Invincibility Starts from the Thirteenth Realm Sword Immortal

How can I put it this way? The story can only be said to be okay, but the writing is pretty good.

It's so beautiful that I almost puke when I see it.

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work

The writing is okay. Isn't the rhythm just your own arrangement? There's no need to worry, as long as it expresses the story better, it doesn't matter if it's faster or slower. Grasping the core is the key. You can look at the works of Howling Wind, there are some things you can learn from. It's just my humble opinion and doesn't mean any guidance [laughs]

It's a purely enjoyable article. The ones I've been reading recently are short articles that basically end in a hurry. However, this book has a beginning and an end, and has a complete main tone. The witty language also makes the whole book more relaxed, and the characterizations are also more distinct. Although some characters seem to have shadows of old friends from other stories, they are worth reading.

It's quite good. It's a bland, slow-paced book. The writing is okay, the protagonist is free of charge, and it's quite comfortable to read.

It's pretty good-looking, the main character is decent, and the heroine likes it too

Based on my current experience, this is a rare good book. It should be one of the best books I have read on Tomato for so long. The only bad thing is that the good books are relatively short.

It's a very good book. I like it very much. I strongly support it.

Damn it, I have kept this book on my bookshelf for more than a month. I always thought it was a Jianlai fanfic when I saw the cover. But after reading eight chapters, I felt something was wrong after reading the later chapters. I went back to the first chapter and one commentator said it was not Jianlai. I fainted, hahahahaha 🤣

It's very good. I enjoyed reading it. I think this book has at least an 8.5 Rating. Don't be too smart and just read it as a purely enjoyable book. It's not bad - decisive in killing. Chapter 40 is a bit toxic, please be careful, I suggest you skip it! Chapter 52 is slightly toxic, it's not a big problem, I can still read it! There are five poisons at the back, and they look great! It is recommended to update as soon as possible! ! ! I think it should have at least a 9.1 Score! ! !

I saw the contents of many other books, which are paragraph by paragraph. I changed them a little and applied them [laughing and crying]

It's a very good novel. It's very interesting. After reading too many Tomato novels, I have a very special feeling when I read it again, just like when I first read the novel.

I finished reading it in one go. Although many of it is imitation, the writing style is really rare to see such a good-looking book on Tomato. It is not a flowing text and has emotional lines, but there are too many knives. If you don't open the comment, you will be afraid of another knives. Give it five stars. [Laughing] But in the future, it's really pitiful that all my relatives are dead. Give me a five-star recommendation and give it a thumbs up to the author.

It's more casual and the plot doesn't have many ups and downs.

How many realms can a pig's trotters defeat Confucianism?

It's well written. There are many jokes in it that are very down-to-earth.

Very good. The protagonist follows his heart. The plot is rigorous. The author is skilled in writing. It is worth recommending. The disadvantage is that there are too few updates.

I hope there won't be any stabbing in the back

When issuing a knife, please remember that although I have no great use, I still have some spare money, and my large army is not at a disadvantage.

Okay, not bad [thinking]

Personally I feel pretty good

Good looking, good luck to the author

It seems okay. I can take a look.

The protagonist really looks like Chen Jiu

It's beautiful, come on, come on, come on!

It looks good and the writing is very good. Come on!

If you don't give this five stars, why should you give it five stars?

The author gives a thumbs up

I have been stabbed several times. I hope the next book will also be of high quality.