One Piece: The Heavens Begin with Beating Zephyr to a Pulp

Just because I kill Xiaoba and don't give Lei Li any face, I'll give you five stars.

Okay, okay, the plot is quick and doesn't drag on! Take decisive action! And it's not like there are multiple heroines! Fine

It's great. I love watching pirates. I'm impressed the most.

It's okay, keep it up, keep going.

Let's look at it again. I always feel like you'll feel aggrieved when you fight Doflamingo in the next few pictures, and isn't the female subordinate in the last two pictures too stupid? To know your definition is cool

It's not bad, but it overpowers the protagonist a bit. It can be seen that it's trying to get to the main plot, but it feels too unnatural. Generally speaking, you can read it, but I won't know about it later. The main body of this book has not been fully developed yet. Keeping the quality at 🍅above 9 is not a problem. The finale is really beautiful 🍉

This is a novel without a heroine.

Come on, well written

Fortunately, the description of the combat characters is quite good.

Not bad, I was attracted by the introduced Daxia. The style and presentation of pig's feet are good. The plot will be updated. If possible, be more Daxia style. Simplicity does not castrate system capabilities to delay the plot. Hurry up and kick off the show and become stronger