looks like a fairy, a fairy descends to earth, has a flower-like face and a moon-like appearance, a flower-like face and a moon-like appearance, jade is clean and ice-clear, the ice and snow are smart, bright and moving, the moon is shy of the flower, a beauty in the world, a flawless white jade, unparalleled beauty, charming, charming, beautiful. The beauty of the country, the beauty of the country, the beauty of the country, the purples and reds, the stunning beauty, the beauties of the 28th century, the beauty of the crowd, the stunning beauty, the lotus in the water, the confidante, the beauty in pink, the little jade, the bird is in love, the peerless beauty, the beauty is delicious, the beauty is beautiful, the warm and fragrant jade Moth eyebrows and white teeth, curved eyebrows and plump cheeks, red lips and white teeth, apricot face and peach cheeks, natural jade, rich and beautiful appearance, natural beauty, celestial beauty, fine skin and tender skin, fragrant and refined, orchid-like heart, bright eyes and white teeth, Qihua Yaocao, cricket-headed moth eyebrows, icy skin and jade bones, celestial jade color Stunningly beautiful, gorgeous shadows in the willow sky, rich peaches and plums, warm fragrant jade, gorgeous beauty, peerless beauty, graceful standing, beautiful flowers, blooming flowers, willow flowers, willow flowers, weak flowers, willow waists, graceful ladies, Zuo family sweet girls, meandering eyebrows I feel pity for them, distant mountain hibiscus, Zhangtai willows, the charming author [blows a kiss]

Great writing! ! The greatly sculpted Rose is really charming! ! The operation of pretending to be Riddle is really cool! It was recently updated that the Harry trio and Snape discovered the ruins of ancient magic. Every chapter of Rose's memory was very fascinating~~

It's rare to see a HP fanfic on Tomato that I think is of excellent quality. The characters are relatively close to the original work (a little bit uglifying Sirius, but the scope is acceptable). The setting is very novel. Although I have never played Hogwarts Legacy, I like this setting and highly recommend it! Thank you for your contribution, I hope you will continue to produce excellent hp fanfiction in the future! P. S. I also like the extras that follow.

A very good Si Jiao fanfic. It combines HP and Huo Yi's content very well. Thank you to the heroine for accompanying Si Jiao in various timelines. It makes my heart warm to read it. The characters in the author's works are very consistent with the personality and the writing is also very good [Love]

I can take a look at it, the setting is very interesting. If there is such a setting, I think it would be very interesting if I directly become the devil. Haha, but this article has many emotional lines, and some plot connections are not smooth. You can see if it suits your taste.

It's rare that it's not a black lion, it's not a black Dumbledore, it's very well written, and the plot is very smooth at least for me. The plot of Legacy of Holdworth is also friendly to readers who have not seen the game. I hope the teacher can keep writing. Even if it takes a long time, it doesn't matter. I will keep waiting. Thank you teacher for your work!

The names in the first few pictures were a bit confusing, one at a time, and sometimes it felt a little awkward. But later on, I guess the author got a better feel for it as he wrote it, and it became more exciting. I'm looking forward to the subsequent plot, Luo Siqiang, it's so good and I love watching it.

The author greatly appreciates the update! ! ! ! Super pretty, I love it! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Super pretty! Rose is really strong, she is really cute\( ͯω ͯ)/ When I found out that they had already cooked rice, I was so excited that the corners of my mouth never dropped! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Sure enough, this kind of knocking between adults is the most sexy thing [shy]

A shocking novel, one of the few good Snape fanfics on Tomato. I can only say that I personally don't think it is OOC. The more I read it, the more addictive it becomes. After reading novels for so many years, this is the only one that makes me want to read it again.

The plot of this book is interesting, and the character creation of the heroine is also good! It's super nice and interesting. I hope the author can work hard to update it and continue it. Don't stop updating it (*σ´∀`)σ has seen a lot of interesting and good-looking books with my own eyes. I don't want to stop updating it anymore... Wow (っ╥╯╰╥c), right?

The writing is really good. The author must have confidence in himself. I just saw the latest chapter, it's so good, I can't stop reading it. The heroine has a very strong character and really poked me. The plot is also very well written. I want to see the day when the heroine falls off her horse. Come on, sir [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Beautiful! The plot setting is great and novel, and Si Jiao is not too OOC. However, I don't really like the three little ones in this book. Some parts are a bit difficult to comment on, but it doesn't matter. I came here to watch Si Jiao hehe (*/∇＼*)