Arknights: Starting from Being Picked up by the Inner Guard

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First, this book is very good Second, this book is very beautiful Third, this is written by one of my compatriots. It would be too much if I don't give five stars. This is a group of people who need to gain knowledge. Fourth, as a new theme Ark book, I think it is worth recommending The fifth... The fifth personality is activated! !

After reading this length, one of the necessary conditions for each protagonist to become lovable is the courage to take action and the willingness to take responsibility. Cangchuan is brave and resourceful, has a distinctive personality, good combat power and a profound background, which can help him constantly overcome difficulties and obstacles on the road to realizing his ideals and ambitions. He is a relatively standard image of a male protagonist. In terms of the plot, a series of short stories are intertwined with each other, and the battle descriptions are detailed and orderly. The battle of wits is also well controlled, and there is no overall perspective. However, the turning point is really pleasing. I personally think that it is interspersed with the 76 chapters of the main plot of the game. However, as a fan, there is nothing wrong with respecting the original plot or taking advantage of it. The plots of Arknights from Chapter 6 onwards are relatively good. Haiji's production capacity is very high, and he can squeeze out toothpaste for four thousand a day. Since this is a long-running article, I also hope that the author can work more and make more sweets in some of Cangchuan's next adventure stories. In the end, I bought the bear and wolf set and decided to leave it😋

Nice! First, the protagonist... (Make up your own mind Secondly, the writing style......(Make up your own mind) Thirdly, I was bitten by a mosquito while typing and died, so the author has to pay for it [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It is indeed a good book with a very novel angle. It is rare to see the official writing method of Funu standing on Ursus, which can be regarded as a positive image of Ursus.

There are very few novels that start from the perspective of Ursus. The quality is excellent. Although there are still few chapters and there are many things that cannot be fully understood, the future is promising and it is worth reading. Ciallo～(∠ω< )⌒☆

I think the plot of this book is clever, the structure is reasonable, the characters are unique, the story is interesting, the content of the book is superb, and its subject matter is the type I want to read. I think it is a good book for me. Although this book has many advantages, I still think that the author needs further improvement. However, while improving, it can also be slightly revised and polished.

It fits well with the original plot of Porridge. The 60 chapters of the new book are well developed. The shaping and use of the main characters are good. I don't say that I am too focused or neglected on a certain character. I look forward to writing hundreds of pictures in the future and becoming a top fan in Zhou.

The writing is good, but not enough to read. At the same time, it depicts the continent of Terra too beautifully. It is a man-eating continent full of death and parting. I personally think there is too little darkness. It is still acceptable for novice writers. Just write it once. In short, it is very good. Keep up the hard work. If you practice a little and keep at it, I feel like you will get good results.

It's not bad. I almost finished reading more than a hundred chapters in one go. It's very interesting, but I don't know if the protagonist will become a man like Neiwei in the future, or a boy like Zuo Le|･ω･｀) The BOSS version of the protagonist that was promised to the author before is here (definitely not because I am lazy) Anderson Charkov "Black Snow Insider" Melee, ranged, physical, spell. Two points of damage when entering the target point. Weight 10 Health value S Movement speed D Attack power S + attack speed D Defense S, Elemental Resistance E Spell Resistance A+ Damage Resistance E The strong man among the inner guards, the one who merged with the devil, the black and gray snow and ice announced his arrival. Abilities: protective posture ·Does not attack, cannot be blocked, can take damage ·Periodically increase the attack power and defense power of all enemy units currently on the field (up to 3 times) attack stance ·When entering this posture, [Kingdom] will be generated around you. ·Cause huge physical damage to our units in [Kingdom] ·Select one of our units to perform a physical attack. If our unit is knocked down, [Kingdom] will be generated in the four surrounding cells. ·Select one of our units to perform a spell attack. If our unit is knocked down, [Ice] will be left that can be broken. This position cannot be deployed. Note: Some attributes and skills are referenced from the game itself. This is all I can think of at the moment. The rest depends on how the author writes it, and then I will continue to add it.

We demons also need to have our own Suigetsu (Migi [laughing evilly]). I think the protagonist can be the key to solving the problem of demons.

I have imagined having an inner character as the protagonist before. Although this is not the case, I am very much looking forward to it. I am just a little curious about whether there will be a female protagonist [please update]

Establish a destiny for all living beings, aspire for the people of the world, and work hard for the times. Use the reforms within Ursus to find a new way out for the infected. It looks great at the moment, but it is indeed difficult to predict the future path. Should we take it one step at a time, or should we wait and see one step at a time? I hope it won't be like Tsarist Russia...

After reading so many congee fans, this is my favorite one. There is no prophetic perspective of God, no unparalleled fighting power, but just a group of people living on this land for one family and one thought. Peace is joy

It's good-looking, it's good-looking, and it can be considered very good-looking among Arknights fan fiction. Since I finished reading Qi Xiaobai's book, this book and My Mother Is the Goddess of the Sea are the only ones that are good-looking.

Come on, don't pay too much attention to the data before recommending 8w words.

Overall, it is the best of the three books I have read [laughs] and the author's writing style is also good. Of course, I still have to talk about some places [Explore] The 72-hour story of Cassinir's Order was written from chapter 170 to chapter 248. It was a bit too sloppy [I almost cried] The subsequent encounter with Rusty Hammer was also written inexplicably. After being surrounded, it didn't even matter how strong my combat power was. I forgot that I could strike first and threaten, but as a result, my vehicle was destroyed while watching the movie [Petrochemical]. It gave me the feeling that the protagonist is still a child and does not have the IQ of an adult at all [I'm about to cry] The main plot is still far away [crying] I hope it won't stop updating, and keep working hard!

It's a very good book. The protagonist puts the readers into the perspective that most of them have never seen before.

Don't ask, just two words, "Honorable", show them all to me

It looks great, the updates are stable, and the combat is very exciting! (50 Cents each) [laughing evilly] A very good book, updated faster than other Ark novels, which makes me want to read Winter in the Wall every day [sneaky laugh]

Perfect, beautiful, I want to lock the author in a dark room and let him code

This book is acceptable. The protagonist travels through time but does not know the plot and has no system. He is powerful, but not invincible. The previous chapters do not follow the plot. The current progress is still 5 years away from the main line and three years away from Theresa's assassination. It is now eleven o'clock in the evening on August 11th. Overall, it's good and worth watching. I'm looking forward to the story about Rhodes Island. This is the first impression. For more information about the identity of the protagonist, please read the text. (The following is epileptic content) Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? Hello? I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! I Love You!!! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Hello? Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Hello? Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship! Ancient worship!

Very good novel, made me spin 360 degrees

There are so many talented people in the comment section and they speak nicely. I really like it.

The boat and the people share the same stone, the sentient beings fight against each other, the heaven and the earth fight against each other, and the author has eight buckets for himself!

The strength of this book is almost on the same level as the previous ones, but it is still weak. The author's writing is very good. I have read more than 100 chapters so far. If it is a long-distance race, it has the strength to compete with Iron and Blood, but that one is mainly on the side of the mother-in-law, so five stars are given [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Of course there are some problems, but the second creation is to have a different plot, and the style is very fresh.

It can be seen that the author is very serious about writing the story. It also respects the world view and characters, and there is nothing particularly strange or blunt about the plot. Based on these two points alone, I am willing to give it full marks. The first problem is that I feel that some parts are still too watery, which cannot be said to be watery, that is to say, there are a lot of things talked about, but very little information is obtained. There is also our little white bear Cangchuan. It can be seen that he is very open-minded to ask for advice, but he rarely expresses what he does when he is just listening to others. Although it can be felt that the author wants to write more group portraits, but so far, some plots are relatively dull, and there are still relatively few shining points that can be remembered. The second one can be said to be the biggest problem of the whole book. Some of the previous chapters contain multiple words, typos, omissions, repetitions and unintelligible sentences (of course some sentences cannot be read clearly, maybe because I am not on the radio). This is very uncomfortable. This book attracted me very much when I read the introduction, and There were many good reviews, and I thought it was a very thoughtful book. However, when I read it, I found that it was not particularly gripping, at least in the early stages, which led me to save it after reading part of it and never read it again. Later, when I ran out of books to read, I turned back to read it, and then I really felt that the author had put a lot of thought into it. The following is my personal opinion. It is just a small suggestion. There is no need to take it too seriously. It is better for the author to write according to his own ideas. It feels like it can increase some communication and interaction with the characters of the original work. After all, quite a few people know the characters and stories of the original work, which makes it more immersive, and there is no need to spend a lot of pen and ink to create new characters. In the same way, some plots related to the original story can be added. This does not mean that it is written according to the original story. For example, the part where the doctor is sent to the stone hall is very interesting to me, but it is a pity that I was not able to confess to the old cat in the end. Then I feel like we can add part of the plot of the original inner guard's execution of internal maggots. After all, I feel that the current inner guard is too humane and the little white bear is a very lovable and cute image. It makes me want to touch his ears. I can add some of this plot to create an image of gentleness towards the inside and cruelty to the enemy. Also, please let the big sister bully the little white bear more. I will do anything as long as I see the big sister touching her ears. I have eaten his little ears more than once.

Large flocks... Need nutrients... Haiji... Go and add more...

The author is super active, please give me a five-star review first.

It looks good, I look forward to the follow-up plot.