Four years ago, she appeared in the forest. She had no memory or anything in the past. She fell into the abyss in an accident, but two glimmers of light illuminated her heart that was eroded and shrouded in darkness. One glimmer of light turned into an obstacle-free road, and the other turned into an extremely dazzling star to guide her. Together, they guided her out of the abyss-like darkness toward the dawn of the future. When she escaped the abyss, her story and future had just begun.
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Another special Xiao Mawen story, and a new character appears. This one will also have a source of harmony of her own in the future, or will she use her own efforts to create her own slope? What will happen in the future? How will her legend begin? And what opportunities will the magical inscriptions she discovered in that ancient book bring to her? Will she be qualified to become an Alicorn in the future? And what is the name of the princess who left this book? I look forward to more possibilities and creations from the author in the future, please try your best [thinking] [laughing] [like]
The plot is quite good, and the emotions are depicted very well. As long as you keep writing, you will definitely get a high score. Come on, don't give up [Read carefully]
Can look forward to
Hopefully I'll end by saying, this is a really good story.
Pay attention to the paragraphs. Some of the first few chapters are not divided into paragraphs. They are so long that I have no desire to read them. They are well written.
Dear author, please break down some paragraphs from the first few chapters, Qiuli Gao🙏🏻, and,,, can it be changed to...
The bird pecked the cow's butt
What a damn knife! I hope it's not so sharp!
I almost cried when I read it at the beginning. I just want to say that the author is so awesome [cool]
It's so beautiful. It's the first Pony to be put on my bookshelf.
Another special Xiao Mawen story, and a new character appears. This one will also have a source of harmony of her own in the future, or will she use her own efforts to create her own slope? What will happen in the future? How will her legend begin? And what opportunities will the magical inscriptions she discovered in that ancient book bring to her? Will she be qualified to become an Alicorn in the future? And what is the name of the princess who left this book? I look forward to more possibilities and creations from the author in the future, please try your best [thinking] [laughing] [like]
The plot is quite good, and the emotions are depicted very well. As long as you keep writing, you will definitely get a high score. Come on, don't give up [Read carefully]
Can look forward to Hopefully I'll end by saying, this is a really good story.
Pay attention to the paragraphs. Some of the first few chapters are not divided into paragraphs. They are so long that I have no desire to read them. They are well written. Dear author, please break down some paragraphs from the first few chapters, Qiuli Gao🙏🏻, and,,, can it be changed to...
The bird pecked the cow's butt
What a damn knife! I hope it's not so sharp!
I almost cried when I read it at the beginning. I just want to say that the author is so awesome [cool]
It's so beautiful. It's the first Pony to be put on my bookshelf.